Lord of the Mysteries: Shadow of Order

Promotion is too slow, why? Why is the Mystery series so slow? It makes me feel even slower than when I watched Lord of Mysteries. I summed it up, that is, most Lord of Mysteries fans know too much, which makes them always exposed to many big events, so they have been skipping challenges. However, too many skipping challenges have not allowed Pigfoot to gain too much benefit. Even the degree of acting has not increased much, and many novels are not even described in detail. Most of them are written too much. When the protagonist needs to be promoted, the acting is almost enough. I can't feel the growth of the pig's feet, but I don't want to think about the original work. Every time Klein's growth is very reasonable, even the digestion of every time he plays is very comfortable and very It feels comfortable, and you get promoted when you need to be promoted, instead of describing too many other stories. It makes sense that you can be promoted logically, but you always don't mention this aspect, so that you don't feel the tension in this aspect. It seems that you are not in a hurry to be promoted and just wait slowly. Klein often thinks about the next level and things, which makes you feel that he has been growing. , He is working hard to get promoted, but most of the fan protagonists have been thinking about how to get involved in unnecessary things. Even if they can't be connected, there will be various coincidences that involve the protagonist. In the end, except for a spin, nothing is gained. Even the so-called mood improvement is perfunctory, pretending to be unhappy, upgrading is not happy, and even the story is not good.

I hope the author will not write the protagonist so lickingly at Klein, licking the original Xio and Forsi. This is what I hate the most about fanfics. They give money, channels, and materials to others. Of course, this book does not have this situation. In addition, I hope that the century view of Lord of Mysteries can be more cold, violent and selfish. I am timid and hesitant and I don't like to read it. As long as the bottom line is not touched, Klein will not care about your little thoughts. He must seek the best interests for himself without touching the bottom line. It's more fun to watch this way. 🤓

I also prefer that the protagonist becomes the Black Emperor, and he doesn't necessarily have to save Huang Tao. Mysterious fans feel that they have to save him in the end, and the goddess ignores him.

I hope the author can grasp the rhythm of improving the protagonist sequence! The reader's book was still at Sequence 6 after hundreds of chapters, and the Hunter's was still at Sequence 7 after hundreds of chapters 😥. The sequence upgrade is too slow. Unless there is a big lag in the later stages, it will definitely not be able to keep up with the events that Klein experienced!

The writing of this book is good, but it is not good-looking. There are two key points: 1. It is not exciting at all, and it lasts until the end. Maybe young writers feel ashamed to write exciting articles, but this is exactly what needs to be written about the emotional ups and downs of characters. All literary works are essentially about writing about people 2. The protagonist is a lawyer In this way, I have learned too many fortune-teller practices from Xiao Ke, which may not necessarily be suitable for the protagonist. Moreover, while being stubborn, he does not have enough rational calculations. On the contrary, he is sometimes very stupid, doing big things at the expense of his own life, and forgetting his life for small profits So the author has writing skills, but cannot write online articles. It is as simple as that.

Write down your own thoughts. The author's writing is very good. It can be said to be one of the best mysterious fan stories I have ever seen, but there are a few bugs... 1. Bethel should know that Tamara's ancestor is the favored one of the Uncertain Mist, and Tamara's ancestor was initially a judge, but in the end he crossed paths and switched to the door path! ! ! He is finally a Sequence 2 Planeswalker... You can see this on the Squid official account (turn to the bottom to ask questions from readers, Squid will sometimes answer) Tamara is not a Sequence 1 Judger, nor was he persecuted by the Night Emperor! ! ! 😅 2. The Tamara family is a subsidiary family of the Abraham family, and they have been married very early... This is probably how the planeswalker potion of Tamara's ancestors came from. They may have been married during the Solomon Empire... (This is a personal speculation) Other than this, there are really no bugs like other mysterious fan fictions Some interesting answers 1 Mr. Azik was born as a snake cub (Quatted Serpent) 2 Sasriel is the most beautiful form of white creation The clone 3 Bai Zao may have other clones (Squid hesitated when asked this question in the interview!!!) 4 Leonard's life experience may have a secret (Squid also hesitated when asked this question in the interview!!!) Interesting speculation 1 Ian Wright may be a descendant of the Night Emperor Trunsoest.

What is the author doing? Other protagonists are pretending to be pigs because they are weak and have no foundation. Their talents are too strong and will be destroyed by Lin Feng. The protagonist is already the king of angels and the king of two countries. What are you afraid of by trying so hard to hide and pretend to be weak? How can your group of ministers, common people, and those in the Tarot Club give you a Sequence 1 king who is so terrifying that he cannot be kept? It could have been explained that in order to prevent mysterious results, the author added a sentence at the end that the existence of the protagonist is not a secret to the gods. Just keep pretending to be weak and hide yourself from those who are not a threat to you, while the gods who can kill you are in full view of you? Speechless

To be honest, the author's understanding of some parts of the original work feels wrong. For example, the most direct one is the number of extraordinary people. There are thousands of extraordinary people in a family... Regardless of the sequence, this number is far out of proportion. You must know that the Church of the Night is the Church of True God and one of the leaders in the Loen area, but it is considered a big one in Tingen. There is only one team of less than ten Beyonders in big cities, and those who are in charge of daily affairs are Sequence Seven (the original text also has Sequence Seven who can be regarded as a bishop). Only in very important capital cities such as Backlund, the Church of the Night has more Beyonders, but there are only a few teams that have been raised to the level of Archbishop St. Anthony Stevenson, who is in charge of Sequence Three. What the cities below cannot handle are the nearby Extraordinary teams from the big cities to support each other or the Holy Church to provide airborne assistance. The number of teams like the Red Gloves that handle high-risk Extraordinary incidents is quite limited. If there are no churches in villages and towns, there will be no official Church of Extraordinaries. I hope the author will really think about it if he writes a next book. Squids are not described as being as numerous as dogs, saints, or angels walking all over the ground. There is no such description in any article. In my concept, a big family with hundreds of Extraordinaries, one or two angels, and several saints is already a force at the national pillar level. In the original book, no church or force has ever produced more than twenty or thirty saints... And Cuttlefish has long confessed to the Archbishop, Senior Deacon and other high-level leaders of the Church of the Night who are larger than twenty-two. It is equal to less than half of the Sequence Four. The only people who have said that they are or may be Sequence Two angels are the Pope of the Tranquility Church in Winter County, Arianna, the first candidate for the Pope, Abbot Arianna of the Night Monastery, and St. Samuel, the former Archbishop of Backlund, gone... So it is unreasonable to have a family of thousands of Extraordinaries. If it is bigger, I think four or five hundred are enough.

In fact, I am more inclined to the protagonist becoming a god. Even if he is the Black Emperor, it doesn't matter. Why can't Huang Tao be allowed to become a god if he is the Black Emperor? Moreover, Huang Tao was originally a forced jump and was contaminated by the Mother Goddess. Will he be able to return to normal after his resurrection (I don't remember if it is possible)? The key is that I think that when Klein prevented George III from becoming a god, on the one hand he received a commission from Bernardi, and on the other hand, it was George III who brought misfortune to the people for the ceremony of becoming a god. Of course, Huang Tao's help to Klein in the early stage was not to let him die (but I think Huang Tao's help was not subjective In a sense, he only wrote a diary to record his life, which coincidentally helped Klein. Of course, the help of his diary to Klein cannot be denied), so as long as the protagonist can do better than Huang Tao on the path of the Black Emperor, I also support him, even if Huang Tao dies, it doesn't matter. (Actually, he was almost dead. After he was contaminated, everyone gave up on him.) Of course, it's good that he can live. As long as the author can create logically based on the original work, it's fine. Support the author 😁😁😁😁

Basic requirements for the protagonist: You must make people feel that he is real, that he has his own interests, his own consciousness, and his own way of doing things. Otherwise, what you write is just a tool man.