One Piece: The Crimson Great Swordsman

The protagonist wanders around the world without a goal. I can guess the rest of the plot without watching it. When Luffy goes to sea, he will find him and then become a bodyguard The protagonist is so strong that he can't afford to save his own country. If he doesn't save, he must avenge his parents. You must know that the revenge of killing his father is irreconcilable. The protagonist is too cold-blooded

A suggestion, the protagonist needs a goal, at least let the readers see the goal, otherwise it will feel like the protagonist is running around on the sea without knowing what he is doing The second is the plot where the protagonist goes to O'Hara, I was confused and didn't know what he was doing. If the protagonist wants to protect Robin, it feels like there is less change if he doesn't do it. In addition, there are two generals there, so it is really easy to commit suicide. If you are unlucky Anyway, if there is no main line, it will be difficult to watch.

It turns out to be an invincible novel. Goodbye. Are you going to dominate the sea and become the Pirate King at the age of 15? You are more awesome than Luffy.

In the world of One Piece, which of the powerful swordsmen Hawkeye, Rayleigh, Red Hair, and Zoro eats fruits?

The author should cut it off and re-open a new book. The writing style is still good. The protagonist wandering around on the sea is boring. Either the protagonist is a tyrant like Blackbeard and works hard to become the Yonko, or he forms a family and becomes the Shichibukai, or he seizes the country and becomes the king in the new world. There must be a goal to work towards. I really can't stand the salted fish protagonist who has no goal.

In fact, I don't really like this kind of author. Although the type of knife can also be translated as "big business", "big sword" is a name recognized by the public and official animation, and it is also very vivid. There is no need to show off this knowledge. This feeling is like watching football in the past. One team has several names, which makes some people who are not familiar with it look confused. Very dramatic.

It's much better than those systems that have a starting point.

Just watched it! You can't carry the Seven-Star Sword with your pig's feet! The Seven Star Sword is longer than Luffy! So hurry up and make your pig's feet grow taller! Only fifteen or sixteen years old! There is still room for development! To be honest, if you are holding a Seven-Star Sword that is nearly two meters tall, you should be at least 3 meters tall.

I have one thing to say, the first chapter was written in a mess, but the ten or so chapters before it was released seemed to have made obvious progress. It didn't cost any money anyway, so I just jumped in and read it. If nothing else, the fighting aspect is much better than before with only sounds and vocabulary. The rhythm of the plot is a bit abrupt. Not to mention the previous chapters, it is a mess and it feels like there is no outline. The latter part is much better and has a certain degree of coherence. Overall, my ability to write stories has improved.

Who is Usopp? Kill the person with the Rust Fruit ability with a slingshot. Who is the person with the rust fruit ability? The man who suppressed Zoro. Who is Sauron? The man who defeated Monkar the Axeman. Who is Munka the Axeman? The man who defeated Garp with an axe. Who is Cap? A man who was a brother to the Warring States Period. Who is the Warring States Period? The man who single-handedly defeated the Blackbeard Pirates. Who is Blackbeard? The man who defeated Ace. Who is Ace? The man who fought Jinbei for five days and five nights with no outcome. Who is Jinbe? Kill the Murloc in Moria instantly. Who is Moriah? A man who dares to confront Kaido. Who is Kaido? The man who shocked Brother Ming. Who is Brother Ming? The man who crippled Luo. Who is Luo? Kill a man with Viagra instantly with one knife. Who is Viagra? The man who violently tortured Smoker. Who is Smoker? The man who captured Bucky alive. Who is Bucky? A man who ignored Hawkeye's slashes. Who is Hawkeye? The man who beat Luffy until he was unable to fight back. Who is Luffy? The man who killed the King of the Near Sea with one punch. What is the King of the Offshore? The thing that bit off the red-haired arm in one bite. Who is the redhead? The man who easily blocked Akainu. Who is Akainu? The man who defeated Aokiji. Who is Qing Pheasant? The man who broke Diamond Joe's arm. Who is Jozi? A man who knocked out Laosha and vomited blood with one blow. Who is Lao Sha? The man who threatened to take the head of a white beard. Who is Whitebeard? He once competed with Roger for supremacy and was known as the strongest man in the world. Who is Roger? The pinnacle of pirates - One Piece. By analogy, Roger may be more powerful and can take two slingshots.