Hunter X Hunter: Seven Deadly Sins

When I see the protagonist being obsessed with mechas, I feel that I am incompatible with the background of hunters. The reason why humans need mechas is because humans are fragile. In the hunter world, those with telekinesis are obviously stronger than steel armors. It is inexplicable that the protagonist keeps struggling to develop mechas with steel that is weaker than themselves. I have never seen many battles between telekinesis people. I have always been developing mechas with a few scientists. If a person with telekinesis cannot simply destroy a steel structure, what is the difference between a Sanda fighter like ours? What is the use of this pile of scrap metal if its strength is weaker than the attack power of telekinesis? There is no logic at all in the background of the story and what the protagonist is going to do.

I have read a lot of hunter stories, and the ones with good results basically have the following characteristics: Emotional line: Even if there is no harem, there will be at least one female protagonist. Without a female protagonist, it means cutting off an arm. The popular candidates for the heroine are Maggie, Peng Si, Men Qi, Ni Weng, and Xiao Di. The ranking in terms of popularity is probably like this. These are some of the favorite heroines among book lovers, and they are of great help in increasing the popularity of a book. Original character: Xiaojie, the basic consensus is that he is too reckless. If it were not for his strong background, he would have been killed a long time ago. This is a very controversial character. Whether to be friends with him or not, I have read a lot of hunter fics, and they are basically 40 or 60. Most of them ignore this guy, and some are enemies with him. It depends on how the author handles it. I suggest that even if you are not hostile to him, you should not get too close to him. It is really too reckless and you will be dragged down by him. Hisoka, a very popular villain, you can make him an enemy, but don't kill him so quickly, it can whet the reader's appetite. The Brigade is a very popular group, just like the Akatsuki in Naruto. Regardless of whether they are full of evil, many books have made friends with this team, and there are also many who specialize in killing the Brigade. But one thing I have to mention is that it's okay to make enemies of the brigade, but don't kill Maggie and Xiaodi. Many readers will slip away. This is why the three views follow the five senses 🙂

The development of the protagonist's telekinesis ability is a failure. To be honest, I feel that if the seven sins ability of independent personality is not developed, it was very good to see before. The power of oneself is powerful. If it is really not possible, you can give the protagonist the ability to affect emotions.

So many people don't like the company's content, so why do you still want to continue to focus on writing? Am I not good at reading urban literature? Why do you want to see you fight in the mall in Hunter World?

No matter how it is set, an ability that cannot be controlled is not called an ability. Even if it is a trait-based concept, it should still be controlled by the developer. The difference is that the functions of abilities are not the same.

I don't know why I want to write a ghost slayer chapter, why not just write about a full-time hunter? The perfect ending! It's fine now, it's either a mess or a hasty finish!

This book can only be recalled and read, but cannot be pursued. First, I worked on the company organization and wrote a lot. I almost couldn't even see the main character. Then I wrote a bunch of street kids who didn't survive more than two chapters and were not even considered supporting characters. They chose their names very carefully. In the end, they either died or were experimented on. Now I have written about the Dark Continent, the most mysterious and desirable area of ​​the Hunter World, which no veteran has even drawn, so early. You can write it, but there is no need to do it so early. Just write down the existing maps and dungeons such as the Sky Arena, Hunter Association, and the Enemy Hakka Family in a down-to-earth manner, and add some original plots. Only by reading and writing can you be more accepting of the new original plots you will develop later.

I'm very disappointed. The Hunter was written very well, but in the end, I lost the forces that had developed for hundreds of chapters in the Hunter and started writing about Demon Slayer. I asked you about the protagonist's telekinesis ability. He didn't have it at all. The protagonist in the Hunter didn't know how many ancestors of ghosts he could kill. As a result, it ended up starting from the beginning. If the author likes other worlds, he can finish the Hunter's story and then unify the Hunter world and find a way to open it. Leading the army into the gate of the infinite world is not much better than starting from scratch. I read a book about starting from pirates and conquering all the worlds. It was described like this. It was very exciting. I thought you would describe it like this. I didn't expect that you used the lowest method to go to the infinite world and lost the telekinesis ability that you have practiced for a long time. Starting from scratch. Do you think it looks good? I'm really disappointed.

The Sin of Greed—Will Gleed defect if he comes out?

The plot has been too confusing recently. The main character has not appeared. How will it unfold later? Is there a game between companies and organizations all day long? Is this still the Hunter World? If you continue to write like this, you are really playing a good hand to pieces.