The Myriad Worlds Wasteland Excavation Game

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It's a showdown, I don't want to be a salty fish anymore. New book issue: 1,000 recommendation and one more chapter 100 monthly tickets and one more chapter 100 yuan of tips accumulated and one more chapter (my own tips do not count.) Return after it is recorded and released! Okay, setting such a high requirement is because I don't want to add more updates 😃

1. Oral addiction problem. I have talked about this several times in this chapter. When writing a book, it will be fatal if the words and sentences are not smooth or uncomfortable to read. The biggest problem of the author is that he often doesn't notice some very disgusting oral habits, such as: "Makuya heard it, (that is) he directly picked up the shovel to dig, and dug two or three meters. The shovel (actually) hit a hard object. Makuya (was also) shocked, it was shipped so quickly, he dropped the shovel (that is) and bent down to pick it up." I am making myself sick while typing (~_~;). There are an average of five or six sentences like this in each chapter. I was originally a person who read books very seriously, but I was forced to read The Crimson Lord without my eyes. 2. Main line problem. The author always feels that book lovers can't read it because the main plot has not been developed, but this is not the case. We just feel that you have not updated enough. In fact, the three or two branches are very short, but in fact we have been chasing these three or two branches for four to five days or even longer. This causes book lovers to feel that the content is very loose. It's a problem with your update, not a mainline problem at all. If you write the main plot to advance a little bit in seven or eight days, we still feel it is too loose. And the main line is actually very difficult to control. If you don't write the main plot from beginning to end, it doesn't mean you can't write it. In other words, it should be called the plot pushing the characters. The most typical example is "Da Feng Watchman". However, if you start the main plot rashly, it will easily lead to a monotonous plot, or the branch plots will not be able to be wrapped up, making it very confusing. Another point is that if you set a goal casually, it is actually easy to dissuade some people. The protagonist in the article just wants to return to the real world, but in fact, few people like to read this kind of return. There are many books that collapsed as soon as the return was written. For example, Tai Shang Bu Yi Dao Dao, the Tuhai novel "The Strongest Anti-Routine System", saw a decline in performance when the return was written. Although this is your ultimate goal, it is very alienating once it is laid out. When we read your book, what we want to read is the story of wasteland mining. 3. Details. This book actually has an online IQ. It sets the protagonists as mental patients, and it also solves some unreasonable aspects very well. But some details were not taken care of. For example, Xu Tian guessed that there was a monster in the protagonist's house, but in the end he chose to remain silent and not go into details. In fact, it is understandable if you read carefully. However, the reason and mental journey are not written out at all, so it is very stiff and has a feeling of being intellectually subdued. Also, Liming saw that the protagonist had made the powerful bald head disappear, and he just asked a few cursory questions and that was it. Although everyone knows that it may be a corrupt substance, but it is related to the survival of the Black City, shouldn't we ask more details, what if there are any hidden dangers that have been dealt with? Details like this still need to be polished. I have been a bookworm for eight years, and my taste is very good. Your book is really interesting, so I can tolerate these problems, and I hope the author will continue to work hard (●°u°●)​" Edit Why not add more details, I gave the full set of pictures (っ╥╯╰╥c)

Imaginary author, actual author

I read the first chapter,,, goodbye

... Can you suggest revising the first chapter? Can you please stop being so speechless? Will it kill someone if the protagonist follows him? It happened that the protagonist ran away and complained after seeing it, and then almost died before being rescued. I was really speechless.

Dare you start a new book after it's finished? Castrated

The protagonist has traveled through time, right? He didn't even know that it was Saitama who exercised his bald head so much! Saitama! Saitama! Saitama

I am a reader of easy-going novels, and this one was recommended to me inexplicably, and it was told how similar it was. However, after reading Chapter 13, I had to die three times. If the mining in the middle was not interesting, I would not want to read it now. There are more plots like this. Old bookworms rarely come to read it. You can tell what is going on by reading the comments.

Can rewards and collections be added for all orders?