The Young Emperor’s Growth Plan

The writing is good, but I disagree with the plot logic. The author wants to create an image of a mature and rational politician, separate from Shuangwen, who kills without thinking, and his intention is excellent. But the situation shown in your plot is so serious. In the face of a life-and-death feud, instead of desperately taking away the gang of regicide ministers, you still sit back and wait to be puppets, thinking about their insignificant growth. If this wasn't the protagonist, he would have died suddenly and inexplicably. The former young emperor was killed even if he said a wrong word. What's more, the ministers murdered you once, aren't they afraid? As long as the emperor is still alive, they will be like a stick in their throats. There is simply no room for change in the opposition between the two. If I were Zhou Bo and Chen Ping, and I still had the power to put the emperor under house arrest, I would definitely kill him first, because it is obvious that if you let the emperor go, he will not let you go.

It's been 11 hours, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this

I thought it was Young Emperor Liu Bian, but I didn't expect it was that unlucky boy.

Liu Hong (January 1, 195 BC - November 14, 169 BC) was originally named Liu Shan. He used to be named Liu Yi and called himself Hongxing Erke. The son of Han Hui Emperor Liu Ying, the fourth emperor of the Western Han Dynasty. A native of Chang'an County, Jingzhao County. An outstanding statesman and military strategist in Chinese history. Posthumous title: Emperor Xiaoren Main achievements: Re-established a centralized and stable structural system Constructed several national-level water conservancy projects and nearly a thousand local-level water conservancy projects Reunified the standards for measuring finance and other disciplines Qualified the feudal rebellion internally and dealt with the Opening up borders and expanding territory Building a new education system with diversity and equality etc. etc. Ula Bala It laid a solid foundation for future generations to open up people's wisdom and broaden their horizons to strengthen the connection between the Central Plains and Central Asia and West Asia, thus entering the era of great physical discoveries on land and sea. He has made outstanding contributions to the development of the Han nation and the spread of Han (Chinese) culture. On April 28, the first year of Han Gaohou (187 BC), Liu Shan was granted the title of Marquis of Xiangcheng. In July of the second year after Han Gao (186 BC), after the death of Liu Buyi, the king of Changshan, Liu Shan took over the title of King of Changshan on July 27th and changed his name to Liu Yi. On May 11th, the fourth year after Han Gao (June 15, 184 BC), Empress Lu ordered Changshan King Liu Yi to succeed to the throne and changed his name to Liu Hong, who was known as Emperor Ren of the Han Dynasty in history. In Chinese history, the second year after the emperor ascended the throne was usually renamed the first year. However, because the Empress Dowager Lv Zhi was in charge of the government, it was not renamed the first year. On August 1, the eighth year after Han Gao (September 180 BC), Empress Lu died. At the same time, Zhou Bo, Chen Ping and others launched a conspiracy to eradicate the power of the Lu family. Under the pressure, the courtiers unanimously believed that Liu Hong, King Liu Tai of Jichuan, King Liu Wu of Huaiyang, and King Liu Chao of Changshan were not the biological sons of Emperor Hui of the Han Dynasty and should be deposed. After the courtiers selected Liu Heng, the son of Han Gaozu and his concubine Bo, as the new emperor, they welcomed him to Chang'an. On November 14, the eighth year after Han Gao (180 BC), he wanted to kill Emperor Xiaoren and others. Fortunately, he was spared by God's blessing, and later he was saved. The eunuch Wang Zhong, Northern Army Sima Qin Mu, Anguo Wuhou Wangling, Quchenghou Chongda, Jipuhou Chaiwu and others helped to stabilize the court during the crisis. From then on began the beginning of his legendary career. … Renmo flourished in Emperor Xiaoren. The well-known bricklayers, historians and archaeologists of later generations commented that he was wise and courageous, vowed to achieve meritorious service, and had a broad mind. He was blah, blah, blah, but it was a pity that he had made great changes and did not come out. He was afraid of harming the remaining evildoers, blah blah blah. The achievements created in a short life are like the morning star guiding the direction of progress for thousands of years to come.

First of all, the capital of the Eastern Han Dynasty was in Luoyang, not Chang'an. You need to understand this first before writing a historical novel.

It was a cup of poisonous wine, a favor that the emperor once bestowed upon his ministers. Unexpectedly, one day, his ministers would reward him. He knew the recipe of this poisonous wine clearly, and it was the group of people in front of him who were supposed to be loyal ministers who gave him, the emperor, a decent choice. Listening to them discussing the next heir to the throne, he smiled and drank the poisonous wine with despair. The ministers who were supposed to be noisy saw the emperor holding up the wine glass, and the hall became extremely quiet for a moment, watching the wine glass fall to the ground. The eunuch waiting on the side heard the sound of the wine glass falling to the ground, and suddenly knelt on the ground, wailing loudly, his voice trembling. Seeing that everything was as expected by the ministers, a new round of debate began in the repressed hall, but the sound had not yet sounded. Liu Hong, who was sitting on the throne, opened his eyes, looked at the unbelievable expressions of the people below, and laughed heartily. "Gu, I'm back." …

It's ugly, not pleasant to watch, what's the difference between reading a classical Chinese history book, ah! What you're doing is almost like historical records. Just set up a stall and write novels. It's fun. We're not here to read history books. Wouldn't it be nice to read more exciting articles? I have to watch your torture. You're obviously not an internet writer, okay?

The book is very interesting. I like the rigorous and retro style of writing. It makes me vomit when I read it. The modern style of writing describes the pre-Qin Han Dynasty and it feels very ridiculous. This book is very good so far. I am looking forward to it. Come on, it will be on the shelf and fully ordered.

Is the author a scholar of history? It feels like the author has put a lot of effort into writing historical knowledge, more like popular science articles than novels. He has a poor grasp of the rhythm of the novel, the dialogue between the characters, and the description of the atmosphere. For example, the Battle of Mayi should be a climax, but the result is that the author rambles on, making the rhythm slow and confusing, and there is no sense of expectation for the readers. Logically speaking, such a thoughtful author should be encouraged more, but the long-winded style really irritates readers. I hope the author can think about the areas for improvement.

The author has a problem that he likes to lay out the background, and it is smelly, long and unnutritious. He insists on writing a long novel with a few simple explanations. It was better before, but now it is becoming more and more obvious. The short text does not promote the plot and does not do much, and it is like a popular science article. I have said before that there will definitely be limited exemptions under this situation. It may be a problem. Author, please be more careful. 😅