I Am Xianfan

To be honest, this book is a piece of shit compared to Zifu Immortal Yuan. The Immortal Palace is still unfinished. I couldn't stand it after reading the early stages of this book. A Chou is a first-class master and my sister is still in a brothel. She doesn't have much money on her. How many masters are there in one county? There is also a protagonist who steals a pen and then sets his shop on fire. It is both serious and disgusting at the same time. If you don't know how to write about family, don't write about it. There are many orphans in the starting point, and you are the best. I feel that Baili Xi didn't prepare an outline at all.

This book can only be read without thinking. The numbers and logic are too confusing and contradictory. When it came to cultivating immortality, the author did not dare to write down specific numerical values. How many people are there in a sect? (In the later period, the Spirit Island Alliance had a million-strong army, and there were millions of people going to fight. What is the base number? It must be at least tens of millions! Penglai recommends two hundred places to compete for the mysterious spiritual fruit, that is two hundred golden elixirs. Five sects have one thousand golden elixirs. Dozens of small immortal sects? How many people are two hundred, big or small? I'll give you fifty, dozens are also counted as fifty, Fifty times fifty, a total of 3,500 golden elixirs. The other tens of millions are for cultivating Qi to build the foundation. Isn't it rare to give up a bowl of Qi-building elixir? How many people can I have for a million-year-old spiritual elixir? In a country where the protagonist has refined his Qi, he actually becomes a god? The emperor said that he had never seen a god, and he wanted to invite him back to be a national advisor. The emperor has never seen how many immortal cultivators there are in one country. The fairy city is located deep in the mountains and old forests. No one in the world has heard of it. It's quite big? (Cultivation of immortals and mortals are mortals. I have never heard of such a harmonious relationship.) Spiritual rice is quite rare, and most people can only eat a bowl of it in a few days. (You can refine your qi after eating rice. I have practiced as a master for decades in vain). Is it possible to wash the Marrow Cleansing Pill to the top grade? (Anyone in the back has millions of spirit stones, but everyone in the family is 100% top-grade?) Everyone in Xiaoyaoyou knows that no one practices it? (Aren't all the spies who have made dozens of golden elixirs? Who will trust you when you control the spirit turtle?) If you think about it, you will know that the author is too confused and no one dares to give the values. They all just got through. . . . . .

After looking at the author's profile, I discovered that Bailixi's label turned out to be a great god. Are all the great gods from Qidian this year so easy to mess around with? The first book, Zi Fu, was well-written but ended inexplicably. The subsequent books were more awkward than the previous ones. Now I have finally read one and I feel that I have come back. Well, it was well-written, but the newer version makes you sick to your stomach and makes you want to vomit. You can't follow it, you can't follow it. The purpose of putting this book on the bookshelf every day is to save me from my obsessive-compulsive disorder and to destroy the formation of a row of red dots updating reminders every day! ! I don't want to watch it, because if you chase it, you will find that it will be more uncomfortable than if you don't chase it. The master who can't even keep up one update a day, 666666... ​​Will make your mentality explode. Put it on your bookshelf and watch it update every few days for fun. If you can't even update once a day, why are you writing online articles? Even God! The so-called explosive update last time almost made me laugh to death. It really refreshed my understanding of explosive updates😅😅

The writing is so bad, it can be seen that the author has put in the effort, but the writing style is too poor, which makes the overall foreshadowing of the article confusing, and the character description is too shallow. The typical tiger painting cannot be compared to the dog.

It started off poorly, with a cliched plot. The only bright spot is spending money to buy 10 million recommendation votes.

Let's not talk about how bad the author was before. Eunuch. Everyone can tolerate it. One update every day, even if we can't bear it. This is a loss of two hundred cards. The writing is still exciting. Thrilling. As it is written, the character of Chou is quite distinct. It is still possible to worship the master of Jindan. Later, I directly joined some alliance. If the sect of master and brother is not mentioned directly, what kind of avatar should be written directly? The turtle's clone, the Kunpeng's clone. Is it possible that the ancestor is blind for so many reasons? I can't tell you are a clone of Jin Dan. Moreover, the clone of Jin Dan still has such great power. Damn, this is too much bullshit, I really can't stand it. There is no logical thinking, it is just nonsense. There is no connection between the front and back, just like A Mortal's Journey to Immortality, but you should at least have some logical thinking. It's time to say, this is an online game, this is an online novel, don't care too much. But what you wrote has no logic at all. How can you write blindly? There must be a limit to bragging. Alas, I can't stand it anymore anyway. The more I watch it, the less I can stand it.

This book is very poisonous 🥵🥵 and is not recommended to be read.

The author often uses idioms indiscriminately. A novel about cultivating immortals should mess with history and not make up stories of its own. **After almost a hundred chapters, it's still unqualified nonsense. This book is poisonous and highly poisonous. I have officially abandoned the book.

The beginning chapter was okay... But it failed one after another! Why……! ! !

The design of the protagonist is not very good. He is pure and stoic. Before painting the god, he should have done with Anu and had a baby along the way, so that he would look interesting.

The first and middle parts of this novel are pretty good. It breaks out of the author's own mold and exceeds the standards of most fairy tales. But starting from the time I arrived in Beiming Continent, I started to have a bad style of mindless pretentiousness. The writing, plot, and ideas are far inferior to the previous ones. Maybe it's because I wanted to break the news and didn't have much time to think.

The writing was okay at the beginning, but the journey of cultivating immortality was startling at every step. After reaching the pill formation, it became chaotic and illogical. A turtle demon said that he wanted to escape from his lair. I went back immediately and met the Yuanying stage turtle demon. It was really inconsistent. There was also the Jindan stage who attacked the Yuanying stage demon cultivator and beat him to death. It was so worthless and increasingly illogical. It was much worse than a mortal.

Personally, I feel that the author is the best at writing about the Qi training stage. Later, the foundation building stage and the pill formation stage are getting worse and worse, and the pace is getting faster and faster, making it impossible to read.

It's a pity. The previous writing was very good, but it started to change after accidentally stealing the fairy book. After each author writes a book, do you want to read it yourself?

It's so wonderfully written! I'm looking forward to the following plot! Baili must write to chapter 3000! Come on update!

Although there are some flaws, they do not hide the flaws. It would be nice to have more updates.

This novel is a good start, especially the martial arts part. Maybe the author will try martial arts in the next novel.

I gave up after reading the chapter "Red Dust". I feel that the author is not the kind of person who writes novels for the first time. He can describe everything in writing. However, the content always feels so confusing. The plot does not connect with each other, there is no outstanding main line, it is a mess, and the environment is not explained well.

To beat you all, I only need a clone

The writing is not bad. I voted for the author Jun Bailixi with a monthly vote to support the author... But I feel that the protagonist in the book reaches the transformation stage and upgrades very quickly 😁😁😁

Ready to get into the trap, do you guys think it's good after watching it?

Amnesia is too much for him. Damn it.

I have read a few chapters of the book, and you can also read my personal opinions. Let's not talk about the content, but the comments are interesting. Other book reviews have criticized the author, refuted, and criticized the author. Some authors have also read book reviews and crowdfunded articles. This book is actually very rare for book reviewers to reason with the author 😁😁😁

The stingy protagonist is about to turn into a god and leave the human world. Although your master didn't teach you much, it is clear in the book that the protagonist wants to run around on his own, but the master's wife originally wanted to get married to you and marry the master's daughter! I'll give you three treasures, Gold-eating Insect I'm leaving the human world soon, so I'll give the master 9 fruits that increase the probability of forming a pill, and 1 liquid that increases the probability of forming a baby. The protagonist will have a lot of them in a matter of minutes. To say that the protagonist is indifferent is an exaggeration. If you are reduced to writing about your son-in-law and your grades are not good, it must be because God is stingy with you! 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

My personal feeling about Baililiu can be described in a limerick He is well versed in human feelings and has good writing skills. The article has some clever ideas and few flaws. Keep a low profile and be cautious, don't pretend to be B I would rather be missing than die and often be ridiculed

There are more than 100,000 disciples in the Qi Refining Stage, and there are more than thousands of foundation-building monks who are formal disciples. There are about a hundred Jindan monks As a large sect of ten thousand years, the personnel structure should be relatively stable. Foundation Establishment Monk estimates are based on the maximum number of 10,000. The life span of a foundation-building monk is 200 years. Regardless of the accidental death during the process, the 50 new people added every year are just the right balance. Considering that half of them died unexpectedly midway, 100 new people will be added every year. This requires at least 100 Foundation Establishment Pills.

"Recipe for the foundation-building pill: the main medicine is one millennium-old elixir 'Chalcedony Zhizhi'. Five five-hundred-year-old 'Heavenly Spirit Fruit, Ice Snow Lotus, Snake Off Flower...' And so on. Twenty two-hundred-year-old herbs 'Blood Crystal Grass, Earth Fire Lotus...'. From this recipe, you can make a furnace of Foundation-Building Pills, ten in total. Five hundred years of spiritual grass is probably worth three thousand to five thousand spiritual stones. Five plants are worth about 20,000 spiritual stones. Two-hundred-year-old spirit grass is worth about a thousand spirit stones, and 20 plants are worth about 20,000 spirit stones. A thousand-year elixir, an ordinary one should be worth more than 10,000 spirit stones, but Chalcedony Mushroom is special and should be worth at least 20,000 to 30,000 spirit stones. In this case, the cost of the medicinal materials alone would be at least 70,000. Including other costs, it can be estimated at 100,000. When the alchemy master takes action, the elixir success rate is calculated as 50%. Five can be produced. In this case, the original cost of the Foundation Establishment Pill is about 20,000. However, due to the extreme shortage of Foundation Establishment Pills, if there is a market price, it should be between 30,000 and 100,000.

After reading for a long time, Su Chen, who was affectionate and righteous, just couldn't remember to look at his parents. Nowadays, the fairy tales often end the relationship, and the parents no longer love each other. It feels like selfishness. I still prefer tomatoes. They look humane.

I don't want to read anymore after reading the free chapter. They all help a woman to cultivate immortality, but they don't even help their own family members. It's not like they are relatives separated by several generations, they are all biological parents and siblings. In the early stage, I was forced to sell pig's feet because of reality. He also wrote about how his parents paid so much to treat pig's feet when he was a child. You could just write about heartless and unjust parents. In the later period, I couldn't even think of my home for such a long time. It's so heartless and unjust. Thinking of helping me, I didn't even meet him to change my life. The family doesn't care at all.

I'll support you with one month's salary. I hope the updates will be more stable. The book is quite nice 🙂