If I Cultivate Immortality, My Magic Power Will Be Unmatched

As a reader who followed the previous book, I have a few thoughts, as follows: The first point, as everyone has mentioned, is that the "enjoyment elements" are insufficient. The benefits of the protagonist's adventures and cultivation are suppressed. This system is so awkward; it's still being figured out verbally. It's really boring. Is it some kind of twisted sense of humor?

It's well-written, but the style is too old-fashioned. An adventure/life simulation game disguised as a system-based game. In this day and age, people crave excitement when reading, but your writing is too bland, with too few exciting moments, slow progression, and an underpowered protagonist. It's been a haphazard and poorly written piece, a good book ten years ago, but now it's too superficial, and there's no time to appreciate the gradual build-up.

I just want to say "fuck!" I had read the earlier chapters and thought the author was quite capable, but I left because it was probably too bland for me. Just now, I saw comments about Wencheng's situation and subscribed to the relevant chapters, and sure enough, it made me so angry I almost vomited blood.

Chili pepper, here's a suggestion: Modify the synopsis slightly. Mention that the main character suffers from amnesia and doesn't remember mythological stories like Journey to the West. Those who already know this might be okay, but for those who don't, it's really painful to read.

Does the author even know what it means for history to be more bizarre than fiction? Playing with fatalism? Huo Qubing, a powerful figure in Chang'an before the age of seventeen, went on a winning streak after joining the army, achieving the legendary feat of sealing the wolf's lair. Han Xin, who endured the humiliation of crawling between someone's legs, went on to establish the Han Dynasty.

Reading the novel felt incredibly frustrating; it wasn't a problem with the plot or the author's writing skills, but rather a lack of careful consideration on the author's part. For example, the story of Princess Wencheng almost made me give up on the book.

It feels like the author simply rewrote historical events under a fantasy veneer. No matter how much you support Li Chengqian, his leg will still be crippled, and he still won't be the emperor. No matter what the protagonist does, history doesn't change at all.

In the prosperous Tang Dynasty, at Furong Garden, come and see the lantern festival! "Selling pigeons! Delicious and cheap pigeons for sale! Ten coins each! Pigeons for sale!" The distant cry piqued my curiosity. As a former diligent but struggling author, writing 50,000 words a day, I can't stand hearing anyone talk about pigeons. Hmm, I'll go check it out!

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