Lord of Ashes and Divinity

If you want to read this novel, read here first to avoid wasting time and energy! This novel is really amazing. It is an exquisite piece of rubbish. It is wordy, repetitive, and the content is dry. Let me describe it this way. Let me give you an easy-to-understand example: Other books will rarely write about the protagonist going to the toilet, but this book will not only write about it, but also go into detail. For example, why the protagonist needs to go to the toilet, where to go to the toilet, and then extend the history of the toilet, and then the main theme. When the character enters the toilet, I write about how the protagonist chooses an empty space and what the details are. Then I write about how the protagonist takes off his pants, and also extends the taste of the protagonist's pants. Then the highlight comes, how the protagonist releases the water, how long it takes to release the water, how many milliliters of water is released, and what the color is. At the end, the protagonist makes another sultry comment, and then assumes how long it will take to hold a meeting, and how many times it will take to release the water. It's over. The whole incident of the protagonist going to the toilet could have been mentioned in this sentence, but the author could have written 20 chapters. I patiently read nearly a hundred chapters without remembering any of the plot. The character data panel, skill descriptions, and monster hunting and unboxing were all copied and pasted. The data was very detailed. How many monsters the protagonist defeated, what kind of monsters they were, how many points each monster had, and how many points the protagonist upgraded to each level. All these were calculated, really! Real! There is no need to write this! ! Author, are you made of water? Before you become an author and write a book, you should have read a lot of novels. Have you seen other authors write books like this? Can you read the book you wrote yourself? How did your innocent hands knock out such a piece of garbage? I have been reading books for seven or eight years, and I have never seen anyone so perfunctory as you!

Too watery, too much nonsense, which seriously affects the reading experience. I often need to skip some useless nonsense, thinking that the paid chapters will change, but it turns out that it doesn't. Author, your way of writing makes it difficult for people to want to read the original version. I feel that more than half of the content I paid to subscribe to is useless nonsense, that is, a thing that has been mentioned before will come back and forth, mentioned over and over again, and then it will be repeated. It feels really annoying to use the data to make up the word count. The content that was originally only a few dozen chapters feels like it has been watered down to more than 200 chapters. It seems that I have gained more subscription money through water filling, but I feel that I may have made less money because many people may not read the original version.

High EQ: The author's writing is good and the details are well described Low EQ: Water 🙂

Everything else is fine, but it's too watery.

This is the most ridiculous book I have ever read. I testify with my 25 years of book experience.

Written in front, this is Pacific grade water. In my impression, it can be compared to Emperor Ba.

This is the most ridiculous novel I have ever read. Each chapter introduces an equipment attribute and then disappears. A copy that can be completed in three chapters has to be completed in twenty chapters. The full text is more interesting in reality, but in reality it is only one-tenth. I fell asleep many times while reading it. Two-thirds of the book is just water 😐

The novel is well written, but it is too watery. One-third of the more than 2 million words in the book is watery.

It's an eye-opener. It's the first time I've seen such a good book. I can paste and copy two chapters in the property panel. You're really 6

A fairly interesting and humorous stand-alone novel