Interstellar War Lord

The writing is so slow, water is just water, and it's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless. The highlights are good. Once the climax is over, you seem to have watched it and then not watched it. It's all data. The only good thing is that even the water is not that kind of inner emotional drama.

I have read a lot of novels, but this is indeed the first time I have read this type of novel. It is very interesting, and I can see that the author is a very thoughtful person, but sometimes it is really confusing (such as most nouns, names and some abilities) and it is very difficult. If the author just wants to understand more For readers in this area, it is OK to write like this, but if you want to gain more readers and get better results, it is recommended to simplify some parts that can be less serious and make it more popular. On this basis, wouldn't it be better to show this grand theme of yourself? I hope the author can see and accept it. The author has his own ideas, and it may not be better if you follow what I say. But no matter what, I still love this subject and am very optimistic about this novel. I hope the author will get better and better! (I ordered it all!)

The writing is good, but what I want to say is that the author should pay attention to the financial aspect. A protagonist who does not even fight for his own real interests is unlikable. On the one hand, the protagonist is short of money, and on the other hand, he spends a lot of money. Using money to maintain relationships is the lowest form of practice. If you give one million today, what about tomorrow, and the day after tomorrow? And people's desires are endless. If you give one million today, others will be grateful. If you give another one million in the future, others will think you are sending a beggar away. The protagonist only does this because he knows that as long as he needs money urgently, someone will give him a large sum of money in various ways. This way of writing is very cliché. , Has long since been eliminated. Just like the early online game novels, the protagonist's artifacts and holy pets are not used by Shang Que and they are given away to people in the guise of making friends. The same is true for your last book. The management is also a mess. The cost of dismissing one guild member is enough to keep your entire guild busy for a month.

I don't understand why we have to fight against that hostile civilization now, and fight in our own home base in a year. Although we can definitely win, why wait a few years before trying again? The protagonist himself also knows that the most lacking thing is time. Even if he can succeed now, can he eat the biggest cake? There are only two legions now, including those from his hometown? Not even comparable to those senior military leaders, let alone lords. At that time, in addition to honor and so on, the cake after the fortress is captured will still be distributed to others. Why don't you wait for yourself to become stronger? We have been at war for tens of thousands of years, and you are missing this moment? Wait ten to eight years, or twenty to thirty years, and you will have a lot of Immortal Star-Losers, not to mention the fleet, at least the number of resets, can't we fight again by then? It is designated that you can eat the biggest cake. Is there no other plot if you don't play this during this time period?

Epic corpse fraud, the author is really awesome

Mystery, you are awesome, your address has not been exposed yet. 🤔

The author's ideas are still very good, and his writing style is also good. Unfortunately, life is stressful. I don't agree with it but I understand it. I hope this book will be a big hit.

The Milky Way in the palm of your hand, the star system in your palm

When I saw two hundred and fifty-five, I stopped pursuing it. Maha, just continue to abuse your protagonist. I don't understand what's going on in your head.

The more I read, the more frustrated I became, and I gave up reading the book.

After mining, after paying off the debt from the auction, wouldn't it be okay to go back and develop while mining over time? Why do you have to mess with Bruwan out of nowhere? I have been wandering around outside, developing my own planet and advancing to become a military leader. I have put aside the main line and have to run around to lower my intelligence

What I wrote above is pretty good. After unlocking the 500 million-damage cannon, the supporting actor directly uses his wits to provoke, and then the protagonist takes out the cannon and slaps him in the face. Suddenly I didn't want to watch anymore.

Author, it is said that some people can read books by heart, but I can't do it!

Hey hey hey. Is your hometown not developing anymore? No more life balls? No more galaxies? The military leader won't be promoted? Inexplicably opened up to the other side?

As soon as I saw the author asking for leave, I immediately felt that the author was going to cut it again. After all, the two previous books were like this.

It's a bit big, but the protagonist doesn't know how to use it. . . Author, I suggest that the protagonist stop building ships, or build ships to sell money and use them for his subordinates. The protagonist can just build cannons himself. Building a super-large artillery array in the palm of your hand does not require shields, armor, or engines. When encountering an enemy, just direct the artillery array to take turns shooting through the exit. This is called maximizing firepower. (For example, if a port can accommodate ten doomsday cannons firing at the same time, then use ten cannons as a shooting array. It takes thirty minutes to cool down the shooting. Your shooting port seems to take 3 seconds to open and close. Then build 600 shooting arrays and fire in turns. Who can hold it?) (If you are worried about overflow of firepower, then build a small artillery array, or Or only let some of the artillery fire. If you are worried about the opponent's fighter jets, then you can prepare a close-range artillery firing array to cooperate with your space drone.) (The protagonist itself is equivalent to a super battleship that can mount countless artillery pieces, so you only need to install the cannons. What kind of ship are you building? The shields, armor and engines of those ships are a complete waste!)

There are often less than five chapters in a chapter, and it's true. . .

When I saw Chapter 256, the author ate the book too quickly and forcibly tortured the owner. I have finished ordering and have read it. I really can't read the book with any brain.

I feel less uncomfortable when I see everyone talking about your poor word count. You said you were stuck, so you could slow down, clear your inventory, and take a day off. You said you didn't have much inventory. You could be more refined and change from two updates a day to one update a day. But you took our subscription and showed us a flood of data. You went too far. Are we readers fools in your eyes? Can you mix it with water and stop us from fishing for sand in the water?

I feel like I'm starting to feel depressed again. Every time the protagonist takes off, he's forced to be suppressed by the author. The climax of the plot could have been enjoyable, but I have to suppress it.

Based on the feelings of eve players, I basically finished watching it, but the combat power and data collapsed in the later period, so I can't watch it anymore. I miss the days when eve was mining and spawning monsters in the 20s.

After voting for the monthly ticket, I regretted it after reading Chapter 205... This plot is too disgusting.

He ran away, it was too watery, good guy, at least one-third is water.

The book I have been chasing for so long is finally finished. Speaking of which, the protagonist has been acting with an opponent, so why does he have to have an opponent? Sow the fields and dig graves, okay?

It's too watery and there's no orgasm point! There is no passion at all.

I don't even want to say anything. More than half of the chapter is in water. I said there is no explanation at the beginning and then the water comes out. What's the point of writing like this? I still wrote this later, only to abandon it.

Is there any news about the child Yu Yueyao? Forty or fifty years have passed, and there is no chance to appear?

Is there anything like Neutron Battle Star?

Um, didn't the author say everything and there are only 20,000 to 300,000 words left? How can I still get 5,000 monthly votes?

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