A Magic Card a Day: The Gods of the World

Overall, there weren't any major problems, except the everyday scenes were written rather awkwardly, especially the romance scenes, which were so cringeworthy I could have dug my toes out of my head. If you're not good at writing romance, you could downplay that part of the story, reduce its emphasis, or even omit it altogether. Otherwise, it's really quite good.

There are still some minor flaws; the everyday writing is a bit cringe-worthy, and why does the world have to be divided into pieces? Relatively speaking, wouldn't merging be better?

The author doesn't even know what a saint is. Is the only difference between a saint and an ordinary believer who contributes more faith power? You're writing a Western fantasy novel; you should at least do some research. You're only a level 2 divine being, not even a demigod, yet you have hundreds of saints? You're just spouting nonsense.

It's a bit much to just expel the Desolate God Realm directly. Even trash has its uses. Setting it up so that the Desolate God Realm can only merge into other people's god realms and become subordinate gods, never able to surpass its own main god, and its development will slow down. It also has to pay taxes on the faith it absorbs. How about that? Is it too late?

The protagonist seems to lack any divine mindset, resembling a short-lived ghost. If you have a clan born with a soul, you might as well play Abyss Bloodbath. Since you can only use two divine eggs a day, you might as well sell the extras to buy food. Low-level divine creatures have 1-10 divine eggs, so even high-level ones only have a maximum of 10,000. Even with two eggs at 5,000 divination points a day, it would only last about thirteen or fourteen years.

I started watching, and after about ten pages, I felt like the main character was an idiot!

A copycat work, but without the writing style.

So far, there isn't a single book in this genre that I've been able to finish.

Why haven't you updated? 😡😡😡😡

A question suddenly occurred to me: if they've become gods, immortal and indestructible, why do they still need to get married and have children? Is it to pass on culture? To increase the number of gods? Too many gods will cause conflict. If they're going to get married and have children, why don't they just have a whole bunch? Do gods also have family planning policies?