What Do I Do Now That I've Suddenly Become an Immortal?

Cute new book, hope everyone can participate. So here we are recruiting for supporting roles. Both men and women, names in ancient and modern styles are acceptable. At the same time, we also collect place names, secret place names, etc. I hope I have the opportunity to copy your brands~ 🌹

What should you do if the saint uses your number to find a man?🤓

I know that you may see that the monthly rankings are not consistent with the posts in the book circle. I admit it, I deleted the post The later period is indeed not as good as the early period, and I do not deny it If you think there is something bad and there is something that needs improvement, I will not delete the post, and even welcome you, but you will not say what is bad, just say it is a vote. It's too poisonous, so I'm sorry, ban + delete post If you don't like it, you can delete the book, or even post it and say: "This is it", it's all fine, but you don't even read it, some are even free users (why are you talking nonsense?), Register as an ordinary user for 20 or 30 days, and post here, I will treat you like a troll. Of course, some people may really find this book unpalatable. I can only say I'm sorry that I didn't write it in the style you like Above

Joint activity 1 "What to do if you suddenly become an immortal" "Food Supplier" "My senior brother is too stable" "Life Game" "Shao Song" "When the doctor prescribes cheats" "Global Digging Party" "My Day Has 48 Hours" "Where is the Taoist Priest" "Player Super Justice" Joint Event 2 "The Catastrophe of All Races" "We will not get lost for the rest of our lives" "Lin Yuan Xing" "I really don't want to be reborn" "Reincarnation Paradise" "Loss Becoming a Richest Man Starts from the Game" "Sword of Dawn" "Monsters will die when they are killed" "I can extract proficiency" "The Enchantress Chaos" "I am really decent" "Da Dao Ji" Joint Event 3 "The Sound of Orchid Cicada" "My 1988 in the Golden Age" "The Master is actually by my side" "I dressed as a rare species in the world of immortality" "My Wife is the Evil God" "Happy World" "Where Does the Demon Go" "I'm Really Not a Demon" "The Equation of Heaven" "The Age of Genes" This is the catalog of this joint event

The biggest problem with this book is that the modern part wants to write about everything, but the author is obviously not good at it at all and lacks experience in this part, so the writing is full of poisonous points. For example, in the part about gambling on stones, there are also some big pavilions and seven pavilions that are very embarrassing to read. The author basically has no portrayal of real characters and lacks some social experience. Later he jumps to Qin Shihuang and Wu Zetian cultivating immortals. The ideas are very different, but until you have the ability to tell the story well, you should write less. The biggest attraction of this book is definitely the inter-travelling. The most interesting plot is the interaction between the two people after time-traveling. It is appropriate to write a novel with a detailed understanding. The first 3,400 chapters are about three days in the world of immortality. The three modern days are all described to him. Is it necessary? The World of Immortal Cultivation is at least like a story that can be read, but the modern content would have died a long time ago if it were published as a book. Beautiful landlady + a group of rich women with low IQs + tens of millions of gambling stones + solving supernatural crimes + tomb robbing + cultivating immortals with technology + ancient prophecies, and then several ancient people are fighting outside the earth + the protagonist becomes the principal of cultivating immortals... These are all cliche plots that detract from the story, and you are not very good at writing modern stories. For example, the figures in the world of immortality, at least Lu Ming, Fan Jianqiang, Su Shengnu and Dan Chengzi from the previous generation, all have relatively full-bodied images. When you mention their names, you can think of their personality characteristics and have a certain imagination of their appearance. Modern characters, on the other hand, are basically flat, including Wu Guodong and Zhou Na, who appear a lot, and have no unique "personality."

Please review it with caution as it involves a lot of spoilers. The early stage is good, the mid-term is weak, and the late stage is weak. The beginning of this book is excellent. I think the main surprise in the early stage lies in the contrast, that is, the embarrassing things of the ancient saint in modern times, and the protagonist's concealment of identity and transformation of the world in the world of immortality. Then the two change their identities and have to clean up each other's messes and be surprised by what the other does. The weakness in the mid-term is mainly because after adapting to the identity, it is like a protagonist opening two lines, and the thinking logic of the saint and the protagonist quickly fit together. It's like reading a Zhetianfeng novel + a Spiritual Energy Recovery novel at the same time. It seems quite satisfactory, but not as stunning as the previous one. This is mainly due to the rapid homogenization of the two protagonists. I won't introduce much about water in the later stage... So far, I have seen the saint pretending to be the male protagonist and fighting for wealth. I really don't understand how this section promotes the plot... In my opinion, it is a meaningless hydrological show-off. I think the quality of the book dropped because there was something wrong with the characterization. The biggest selling point lies in the two protagonists' different ideas for solving problems, and the conflicts and contradictions caused by different thinking logics. This character-driven novel gives up this advantage midway through. Evaluate the two lines again. The aura recovery line focuses on daily life in the early stage and focuses on changes in the later stage. The early stage of Xiuxian Boundary focuses on change, and the later stage focuses on adventure and the great world. In the early stage, the two lines can complement each other very well. One side is easy and the other is relatively intense. Then they form a complement, allowing readers to read well without being too tired. This is a very big advantage. Look at the spiritual energy recovery line alone. In the early stage, it is mainly the line of the saint, the nemesis of criminals (in fact, I think this line is very worthy of digging into, and it does not have to be skipped in the middle and later stages. It can be an important line in the formation of the saint's concept of good and evil). In the middle stage, it is the scientific analysis of the aura line, which is acceptable (it feels like the author is studying electrical, but he is not good at it). In the later stage, it is the line of world change. I think this line is a bit too stepped on abroad. Looking at the line of cultivating immortality, I think the worst thing about this line is that the reform of the world of immortality is not promoted so thoroughly. The dungeon in the mid-term is also a regular routine of the world of immortality. I don't see any bright spots due to the changes. I feel that the changes in the world of immortality have little impact on the protagonist group, and the dungeon is still based on the original ideas. Then I was really speechless when it came to comparing the wealth in the later period. If the previous changes were thorough enough, then just use the results of the previous changes to slap them in the face. This kind of wealth comparison feels like modern British gentlemen who insist on going to Daqingguo to compare wealth with landlords.

It's true, it's true that a good hand was ruined. In the early stage, I could just watch it, but later on, when I practiced the avatar and restricted myself, I still said that I had to listen to the avatar? It's a bit funny... It has already reached a win-win situation of cooperation. It is obvious that both sides want it, so why? You don't know what kind of person Lin is? Restricting and restricting all day long is quite boring. It is a way to forcefully create contradictory word counts... Not to mention there are many places to read. Practicing for Lin Fan is one way to solidify his foundation and resume his spiritual path. Incarnation training is another way to level up a large-scale power leveling to one hundred levels. It's also amazing to be able to directly start fighting between the left and right brains when practicing from the beginning... Also, regarding the setting of the world of immortality, where the weak can prey on the strong, can it be said that there is no plan? The most important thing about planning is to defeat the strong by the weak when it is a matter of life. To be able to be bluffed by the protagonist's move to the east and west is so shocking that it is both a god and a god... These are just one or two of them, there are more, so I won't list them all. It feels like the author's left and right brains are fighting each other, and the logic is so confusing that it's hard to read any more. My imagination is good, but I don't have the ability to finish it... What a pity.

How about this

It was quite interesting in the early stages, but the more I read in the later stages, the less interesting it became, so I was ready to abandon the book.

The early stage was good, there were jokes and some fun, but when the spiritual energy revived, it became extremely poisonous. The country dug up Qin Shihuang's tomb and let mukbang follow the whole live broadcast. The national leaders slapped the table in the world at every turn. The world was suddenly destroyed and the protagonist exploded a meteorite. The most awesome people on the earth have predicted the future of pig's feet. It's too poisonous, so why don't you just pretend to be cool and take your time? Suddenly you become invincible and take over the universe. The author's writing is not good and he can't control the big scene.