Dr. Green Dragon

In the later stage, the water was so watery that it finally stopped, so I fed poison. It was either water or poison, and I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist really deserves to be a green dragon. He is all green, so low.

Chapter The Beginning of the Evil Dragon. When I saw this chapter, my heart skipped a beat. Isn't it a bit more exciting? When I saw it, it was as bland as water. Although the young dragon is not strong, it was really written like a dog. It was really not exciting, and the cowardly style was really boring. I think it was written evil. I am willing to compare Dragon's novels with "The Black Dragon Code". It is really incomparable. I am just a layman. It doesn't have to be the whole story to be more enjoyable, but you have to explode when you should explode. I think no matter how good the author's writing is, he has not written out the evil dragon.

It is suggested that the author can greatly improve the narrative technique. When playing a dungeon, if it is a character that the protagonist has predicted that he will encounter, then clearly explain his ability and background in the previous article, so that after meeting, the enemy will come out and prepare to enlarge his moves. . . Then suddenly he listed its background and capabilities in hundreds and thousands of words. If it is an enemy that the protagonist did not expect, just let it be turned on without introducing it. . . Wouldn't it be better to add the protagonist's analysis and speculation in the post-war summary later?

The taste gets stronger as we go to the end. Has the author written about Dongxuan before? I have to say that it feels very inconsistent to write a novel with this theme in the same writing style as Dongxuan.

I was so angry when I saw it, it was really poisonous.

Can you correct a lot of grammatical errors? There are too many grammatical errors like the first paragraph of the penultimate paragraph. Can't you add "define" or "stipulate" after the penultimate list to make it a complete sentence? Can't the last sentence in the last paragraph be mentioned after "regular" to make it conform to Chinese grammar? Sometimes I even feel that you are a machine-translated English novel.

Add it to everything.

The Black Dragon Emperor, the Red Dragon King, the White Dragon Frost, the Eternal Blue Dragon, the Nesting Green Dragon, the five major alien dragons, and the five-color dragon queen are representatives of motherly kindness and son filial piety. I wonder if this book can become one of the representatives of the alien dragons.

In pseudo-DND, dragons are not as good as dogs. Even in DND, who dares to say that dragons are not as good as dogs? A low-level mage and a few human soldiers can kill two baby dragons running around with their heads in their arms? What is written is a hammer, and the local data is so exaggerated. How powerful are the humans in the world? Dragons are full of treasures. Isn't it normal that they have not been completely slaughtered by human greed?

As for the inherited memory of the Dragon Clan, normal dragon spells are all included in the inheritance, right? Why do you have to learn them from humans? The description of hunting dragons is too simple. Humans are so good at hunting dragons. Dragons have long since died out.

Look at the control of the Time Dragon next door and then look at the protagonist. He works hard every day and studies dungeons in order to level up. He sleeps a few times next door and reaches level 30 at a young age of 8 years old. He learns magic by trading and robbing. The Time Dragon next door goes around and borrows money one by one. He must be cautious in everything for fear of overturning. , Casually wandering next door, killing a demigod lich at the age of 3, fighting against the incarnation of the god of wasteland at the age of 6, and being overturned in a parallel world. It can be seen that the hard work of dnd is not as good as reincarnation. If the protagonist is almost unlucky and does not vote for the green dragon, but works ten times as a human, he may not be able to become a legend before dying. It is even worse that the efforts of casting a goblin will not be rewarded.

When I first read it, I was surprised that this book is such a good one, but why the monthly subscription is so small. The following content contains spoilers, read with caution. Now I have seen Chapter 85 after it was released. Looking at it now, although the protagonist has fought many battles, it lacks memory points and climaxes. Now I feel that the part with Long Jie is more memorable. Lacking the feeling of building up strength and then exploding, the Wood Elf section was a bit boring. Just like the comments that Caesar eats dirt often appear in Longwen, and the first nuclear explosion wipes out the dragon-slaying team, even the huge size difference between its fairy heroine and the black dragon is a drawback. The protagonist's dragon fly is an obvious label, but since the Star Ring Islands, the presence of dragon flies has become much weaker. The previous title of Dragon Fly Demon King was still very much anticipated.                                                                                                                                                                      The position I have seen still lacks some eye-catching followers. I suggest that some special monsters researched by the protagonist can be arranged. This will have a sense of collection and cultivation, and increase the stickiness of readers. In addition, the current dragon beasts are also almost felt, maybe they can be deformed and a little more curious. It feels like there are a few points where readers are lost. The Snake Man's Golden Scroll, the Golden Scroll connects the main lines, but studying the Golden Scroll and stealing power distracts some readers. Some readers are attracted by the dragon fly at the beginning and think it is the route of taking explosive soldiers and insect nests. The protagonist's main energy is now on researching and plundering the Golden Scroll. This has a sense of following the rules, as if the protagonist is a time traveler, but he is taking a path that most creatures in this world can take. There is no sense of uniqueness in finding a new path, and some sense of substitution is lost. In the big plot of the Rift Mountains, the Ninth Princess is a bit abrupt. First, the plot of two time travelers will directly make the protagonist's identity as a time traveler lose its advantage. Although the protagonist has not exposed anything, it will leave a knot in the reader's heart. I can accept it myself. I have read many related novels before. Specifically, Tiamat is also a time traveler, let alone a planeswalker. This plot alone is still not planned well. The nine princesses are both time travellers. In addition, not long after they time traveled, they have the power that the protagonist does not dare to attack casually. It took more than 30 years to get along with the protagonist to this extent. The sense of gap is immediately apparent. This paragraph can dissuade a large number of readers who do not read too much.       ，，，，，，，        ，，，， The entourage is now very powerful, giving readers more of a feeling of strength in quantity, like a resource, like money. I know that I have a lot of money, and it is useful, but it lacks soul and the feeling of an army. It does not feel like an iron-blooded, powerful army. Most of the descriptions are the number of dragonborn and the number of dragon vein warlocks. It's like saying that my family has a house, a car, and a washing machine. There is no sense of living things like when someone asks you what you have and you say "I have a driver at home."        ，，

Ninth Princess, this is really poisonous. The protagonist himself is a time-traveler, and the Ninth Princess is also a time-traveler. The protagonist traveled through time for more than thirty years, and struggled hard all the way to gain the strength he has now. The Ninth Princess traveled through the world for only three or four years and became more powerful than the protagonist. Why are you writing about the protagonist? Just write about the Ninth Princess.

After seeing the founding of the People's Republic of China. Dr. Green Dragon? Might as well be Dr. Hen! If the protagonist's mage profession is removed, he may not even be able to defeat the kobolds under his command. The only one who can win steadily is the hen. I know this is an illusion, but the author gave me the feeling that the setting in this book is like this. Without the mage profession, I think I would dare to shit on this green dragon. The green dragon is so rubbish, is the mage profession powerful? Awesome, you dare to mess with gods at level 8, and it depends entirely on this level 8 mage to do things. It's not that great either. There are mages above level 20 everywhere. Then why write Green Dragon? Because without the encumbrance of the green dragon, the protagonist has already developed. Wouldn't it be better to write a human? Why Green Dragon? Because the author can trick readers into it and tell you that Green Dragon is garbage, so he won't write about Green Dragon anymore, only about research. Is the research great? No, I have already studied gods. I am only at level 8. What should I study at level 20? Have no idea. I estimate that if you cram the entire universe of knowledge into a green dragon's head, you can barely reach level 20. Level 21 is definitely not enough. Currently, the research on the green dragon is all about the gods. It can be directly used to improve the research on the green dragon's body. That is, he can steal a few spells and use them. What else? No more. For a mage above level 20, it stands to reason that with a high-level spell, killing this green dragon is like killing a chicken. But, everyone says that the green dragon is powerful. What is so powerful about it? Forgive me for being blind, but I can't tell. Maybe it's the kobolds who are more powerful than him.

The plot line is vague. He also suppresses the protagonist's outburst, and the plot is always interrupted at the climax. There are often pronouns for this person and that person in the article, asking readers to guess, always making them hard-fisted just by looking at it.

Look at the original corpse abuse, and then look at this book. What was once a mulberry field has become today's ocean. Do you dare to believe that this is the same author? I have written three million words so far, but if I squeeze out the water, can I still have two million words of practical content? And the water gets thicker as you go to the back! Often the content of one chapter has to be broken into three or even five chapters! This book is really worthless now that I have seen it. It is tasteless and a pity to throw away. Forget it, just take it off the bookshelf. Author, just continue to enjoy yourself slowly. I suggest new book friends, if you want to read, go to the Dao edition. It's really not worth spending money on drinking water here...

The author writes slowly and does not rush. Don't make it a novice and no brainer. Don't play too perverted, obscene and underdeveloped, don't be lazy. If you become invincible too early, you won't feel it anymore. Of course, don't overestimate the number of words. In the early stage, don't hang out in human society. Just do scientific research and develop your power. Later on, you can participate in plane wars.

Watched it for a while. I feel like the division between good and evil camps is really annoying. This setting fully reflects the grass-roots team and the degree of perfunctoryness. It is not a god, it requires faith. A group of unimaginably intelligent creatures with extreme intelligence, extreme strength, and long lifespans. He still believes in the division between justice and evil. Fighting for life and death for a group of short-lived species, this kind of classification is not even believed by political creatures and capitalists among short-lived humans. It's as if for a group of monkeys, humans started a world war and decided to destroy half of humanity. Not as convincing as Thanos's reasons.

The plot after the protagonist becomes a legend and establishes the country is all boring - a few chapters casually construct a new force, then a dozen chapters introduce the background and history of the new force, dozens of chapters introduce the stories and abilities of the new force characters, and then a dozen chapters more with the protagonist. . . Then the next new force, new character, and the plot repeats itself. New forces appear one after another, and new characters come one after another. It's so confusing that I can't even remember the names of the new characters that appeared before. The protagonists are Dong Yi Hammer and Xi Yi Bang. The dungeon appears, introduces the dungeon, introduces the characters, beats the dungeon, improves the data research a little, and then moves on to the next dungeon. The most important supporting character in the whole book is Long Jie. I endured boredom and watched the plot to save Long Jie, but then Long Jie never appeared to interact with the protagonist again. I was really convinced. . . Then I endured boredom and saw the plot of Hell Gate Castle, which was written like a running account.

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The only failure was that he somehow got involved with God's Chosen One, and got all messed up without getting any benefits. If he had desires, he could find a female dragon. He could have been happily eating melons on the side, but he had to get involved with the elves and gods. Didn't you know that the elves used the Dragon Mystery Lock to kill more than 90% of the dragon clan? Wait until the other dragons know that you and the elves are not clear. If the five-color dragon mother doesn't mess with you, the other dragons will. They all have inherited memories. In the end, the other dragons will hate you.

The biggest failure of this book is the career setting. I don't know how many people were poisoned by this setting, including me. Wanting to increase professional levels is the most rubbish setting there is. Don't say that the game is set like this, you also know that it is a game. It's like going to elementary school or college several times. Do you think this setting is courting death?

No one complained about the author's writing? It's so awkward, and many parts don't conform to the grammar of modern Chinese. The problem is that the number of words will not increase compared to writing normally. . .

It's awesome, it's awesome, it's really bad now. I just turned to the last few chapters to read this book. Hydraulics are not my problem, I can tolerate it, because daily life is also part of the novel and I can skip it without getting in the way. But, it started to happen again that I couldn't walk when I saw a woman. Is she being seduced by someone? Being tricked into giving birth to someone else's child? Halfway through the fight, that woman came to stop you for no apparent reason and you still tolerated it. After you endured it, the other person ungratefully demolished your home. As a result, the woman said that I have your child. Can you be accommodating? . . No, buddy, are you the one who put the poison in the novel? You inexplicably got your own child into your opponent's belly, and a bunch of calculated children are about to be born. You can still be a ninja. You are really a Ninja Turtle. That's it. A bad book

I have been working as a eunuch dragon, either writing about daily scientific research or fighting all the time. It is really boring to watch. I still need some tools to spice it up. Afterwards, the sage status should be more focused on scientific research. The dragonfly who started his career has always been an attractive memory point in the early stage, and the result has not been written in depth. Alas, are there any profitable dragon books about being a eunuch? No, not even one. This is the reality. Why is Game of Thrones so popular? It also has a name called Song of Killing and Fucking. Why are you using men from science and engineering as an excuse? The three men from science and engineering that I know are all pretty horny. They are men in their true colors.

A new book has been released. Is this book almost finished? Or is it that the author wants to publish both books?

This book was like ambrosia to me before I met the heroine. The officers are interesting and the battles are never boring. But when the author doesn't know what to think, it may be that the small head controls the big head. Write an unattractive heroine. It brought the male protagonist down as well. Then I guess my grades dropped. The author didn't have the heart to write anymore and was too weak to fight

I thought it was a time-travel story without a heroine, but it turned out to be a native. To be honest, if you haven't been a dragon before, don't write it. I also wrote six million words. I can't even imagine how boring it is. If you want to write about scientific research, it's better to write about wizards.

Update

Well, anyway, the new book supports Yiha.