Family Cultivation of Immortality: First Lay Down a Plane as the Foundation

The writing is pretty good. Author, don't think about how to make up for some early plots and follow the track of traditional fantasy novels. Can you get past those old guys? Only when you write something unique of your own will people read it. There are many articles about family cultivation of immortality in Qidian. They start from Qi training and 100-card foundation-building ones. There are already too many repetitive works. Some authors have tried your writing method before, but I remember they always cut the book and ran away before reaching 100 chapters. (I forgot the title of the book) Why doesn't it become popular? First, because the writing is not grand enough, and the princes are written like common people. In addition, it is written that if you turn into a branch line and cannot get out, readers will naturally run away if you do not enter the main line for a month. I have always believed that the middle stage of a work is when the author's skills are revealed. The plot in the early stage is too uniform. When you see a chapter title, you can tell which template he will use in the next dozen chapters, and I have no interest in reading it. By writing directly from the mid-term, you can skip the formulaic early stage. Start directly with the mid-term climax to attract readers. In short, I still have to persevere in fantasy writing and set a small goal first to write 1 million words. Come on, author💪

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Sometimes this fight, sometimes that fight, and then there is no development of the plot, it will feel very boring, and people will have no desire to listen anymore. Personal opinion

I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and I still have 11 chapters left to finish. I have a few doubts. You have finished fighting the Canglan world. It has been several decades, right? How many people do you have in your family? What do you think? I was attracted by the title and introduction of your book. It gave me the feeling that if you want to have a family farming, then you need to vigorously cultivate the family, especially the population. At present, you only have a son, a daughter, and a grandson? What kind of plane are you doing? Look at Luo Feng. How big is the population of Chaos City? With your subject matter and background, do you think you are a small family? Slowly develop the population? It must be vigorously developing the population, and then selecting and cultivating the talented ones. It's not that you don't have the land to support it, and it doesn't mean that you need to write about the family's population growth in a large space. You just need to describe it in a few paragraphs every once in a while, right?

It's very interesting, but I don't know why it's so difficult to read. The dyslexia is too great. Maybe there are a lot of bad sentences? There are still too many rare words

Looking at the name, it is a family stream, and I see that there are some signs now. It should be a plot in which different family members are dispatched from many planes in the later stage; In fact, I am not disgusted with the fighting plot at the beginning, but it is a bit too much. The flesh and blood corroding the lower-class natives is a good point to watch, but it does not need to be too detailed and detailed. Choose a city and write down the impact, and then you can quickly skip it. Even if the fighting scene is strong, you can kill multiple times in one stroke, and it must be clean and neat. Author, if you want to write about family history, the time should be accelerated, and the details should be appropriate. Like the previous story about the friendship of two children, and the side story of the changes in the domain after decades, it is very well written. Then the introduction of human society is slowly unfolded, and the overall book is still very good. Then there is the sick sentence I mentioned earlier, or it may not be a sick sentence but the repeated words really affect the perception. In the end, Goldfinger seems not to adapt to the family flow? Or is it not big enough? But it's okay to be small, it's suitable for new authors, just take your time. Finally, all the above problems have a perfect solution, and that is update! Two updates a day is a great product! Three updates a day and top the monthly vote list! Four updates a day and you are the next demon! The premise is to maintain the current rhythm.

I have a few questions ❓ Doesn't this mean developing a family? Why did you take three people and have two children with one person, and then the third generation comes out, and then the people who live with Poria and Yu Zi An are not the same as the younger ones. It's chaotic. There are only three people in more than a hundred chapters. The development of this family is slow.

I'm still raising them, but there are too few, not enough to look at. It is also recommended that the author should have a focus when writing. Whether to write more about plane wars or family children depends on the data. If it is too average, it will have no characteristics, the data will not look good, and the possibility of eunuchs is greater.

Has been read until it is available. The impression is that I held a few meetings, fought a few fights, recruited a few Taoist companions, owned a piece of land, practiced a weapon, and sold dozens of mines and some trees. There are indeed not many emotional scenes, but the author seems to describe them too much in order to portray several Taoist monks. It feels like a mass flow, with an inexplicable sense of indifference. I'm a little hesitant, should I take the plunge?

I'm curious to ask. Multiple female protagonists, no emotions, a family of cultivators, how do these things come together? Will anyone really read this kind of introduction? At least 80% of people will be dropped by your profile. There are many female protagonists who are mainly about relationships, except for Bulldozer. You don't have any feelings anymore, you've got a stupid cultivating family, I really want to complain about it.

I suggest you watch Knight's Journey, which is also a plane battle stream. I think you should integrate the plane stream and the family stream. The family stream can learn from the Xuanjian Immortal Clan. It shouldn't be too cruel, but it should also be realistic. A 15-year-old bookworm recommends

It's a pity that the early setting of your book is very good, but it was written too fast, and the super-high-end combat power appeared too early. After the true elixir realm, two or three realms of the same level (quantitative change) should be added, and then the high-level levels of Tianjun will be written. First, it can slow down the pace and make it easier for you to organize your thoughts. Second, if you write too fast, you probably won't make any money. To slow down the pace and lengthen the realm, it is recommended to refer to Wenzhao Gong's "Cultivation of Immortality in the Troubled Times of Demons and Martial Arts"; before writing about high-end things such as high levels, for pure qualitative changes in combat power, you can refer to settings such as the Black Sea Mark and the Seal Ring Divine Fire in "The Hidden Dead End"; the main line expectations of readers It is recommended to refer to the settings of "I Live on a Deserted Island" about drifting back to human civilization from the sea of demons and "Gou Zai Cultivating Immortality in the Troubled World of Demons" to survive in secret until the end until immortality. Pu Ling's view of the world is good, but it is not good enough, it is not interesting enough, and it is indeed not the main line. The suggestions are somewhat sloppy and may not be appropriate, but the original intention is to encourage them. The setting of this book has great potential.

I feel that the writing is pretty good, but the heroine in the middle was too stiff in the past. I was confused when I listened to the book. I need to focus on the later part. If the emotional line cannot be written well, I can just skip it in one stroke. It focuses on plane war and territory development. You can refer to Lord of Ashes. Three monthly passes are provided. Come on, author!

The world view is incredibly grand. At present, except for the shortcomings of the character dialogue, the slow progress of the main plot, and some typos, it is very good in every aspect! Evaluation of high-quality grain and grass!

Finally, it's not just trying to sell dog meat. The title of the other book says it's about the Immortal Clan and the Imperial Clan, but it turns out that the main text starts with a single dog in the qi training period. Who the hell has the patience to read it? What we want is to have strength from the beginning and build a strong clan.

The first few chapters were incomprehensible, but luckily I persisted. It started in the middle, and it had its own setting ideas, instead of just following the crowd and applying simple settings, which gave people a sense of novelty. However, it is foreseeable that with your meticulous and slow-warming writing style, in this era of fast-food novels, in this era where readers have strong agency, want everything to belong to the protagonist, and the protagonist cannot bear any loss, many people will say that you are slow, that you overpower the protagonist, that you cannot grasp emotions, and other reasons! I hope the author can stick to his own settings and ideas! The most important thing is not to let readers' self-righteous ideas affect your thinking. Nowadays, many people take it for granted that their own ideas are the most reasonable. If you don't listen, they will say you can't do it! I hope the author will stick to himself and keep writing!

If the book is not good to read, the author will cut it live.

It's a bit unscientific. The true elixir is so difficult, but all his fellow Taoists can get the true elixir. Obviously, it was said before that their probability of achieving the true elixir is very low. The protagonists all have this ability. I don't believe in a powerful person who is stronger than the protagonist. If the family doesn't have this ability, can the true elixir still be called Tianchi?

Without the plot of fighting between people, the low and high points of being suppressed and fighting back, it seems a bit bland. It's not that it's bad, but it seems... Not very popular?

666, I came from Persimmon, that book was just copied.

The author obviously has the qualifications of a great emperor, why is he so intermittent😭

I feel that the background and world view of this book are well written. It would be nice if the update could be faster. There is more to expand on and write about these world views, and does the author have a group?

The setting is innovative and I look forward to the follow-up. The video is here, please support it first.

It's okay to update it slowly. I'll put it on your bookshelf for you to read again in two years. But if it becomes a eunuch for you, it will have to be moved out.

If you spend 10,000 per day, you can probably order 10,000 of them, but it's normal for such imaginative articles to have few updates. But you can't do it every day. You've been working on it for a long time. At the same time, other works have hundreds of thousands of words, but you only have 600,000 words.

Are there any similar articles about the invasion of the immortal realm?

I came here after watching the video and thought it was very good. Come on.

I feel like your style is only suitable for writing grand scenes and constantly outputting novel settings, otherwise it's easy to be nondescript

It's not too much to ask for a good one

Author, can you update it every day? 😡 This is another book in my lifetime