If I Cultivate Immortality, My Magic Power Will Be Unmatched

As a reader who followed the previous book, I have some thoughts, as follows: 1 is what everyone says is "just not enough." The benefits of adventure and cultivation for the protagonist of this article have been suppressed: It's an awkward system that is still being chewed up by mouth, which is really boring. Is it a bad taste? In the same martial arts, the protagonist just can't keep up with others. No matter what martial arts secrets it is, the protagonist can only say that it is a shame. Other people's mountain-suppressing skills are useless in the hands of the protagonist. No matter how great the danger or the risk of death, the protagonist can never keep the benefits he gets, there are always various accidents. This has been the case since the last book. I also complained about "Tauren's Boots" 2 is the most critical, the protagonist has completely become a puppet Readers of cheating novels are contradictory. They like to watch the system and add points to cheat without affecting the hope that the protagonist can cheat independently. While adding points, it would be great if he could study the skills independently and even make breakthroughs independently. But the protagonist of this article has completely become a slave. He chews wood when he sees it, wants to eat magic weapons when he sees them, and is completely transformed into a beast. The more I look at it, the more dull it becomes.

The writing is good, but the way of writing is too old-fashioned~ Adventure life flow with system flow In this era, reading books pursues excitement, but your writing is too lukewarm, there are too few arrangements for excitement, the upgrade speed is too slow, and the protagonist is not strong enough. It's mixed up all the way and the writing is not humorous enough. It was a good book ten years ago, but now it is too impetuous and I don't have time to watch you slowly lay the groundwork.

Just want to say fuck. Having read the previous chapters before, I felt that the author was of good quality, but perhaps too bland for my liking, so I left. I just saw what was said about Wen Cheng in the comment section, and subscribed to the relevant chapter. Sure enough, it made me so angry that I almost vomited blood. Marriage, or the marriage proposed by the protagonist, and almost becoming someone else's husband, I found that the author really knows how to do it. With such writing skills, such strength of working hard to update, and using such a plot to depress readers, how dare you complain about your poor grades? Would I spend money to make myself unhappy? Is this because I am not a young man and I am depressed and can't write a book? ? Isn't it true that Mr. Guo became popular just because he likes to make everyone happy? It's better for you, if you have to write something that smells like screwing up, do you think you're screwing up? Cherish your subscribing readers, you can bear this, you are a true fan.

Pepper, I'll give you some suggestions. I'll change the introduction a little bit and tell you that the protagonist has partial amnesia and can't remember mythical stories like Journey to the West. It's okay if you know this, but it's too poisonous if you don't know. Really, it looks too uncomfortable.

Does the author know what history is stranger than fiction? Playing fatalistically? Huo Qubing was a tyrant in Chang'an before he was seventeen years old. After joining the army, he won consecutive victories and became Fenglang Juxu. Han Xin, who was humiliated under the crotch, directly created a kingdom in the Han Dynasty. He was only in his thirties when he died. Not to mention Liu Xiu, a son of destiny. Meteors fell directly from the sky. The history of such a character who is more powerful than Long Aotian can be tolerated in the novel. Is cheating Li Hongru stronger than them? Does restriction... Fatalism... Make sense? When you give the protagonist a chance to hang up, it's to make a change. You are slapping yourself in the face. I was given the changed items again and again, while desperately pursuing fatalism and not letting go. This... Makes me speechless

I felt weak while reading the novel. This is not a plot problem or a problem with the author's writing skills but the author's poor thinking. For example, regarding Princess Wencheng, I wanted to give up the book for a while. It doesn't matter whether the male protagonist has a female protagonist or not, but if you write about the regret that you can get but have no choice but to lose, the better you portray the characters, the less readers will want to read it. You just brushed it off and even made the image of Princess Wencheng thin, so that's not the problem. Take another example of the prince. The better you portrayed the relationship between the Tang Emperor and the prince, and the better you portrayed the interaction between the protagonist and the prince. In the end, the prince was helplessly defeated, and the more uncomfortable it was for the readers. The last thing is that the protagonist is not clear about what he is doing, and the reader will feel more uncomfortable when encountering helplessness. If the protagonist is for immortality, then to deepen this purpose, everyone will take the protagonist's various hardships for granted. You see, the protagonist of Gu Zhenren is for immortality. No one will feel uncomfortable if he betrays or fails in the middle. This is the price required for success. The protagonist of Jue Qin fights against everyone in the world for the sake of a harmonious world. Readers don't feel uncomfortable either. Where is the protagonist's ambition and goal in that book? If you are at a low level, you may be trying to survive, but then you have become a major cultivator, so where is your goal? If not, all kinds of losses will make readers uncomfortable and give up the book. It is a pity to throw away tasteless food. The better your writing skills, the stronger this feeling will be. Even if the protagonist is just trying to make a name for himself, it would be better than the current aimlessness. The book itself is not broken. It can be revised later, just by adding a driving force to the protagonist. Why did I come to this world in my life? For the common people, it may just be a struggle to survive, but for the protagonist who can dominate the world, it doesn't matter whether it is for the harmonious society, for the equality of all people in the world, or for the harmony of a small family. But now the protagonist is like a puppet with no ambition at all. Even e-sports has the goal of becoming a world champion.

It feels like the author is just covering up what happened in history and writing it again. No matter how much you support Li Chengqian, his feet will still be crippled and the emperor will still not be him. No matter what the protagonist does, history has not changed at all.

In the prosperous Tang Dynasty, Furong Garden, watch the lantern show! "I'm selling pigeons. I'm selling delicious and cheap pigeons. They cost ten cents each. I'm selling pigeons." The shouts of sales coming from afar aroused my curiosity. As a diligent writer who updates 50,000 times a day, I hate to hear others talk about pigeons. Emmm, I went over to take a look! She was facing the bouquet, with a slender figure, her long hair draped over her vest, gently held up by a pink ribbon. She was dressed in white, and the flowers shone brightly when reflected. She felt like there was smoke gathering behind her. She really was not from this world. When she turned around, she saw that she was still a young woman. She was only eighteen years old. I took a few steps forward and asked softly how much a pigeon cost. She replied: "Ten articles." I pretended to be surprised and said: "Only ten cents? It's so cheap! How many pigeons are there in total? I'll rent them all, and I'll return them to you in three days, do you think that's okay?" "Ah this?! Isn't this bad!" She said in surprise. "Why is it bad? This is a win-win situation!" "Okay, there are 14 pigeons in total, all of them will be rented to you, just seven for seven cents!" "Okay, we have been chatting for so long, and I still don't know your name!" Finally got to the point, and I felt happy, hehe! ""My name is Tutu, what's yours? Tutu asked softly. "Ah, I called the bear timid, you can call me little bear!" " Haha, I finally know her name, Tutu, it's a cute name! "Nice to meet you. Let's meet here again in three days! Little rabbit, hee hee! " "That's okay, just say it like that! "The little rabbit said shyly. I took a step forward, reached for the pigeon cage, and accidentally touched the little rabbit's little hand!!! When my palm touched her arm, the girl lowered her head, and I saw a slight blush on her little face that had just been elongated by surprise. "Then we'll see you in three days! " If you want to know what happened next time, please listen to the breakdown next time!

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