The Young Emperor’s Growth Plan

The writing is good, but I can't agree with the plot logic. The author's intention to portray a mature and rational politician, separate from mindless, indiscriminate killing in typical wish-fulfillment stories, is excellent. But the situation you've depicted is so dire.

It's been 11 hours already; even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

I thought it was the young Emperor Liu Bian, but it turned out to be that unfortunate child.

Liu Hong (January 1, 195 BC – November 14, 169 BC), originally named Liu Shan, also known as Liu Yi, and styled himself Hongxing Erke, was the son of Emperor Hui of Han (Liu Ying) and the fourth emperor of the Western Han Dynasty. He was from Chang'an County, Jingzhao Commandery. He was an outstanding statesman and military strategist in Chinese history. Posthumous title: Emperor Xiaoren

First of all, the capital of the Eastern Han Dynasty was Luoyang, not Chang'an. Make that clear before writing a historical novel.

It was a cup of poisoned wine, a gift once bestowed by the emperor upon his ministers. Who would have thought that one day, his ministers would bestow it upon him? He knew the recipe for this poisoned wine perfectly well; it was this group of people in front of him, who should have been his trusted advisors, who gave him, the emperor, a dignified choice.

It's awful, unsatisfying to read. What's the difference between this and reading classical Chinese history books? It's practically the Records of the Grand Historian! If you're going to write a novel, at least write something enjoyable. We're not here to read history books. Wouldn't it be better to have some more enjoyable stories? Why do we have to read this torture? This is clearly not a web novel!

The book is great; I love its rigorous and retro writing style. I'm sick of light novels, and this modern writing style describing the pre-Qin and Han dynasties feels very jarring. This book is currently very good; I'm looking forward to it. Keep up the good work, and I'll subscribe to all copies when it's released.

Is the author a historian? It feels like the author put a lot of effort into writing historical facts, making it more like a popular science article than a novel. The author struggles with pacing, dialogue, and atmosphere. For example, the Battle of Mayi, which should have been a climax, was dragged out, resulting in a slow, chaotic pace and failing to provide the reader with any sense of…

The author has a habit of excessively laying out background information, which is often tedious, long, and lacking in substance. What should be a simple explanation in a few sentences is stretched into a lengthy piece. It was somewhat better before, but it's becoming increasingly obvious. It's not really filler text, nor does it significantly advance the plot; it feels like an educational article.