Start a Universe in the Palm of Your Hand

Very good, please improve it

Is this book about to get cold? I paid attention in August, but now it's really hard to describe 😅. Alas╯╰.

I used to read novels for free, but this novel is the first one I plan to fully subscribe to. Can you guys testify?

Let's make a bubble~🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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The writing is very good, and there are no poisonous points so far. Thank you to the author, and I will send you a recommendation vote.

A very good Star Wars novel, very suitable for people who have never been exposed to the stars. The author has a detailed introduction. It's the last bit of the introduction... I suggest the author delete or rewrite it. I just didn't read the content and was almost dismissed by Wudiwen. Please improve it.

Maybe I should weakly gather some battleships ( ✘_✘ )↯

Here I would like to write a book written in the blood of all peoples. When I reached chapter 138, I really couldn't read anymore! To be honest, from the writing and plot to the characterization, the free chapters at the beginning of this novel are really good, and the occasional small flaws are not harmful. I originally thought it could become a classic book. From the outline setting to the specific details, it is almost perfect. I just don't know why. Since I started VIP, the poisonous points have been constantly updated. Each one is more poisonous than the last. If you don't make good use of the plug-ins, it seems like it will kill you if you use them. In the same way, the value of the contribution points to the palm universe becomes more and more exaggerated as it is written. The 0.1 Deduction is terrible. Dozens of contributions are used impulsively as soon as the brain gets excited. I would rather lose them in insignificant places than to use them rationally, just to save the 0.1 Contribution! I forgot about the functions of flash, God's perspective, and storage until later. I was really angry. Some of these words may not be very appropriate, but I just want to vent my emotions. 138 Really couldn't stand it anymore. I subscribed to 100 chapters without hesitation at the beginning of the paid chapters. This was a waste. Having said so much, I just want to say one thing. I hope the author can regroup and start over from VIP, or improve the content before starting a new book, and then set up the outline after VIP, and then write it out well. I also hope that book friends who have read it will support it and click it so that everyone can see it. Those who don't want to see a good work just ruined can give it a thumbs up and achieve the achievement of thousands of people's bloody books. Thank you!

So is the protagonist the Dragon King? After living a prosperous life outside, he then cheated on the heroine and became a love interest, and then secretly built an ancient fleet for three years. Three years later, the protagonist, who was suffering from internal and external troubles, was called a loser, smiled crookedly, and was slapped in the face by the Dragon King?

This is a Star Wars novel with endless potential! ! !

I specially sent you a dollar to say a few words. This is the kind of novel that secretly tortured the protagonist ten years ago. The protagonist's enemies will never simply die. The supporting characters in the novel, especially the supporting female characters, are always cold and goddess-like. Then, the author uses the golden finger to always limit the protagonist's mind. The protagonist will never completely eliminate the danger and always wanders around. To put it simply, this is an urban novel disguised as science fiction.

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This novel has a female protagonist which is a failure

At the beginning, it felt like the potential was endless, but now the potential is limited.

Who wants to see you Zhao Ke being long and Zhao Ke being short every day? Everyone is here for adventure, adventure, and the reorganization of the Titan fleet, right? After building a star ring world, you won't be able to write. You have started to write down the running accounts. How many trillions of bonds have been issued and the territory has been operated for several years. As a result, the strength has increased and there are only a bunch of frigates... What about the Titan fleet? What about the super aircraft carrier fleet? Where?

After reading Chapter 138, I felt that the plot was too sudden. The originally good and normal development rhythm suddenly went awry. The protagonist was suddenly and inexplicably eliminated. The investment and return were not proportional at all. It was a big loss. Anyway, I feel extremely uncomfortable 😣

Congratulations to the author for successfully creating a mentally retarded protagonist

The beginning was really good, but since the base was established, the rhythm has been messed up. The plot is foreshadowed but never reaches a climax. Now it feels like it has become an encyclopedia. You can understand the background and product introductions of the novel, but you can't grasp the rhythm and the introduction is all water. I just came to Landlord Fighting, and I came to Golden Flower again. The plot collapsed and I couldn't write quality content, so I couldn't bear it. I could barely read it with this setting. I was constantly pulling giant structures, losing weapons, and comparing. I thought I could continue to read it as a popular science article. I often described how many comparisons there are in x slots and t slots. I gave it to you as a pure support coin. Now you play description and play cards twice in a row? An entire chapter has no meaning in advancing the plot. The description of the card playing process is dull and stiff in a self-conceited sense of humor. The plot is a bit sincere, but perfunctory and disgusting. Goodbye you

I didn't understand the latest chapter. Both the protagonist and the fleet were glared to death by the Ether Dragon. The disgusting supporting character didn't die and was still following the protagonist. What's the point of keeping him? Expose the protagonist's secret and then lead to a plot where he is besieged by various legion forces and the protagonist pretends to be B?

So far it looks pretty good, keep it up

Excellent pen, it's rare to order two copies. One is to be updated and the other is to be updated 🙂🙂🙂🙂

Okay, I'll delete the book review if I say a few unflattering words. Then I'll write more. The idea of ​​this book is quite new. The niche books in general have too many bugs, but they are not unreadable. But I really don't have the heart to follow you like this. I will delete the book review if I say a few unflattering words. If you have such a small heart, you should not write a book. I guess you also changed to a small one because of the criticism. Goodbye, don't bother me.

I feel like this book has a powerful golden finger, but it doesn't have to be very restrictive, and it's half sadistic and half enjoyable.

You're always a eunuch, I'm so helpless, I can't even believe you

It is simply a fantasy for EVE to have such a large fleet by one person 😭 A frigate costs tens of millions of star coins, and even the most expensive ones are hundreds of millions. Only a legion can organize a fleet of hundreds of thousands

This completely caught people off guard. . .

You could at least write a serious ending! This is too careless!

Did you finish me or did I finish you 😡😡😡

It costs dozens of yuan to read a novel. Spend a few hundred dollars to buy games. . .