Our Immortal Tech Isn't Selling, Please Help Us

Haha, I suddenly thought of something funny. You recruited Chang'e in this novel, but Chang'e is playing cards with Hou Yi in another novel, and there are other novels with Chang'e as the female lead. Let's debate this further: Are you capturing Chang'e, or is Chang'e raising fish?

All the ideas are great, and the author's writing style is also good. It's just that the vision is too narrow. The protagonist is obsessed with monopolizing the business and wants his family to do everything. This is the celestial realm, and below it are countless other worlds. This number is absolutely enormous.

The beginning was pretty good, but Bai Xiaofei was a real letdown. If he didn't have those memories, it would be quite good, but the protagonist is already a transmigrator, so adding another one is really unnecessary. I couldn't take it anymore at this point, so I quit.

The scope feels a bit narrow. The world you're describing is vast, but your writing makes it feel small. I suggest the author travel more and see the world; it's truly a big place.

Seeing this Earth-themed bag/storage pouch feels so out of place. Can you imagine a fairy flying in the sky carrying or slinging a bag over her shoulder? Author, do you even think this could sell? Others research storage bags and rings, aren't they meant to be aesthetically pleasing and convenient? Making it a handbag is a step backward!

There's a glaring flaw that runs throughout the entire story: because they are immortals, or even powerful beings, they might be limited by their own thinking and haven't considered exploring these areas. However, once the protagonist raises the concept, these beings, with a little deduction, can understand it more thoroughly than the protagonist.

A patent description that can be 45,000 words long is truly impressive; the more I read, the more nauseating I feel.

I spent eight days reading Shennong's Poison Testing, on and off. Overall, there weren't many major flaws, but the quality wasn't great either. You could basically abandon the book before it was published (also, note that the book has a bad ending; the quality noticeably declined from chapter 280 onwards, basically just an expansion of the outline with no details).

The first mistake was that an ordinary person's soul transmigrated into the body of a celestial lord. Haha, putting aside everything else, just the fact that his memories spanned countless years could overwhelm your quantum entanglement.

So, this book, "The Showgirl," has been taken off the shelves? I only kept it for two days, and when I turned around, it was gone.