I Logged into Honghuang in Honghuang

I accidentally read this book, and I think it is the best one in 20 years. I highly recommend it!

The protagonist's vehicle is really miserable. As soon as something goes wrong, he immediately exposes the shuttle

Author, I have not read your last book, but in this book, you are limited to one month of death after logging in to the game. The more you die, the longer the time will be. But after the cultivation of the soul grows, what about the death time? Still like this, it's inevitable...

Yes, that's a great idea! But this kind of prehistoric article, which writes about the period of the Conferred Gods, the war between lich, the battle between dragons, phoenixes and unicorns, and Journey to the West, is not easy to write. It requires a certain amount of literary accumulation to write better! Come on＾0＾~work hard!

Today, this is a double-open rhythm. That one only has one page a day, it's too slow

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a cool article, but when I clicked on it, it turned out to be a story about suppressing the protagonist crazily. I don't understand the setting with such a high limit. You need to suppress the protagonist?

Why is the protagonist like a lewd evil spirit? If he doesn't improve his cultivation, he thinks about women all day long. Normal people who travel to the past will focus on cultivation. They even go on blind dates. With the golden finger, they try their best to reduce their intelligence. What's the point of writing this without writing h? What's the word count of relying on women to cause conflicts? I didn't see how cool it was, I only saw water, and I didn't write a few chapters about the wilderness.

I couldn't stand seeing the blind date anymore. I said it would last for three years, but now it is like this for the third time. What should I say later? I don't know how weak I am now! And you yourself said that cultivating immortals must be based on strength. If you want to have a Taoist companion, you must be very strong, or a childhood sweetheart. The most important thing is that you are an immortal sect, and your strength is equivalent to foundation building. This is similar to today's elementary school. If you don't study hard, you will think about falling in love all day long. Even if you are willing, will girls be willing to do this? Even if you don't understand the law of the jungle, will people in that world not understand? When there is time to fall in love, why can't girls improve their abilities? Instead of going to fall in love with you? We are in a time of peace now, but what about them? They understand the importance of strength better than we do. If even the lower-level members or newcomers of a sect want to fall in love, do you think this sect can survive?

When he arrived in the prehistoric times, he was completely reborn, and had a great opportunity to train his body with animal blood. Then Xiaobi, an outer disciple of a certain sect in a certain state, a certain county, in a human dynasty, would have to consider what magic weapons and techniques to use. This is not a battle between outer disciples, but a competition between the Son of God and the Holy Son.

Author, please see, I just came from Advent! I have been reading novels for 16 years, so I should be qualified to say that I am an old reader! I found that your book is included in the ranks of being buried! Because your book promotion, reviews, collection, popularity and other data are too low! It shouldn't be! In my opinion, the overall quality of your last novel was very high. So I looked for the reason. Most of the popular online novels nowadays are of the fast food type. Taking your last book as an example, it only started to feel refreshing after 30 or 40% of the time! After almost 50%, it will feel better and then gradually increase! And I only read it in one sitting after you finished the book! Slow heat, but too slow heat! It is conceivable that when you have not updated two chapters a day or two chapters a day, in this era when most readers do not have much patience, your writing style must change. The protagonist occasionally acts mean, suddenly shows off, and often deceives people. These styles actually appeared in your last book, but the frequency was too low! I just finished reading your last novel, and then I looked around to see if you had any other completed novels. As soon as I came in, I saw a lot of people complaining in the book review section! I know your book is probably too slow to gain popularity! From the perspective of an old bookworm, your writing skills are really very good; but without the blessing of a great god, without the support of a huge base of book fans, how many people have the patience to see your plot arrangement and writing style that are 300% to 40% hot in the last book, and 50% to be hot in the future? ! Change it! This is really necessary! Just like taking your last book, cutting it in the middle, updating it from 50% of the style sequence, and then increasing the frequency of elements that can bond the characters in the book with readers! Your arrival data will increase at least ten times! I don't know if you, the author, can see this paragraph I left! Alas, it's such a pity, the data coming in is really sorry for its quality. Fortunately, I haven't been following you since you started updating Advent! Otherwise, I would have to worry every day whether you would be too busy! Wish you health and prosperity!

According to the current development, there is no need to find an ancestor to support you if you become a master and leave. If you find an ancestor and leave, you will find a rubbish master with a great master standing behind you. Isn't this just disgusting? ? ? ?

I saw the thirteenth picture, which was after the protagonist logged in for the second time! It feels like the author is deliberately suppressing the protagonist. The protagonist committed suicide before he could have quit! Then asking the protagonist to delay the login time, isn't this a disguised form of suppressing the protagonist? The protagonist was not unable to exit at that time

I'm a bit confused. The resources and spiritual energy of the prehistoric world are countless times that of the world of immortality. The most important reality is that one day in the prehistoric world lasts a hundred days. So why do we have to engage in all kinds of love and hatred in reality? Can we just use the decades of reality to practice in the prehistoric world for thousands of years and then come out to show off? The author can refer to starting from Daoguo. I think the idea there is correct. The most precious thing is time. The protagonist buys the casket and returns the pearl.

After seeing the blind date scene in Chapter 18, it is still considered ordinary food and can be eaten. But I really skipped reading because there were a lot of explanations and introductions and irrelevant plots. It really didn't matter whether I watched it or not. For example, about the blind date, the author wrote several chapters. After reading it, I felt very childish and skipped to the end. For the second time, I was preparing to go to the ancient world to kill ferocious beasts. In the end, all the preparations were in vain, and the holes I dug for several days were in vain. The confused centipede came and they died together... Aren't the previous plots a waste of words? The biggest problem is that you don't want to suppress the protagonist's strength. People don't like it. If you play like this, you should finish Chapter 30 of this sect. You can check out "Zong Heng Tian Xia Xi Tie Bu Shi Begins". This author did not suppress the protagonist's strength. The protagonist's strength improved very quickly, and it was very enjoyable to watch. The outside world is huge and there is a lot to write about. Don't be afraid that your strength will increase too quickly and you will have nothing to write about. If you suppress the protagonist's strength, readers will stop reading.

What I saw was getting more and more uncomfortable. From the blind date to the revenge, I saw this. I was really speechless. . What is this written about? Personally, it gives me a headache to read it. It is forced to be awkward and creates conflicts. Personally, I would rather read the content in the game. 😅

To be honest, the female protagonist Ding Xuan, who has super spiritual senses, fell in love with the male protagonist at first glance. She was too stiff and lacked a sense of empathy. How can this be true in reality? It is true that cultivating immortals does not follow the basic methods, so let's cultivate it first!

I can't write a new upgrade system and I don't want to use the old system. I modify it and it looks different. In fact, it doesn't change much. It still makes my head hurt. Just keep it.

The guy surnamed Xu is always trying to kill the protagonist, and the protagonist is still having a life-and-death fight! The latest chapters are so disgusting to read! ! ! !

Actually, what's a bit confusing is that since you have landed in the ancient world and have enough spiritual energy, you can just practice in the Novice Village to reach the full level before going out. You are not like other players who don't have skills. If you have skills, just practice. Isn't it nice to have 100 times the time flow? Even a pig can take off. The author is just suppressing the protagonist and dying for death. It is too deliberate and blunt. I suggest the author think about it carefully. There are no highlights in the first 20 chapters. It is very troublesome. Also, even if I am practicing in the Novice Village, some people are confused and cannot say that I am practicing radio gymnastics and experiencing ancient meditation. It is really impossible to say that this is a family-inherited breathing method, and then spread it, reviving the spiritual energy in the real world, and cultivating immortal skills. This two-line plot of Toto is much better than the author who deliberately let the protagonist die.

This single chapter. . . Authornb

The author of this book has cut two books in a row, and now the situation is to change the vest and start a new book. It is a vicious circle. Is it interesting?

I don't know why there are so many people who like to travel through time and resurrect corpses. Isn't it disgusting to use other people's bodies? Especially for men wearing men's clothing, if you think about it carefully, it's okay for you to put your own hand in your mouth, but you can bear it if a strange man's hand is put in your mouth. Isn't it delicious to start time travel and rebirth from the fetus? I didn't think about it before reading novels of this type, but now that I suddenly think about it, I feel extremely disgusting. I'm just saying what I feel, don't criticize, and be merciful.

Seeing Chapter 21 being poisoned to the point of abandoning the trap, one glance at the first few pictures revealed that he would be ambushed when he left the mountain. The male protagonist also knew that someone was going to plot against him, and then what! Then what! After a month and a half, the hero forgot. Then he was ambushed as he left the mountain gate. I honestly feel like my intelligence has been fooled.

I hate prehistoric times, and I feel like when this thing is mentioned, someone is trying to prove it again.

The water is so good after being put on the shelves. He is very powerful in persuading people to retreat.

Author, your book is too short with only 129 chapters and less than 500,000 words. I won't say anything about eunuchs. No one will read your book anyway. I just want to remind you that I forgot to set 500 points for this book. Set it so that no one will be disgusted by your new book and come to the book review area to comment. If someone is really disgusted, you can still share 5 yuan with Qidian. If a thousand people are disgusted, it will be 5,000 yuan. You can also eat something good, right? It would be nice to have a hot pot with the brothers in the studio. Of course, it is best to be alone, and it is most comfortable to spend alone.

There is no need to suppress the strength of the Earthly Immortal Realm. I feel like you are going to collapse under such pressure. Even if I get stronger, it's still easy to write. After all, you have unlimited flow. Moreover, there are many things that can be written in the prehistoric world.

The most obvious shortcoming of this author is that the plot is bland throughout. It is interesting to see the setting upgrade at the beginning. The golden finger remains unchanged, the theme remains unchanged, and the soup is changed without changing the medicine. If this continues, the career will be wiped out at a glance, and that's it, just a living.

It seems that Chapter 20 is good. There are no big poisonous spots, but there are a lot of small poisonous spots. Good water.

The author went crazy? Didn't you say you were going to do something big?