
Our Immortal Tech Isn't Selling, Please Help Us
仙机滞销,请帮帮我们
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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You Have Science, I Have Divine Arts
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Haha, I suddenly thought of a funny point. You include Chang'e in this novel. Chang'e plays poker with Hou Yi in another novel. There are also Chang'e heroines in other novels. Detailed debate: Are you recruiting Chang'e? Or is Chang'e raising fish?
All the ideas are good, and so is the author's writing. The layout is just too small. The protagonist always thinks about doing monopoly business and wants to do everything by himself and his family. This is the fairy world, and there are countless worlds connected below. The number of people is absolutely huge. The protagonist's sect possesses the Chaos Mirror, which is the foundation of its foundation. Others cannot connect the heavens and all realms without such a treasure. Why can I only make my own mobile phone? You can also let other big forces do it. As long as you can not only win over the other party with benefits and make yourself more friends, you can also bundle benefits. You can search for a little patent fee for each mobile phone. If you have ten top-quality spiritual stones for one mobile phone, you can charge one as a patent fee for each mobile phone. This way mobile phones can be popularized faster. And as the upstream, you can collaborate with everyone to set the price, so that there will be no situation of mutual price reduction. The faster mobile phones are launched, the earlier content can be produced. Content is the big deal. If the content is done well, the money spent on selling mobile phones will not even be considered a fraction compared to making the content. If you want to make your business bigger, you cannot exclude any force. The most important thing is to use mobile phones to attract all major forces to create a monopoly. Once you form an alliance, everything in the later stages can be done together. As far as the concept of the protagonist in the book is concerned, his idea of doing business is to kill his peers, and suppress anyone who may become a peer. I don't know how to express this concept. This is the world of cultivation or the world of immortality, not an annoying world where everyone is the same. In this world where strength is respected, if you don't have the strength to challenge the whole world alone, if others attack you in groups, you won't even have a place to complain. There are also some concepts in the book, as if enemies can only be enemies. In any world, interests are important, and it is the same in the fairy world. So why can't enemies become allies? The whole book gave me the feeling of being a petty person, not being generous enough in doing things, and not having long-term goals. You are the Holy Land, so you have enough strength to protect your own interests. Under this premise, we should unite all the top forces to make the cake bigger. Rather than denying others admission and treating others as objects of suppression. The world is so big that you can make any cake. If you don't do it well, the benefits will be endless. But the protagonist is a petty person.
The early stage was good, but Bai Xiaofei was really a failure. If he didn't have those memories, it would be pretty good, but the protagonist is already a time traveler, and here comes another one. It's really not necessary. Anyway, I saw that I couldn't stand it here anymore, so I withdrew.
I feel that the layout is a bit small and the world described is very big. What you write feels very small. I suggest the author to go outside and see more. The world is still very big.
It feels so inconsistent to see the earth bag storage bag. Can you imagine what it would look like when a fairy flies in the sky to carry a bag or cross it? Author, please think about whether this thing can be sold. Others have studied storage bags. Isn't the storage ring just beautiful and convenient? Your handle is a step backwards.
There is a loophole that is the most obvious and runs through the entire article. Because they are immortals, or even powerful people, they may be limited by their thinking and have not thought about exploring these aspects. But once the pig's feet come up with this concept, they can understand it more thoroughly than the pig's feet with a little deduction. Don't doubt the brain computing power of the immortals. We mortals can draw inferences about other cases because of the development of an idea. What about the immortals? He can straighten things out for you. So the biggest flaw is that everyone is reduced to the level of ordinary mortals.
A patent description can be written in 45,000 words, which is really amazing. The more I read it, the more I vomit.
Shen Nong Tested the Poison. I spent 8 days reading this book intermittently. Generally speaking, it is not too big or too toxic, but the quality is not very good either. It can be said that you can basically abandon the book before it is put on the shelf. (Also, it reminds me that the book is unfinished, and the quality has dropped significantly since Chapter 280. , Basically an expansion of the outline without details), this book has gone through several processes, including publishing a fairy tale, being plagiarized, slapped in the face, being beaten by Didi, novels, live broadcasts, Taobao, digital banking (Alipay), games..., It is almost a streamlined operation.
The first failure is that an ordinary person's soul penetrates the body of the Holy Lord of the Immortal Realm. Haha, if you don't say anything else, just say that someone with countless years of memory can praise your quantum entanglement state.
So this show has been taken off the shelves? I only had it for two days, but when I turned around I found it was gone.