The Twin Dragons of Douluo

You might as well get rid of Douluo and turn it into Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty (

Author, are you doing it just for hobby or for money? Now that I have read your book, it will be sold out.

Hello everyone, I am the author of the book Meng enter Yanhuang. Everyone said that this book is a must-read, but the author himself does not care. The author has written a million-word Douluo fan, but I feel that the writing methods on the market are not interesting. If I want to do it, I will make a big one and overthrow and reconstruct the original work. That will be interesting. As for whether to pounce or not, I dare to write this, so naturally I am not afraid of it. The author would like to ask you, for example, what are the shortcomings of the author's writing style, and what needs to be adjusted in terms of rhythm control. As for this book, it is expected to be completed with 1.5 Million to 2 million words, integrating the entire Douluo system. In terms of setting, the Douluo continent is mainly based on soul rings, the Sun and Moon Continent is based on the main body plus the soul guide system, and there is also a dark continent set by the evil soul master, which is based on the soul system, which will appear later. I just hope that I can get some feedback on the writing style, rhythm, and character arcs, and realize the author's writing growth, so that the new books can be better in the future. In addition, not knowing how to be a eunuch, not being a eunuch, and the time cost of writing this book are not as important as this pen name in the eyes of the author. This is my most cherished pen name, and I can't just abandon it, otherwise I will slap my thigh when I think about it in the future. Please correct me, friends, thank you!

After removing so many poisonous points, I can't imagine what a peerless saint this book has become.

Author, you want to eat up the traffic of Douluo fanfics, but you also don't like the writing style of Douluo fanfics, so you write originality in the name of Douluo fanfics.

After taking a look at the profile, I'm sure it's all over the place.

There is a question. How can you hit someone with a concealed weapon without the Purple Demon Eye? How can you use a poisoned concealed weapon without Xuan Jade Hand? It is better to say that there is one who specializes in the Purple Demon Eye and Xuan Jade Hand, and one who specializes in hidden weapons and ghost shadows. The human inheritance is all matching, and neither one can be used to its maximum strength. This is the biggest poison point in the introduction. If you eliminate other poison points and add the biggest poison point yourself, isn't that also poison 🙂

After reading the introduction, I think it will be very poisonous 🙂 Is there anyone who wants to try Shenlong?

I feel that the existence of the Ice and Fire Eyes is also a huge poisonous point, seriously affecting the balance! In many Douluo fan novels, if the protagonist gets a bunch of resources such as the Ice and Fire Eyes, then I will feel that there is an invincible and exciting story behind it, and I don't want to read it anymore. If the fan author designed Tang San to still get this pile of resources, it would also be a huge poison.

I was just passing by and I was the first to post.