Lord of Halanza

From 888 to 889, there were ironwood resources in the protagonist's territory and a warning sign was erected. A group of mercenaries sneaked in at night (just out of curiosity to see if they could get anything good), and then they were discovered by his men and shot arrows to warn them several times before rushing in. Finally, when the mercenaries left, one of them was seriously injured (shot in the chest), and Samira killed them all. I wonder if this is not the fault of himself? You ran into someone else's private property and hurt someone after being warned. Even if you didn't mean to hurt someone, you just did it, and you deserve it no matter what the price you pay! In the end, when the main character B arrived, he actually blamed her for being too cruel, and said that she had no regard for life even though she had the strength. It was so fucking disgusting to me! What did this guy do when he caught the fraudster? He just killed someone secretly and took all the money without saying a word, and then pretended to be dumb! What is it? Is it too harsh to say this now? Are you ignoring life when you still have the strength? You like to be both responsible and independent, right?                 ，，b，nm！ How cowardly do you have to be to tolerate such anger? How did you come up with it? And you, a modern person, don't know how profitable exclusives and real estate are, right? The life magic pattern of a level 3 monster is not something that every monster can completely peel off. Only this protagonist can discover and completely peel off the life magic pattern at any time. In addition, only he can perfectly reproduce the life magic pattern. This exclusive craft is only sold for the price of an ordinary Thunder Rhinoceros! What kind of bullshit logic is this? You have to know that an ordinary Thunder Rhino can only transport goods, but the upgraded Thunder Rhino is an 8-meter-high mobile fortress. Not only does it have armor and physical strength, it can also add 52 archers and two crossbow beds! Not only can you have the commanding heights on the battlefield at any time, but there is also heavy firepower to suppress it. What does this mean that you have no B skills? And the protagonist actually thinks that the pricing of real estate is very high because of two natives. He really has no time traveler's brains at all!

The first three hundred chapters show that the author still has some ideas. Therefore, some language errors and minor setting issues are not too entangled. But as I look at it, I feel that the author is becoming more and more perfunctory. The battles are homogeneous, high EQ is concise and clear, and low EQ is contradictory and contradictory. Author, don't you think your force settings are confusing? The protagonist's efforts can be seen at the beginning, but the subsequent growth is completely the author's golden fingers. Sacrifice solves everything. If it doesn't work, he will arrange a coincidence, provide resources (Salamanders), and give outrageous drops. Resources seem to never be exhausted, and the long-term agreements signed later in the book make the "exploitation will not last long" described above a joke. As for the problem of the protagonist entrusted by the real Surdak, Sheila is confusing. What readers see is an image that is not warm and only wants grandchildren. The author also repeatedly emphasizes whether the grandson can inherit knights or even nobles in the future. I'm very confused. The author made the protagonist treat the Suldak family so well, and then he did this. I don't know if it's for realism, or if it's just a response. (Maybe the author is Wen Qing, and there are no points for Shuangwen?) Let's talk about the setting issue. 1. The author sets up the Western aristocratic class and slavery. I wonder if the author really knows the sentence "The vassals of my vassals are not my vassals"? Constantine, it's weird to whom the protagonist calls "sir". This is just a minor issue. 2. The protagonist is recruiting soldiers. Has the author forgotten the obligation to lead the people? Maybe it's the protagonist, Our Lady, so there's no need to be strong. But has the author ever thought that according to the background set by the author at that time, some people would not go to the benefits provided by the protagonist, not only in Wall Village, but also in the poor villages nearby? Then there is the running training arranged by the author to eliminate people, which can only be said to be divorced from reality. Furthermore, what does the author think of raising soldiers? Raising troops for a thousand days and using them for a while, discipline and skills without long-term training were difficult to develop at a time when the literacy rate was low. This military training is not as good as giving it away directly from my father-in-law's golden finger. 3. Issues of marriage and giving away daughters. I have to say that although the author wanted to make the article enjoyable, it was really poisonous. It's difficult to reconcile cool writing with realism. Don't embarrass yourself if you don't have enough writing skills. If you want to write, you can learn from some great writers, such as "The Heroes of the World". Although the golden finger (sacred attribute) given to the protagonist by the author is very rare, it is obvious that his father-in-law Luther was forced to become wise. As for Lucy, although I don't know the author's follow-up arrangements, I skipped through a few chapters and it seems that there is no follow-up at all. I can only say that the author has arranged the so-called regrettable response? What about the arrangement of the protagonist's ex-girlfriend? Selena's presence is still low in Chapter 500, let alone Lina. In addition, there are many small problems, such as language, good people (everywhere), perpetual motion machines, maps, food production, and tone of voice. The background set by the author is actually very good, but in order to make the story more interesting, you go all the way through production and fighting, and finally even start setting up the background, which makes the setting confusing, the foreshadowing has no follow-up, and the book will be unreadable.

How should I put it? Too many typos affect the viewing experience. This is one of them, but it can be tolerated. However, the more unbearable it is, the almost no psychological description of the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist's actions are completely arranged by the author however he wants to arrange for the protagonist. It is not like a "living person" driving the development of the story on his own. For example, the problem of the heroine throughout the book, there is no psychological description at all, she just goes straight to it, I don't understand it at all. You say you are a native, you want to fulfill your promise, you also go straight to the wife of your dead comrade, and all kinds of noble ladies are welcome. The problem is that I can tolerate even the one from a certain family. After all, there are two people who have been in the same trouble together, but that noble noble and that Hai, they are just like women and men. But all in all, there is still too little activity in my heart, not enough life. After seeing what happened later, I really feel that it's okay.

I've had this book on my bookshelf for several years. I picked it up today and deleted it. First of all, when Cong woke up, she kept using her Chinese name to give people a lot of drama. I won't go into it. Everyone is in their own eyes. Then, Lord Halanza, you are advancing at such a speed that I really looked at the word count in the whole book and it didn't exceed 5 million words. Then I just swallowed it. I can only say that readers who like to be steady, give away their daughters, survive, and hand over profits are blessed.

The author must stick to his original intention and not be distracted by trolls. As a bookworm of fourteen years, I like your writing very much. I have been following My Magic Age since the 50th chapter was updated, and I have always read the original version. It's just that my previous mobile phone number has changed. This account was only created three years ago.

I've been a bookworm for more than ten years, and I've read a lot of good Western lord novels, such as The Great Dragon's Death, The Darkness Trilogy, and The Witcher series. I feel that none of them are as good as this book, which makes people feel not tired and comfortable to read. It has both passion and farming development. Well, it's a very good novel!

Very excellent work. I originally came to Qidian just to give it a try, but I didn't expect to find what I wanted. The article is very delicate and fluent. If you want to read a refreshing article, please turn right. This is how delicate descriptions of the Western world should be, real and cruel. This novel does not have the usual 21st century Oriental thinking and description style. If you feel that the author should not buy the water chapter, please do not gossip below. Clicking on these words will really increase your blood pressure.

It's a very touching book. I downloaded it specifically to read it from the starting point. First of all, the writing is smooth, and at least it doesn't look awkward. It's really hard to read a novel with average writing after reading too many high-quality books! The second is that the setting is relatively reasonable, and the data will not be messed with for the sake of fun, and the small universe will explode at every turn. Third IQ is online, no matter you or your opponent in the supporting role, at least there is no one who gives away equipment like a fool! My favorite setting is not dark. In fact, there are not so many evil people in real life. Most of the people around me are relatively normal and friendly. There will be intrigues and intrigues, but they don't happen all the time. I hope it can be updated steadily.

I have read a lot of Western lord fantasy novels, and the better ones are basically too big to contain, and there are too many invincibles. I feel that this book has a good foundation, not only territory development, but also upgrades. Don't be too picky. Come on, the author doesn't want eunuchs, this book will be a success!

At present, I have read 3.27 Million words and more than 1,000 chapters, which are basically all ordered. My reading experience is very poor these days (personal opinion), so I'm ready to run away. I still recommend new readers to support it, the front part is quite interesting. What attracted me the most was the delicate depiction of another world and the daily life in another world. Overall, I feel that the writing is good, and it can depict the magnificent, magical and extraordinary power of another world. The pace is very relaxed, the battles are still exciting, and the characters other than the protagonist are portrayed quite well. The reason why I'm running away now is that this book currently has more than three million words, which is not too short, but it feels like many of the stories are not yet on track. It's like power doesn't have a system yet, it's very confusing. Especially in the recent chapter, the second-turn protagonist student protects the third-turn teacher. It is difficult for me to understand why this happened. The subsequent battle was really too long. It was basically all sacrifices, holy light, and healing techniques, and there was no smooth battle. Since the protagonist went to Bailin to open up a plane, the characters have basically disappeared. It can be said that only the harem group and the tool people are left. The description of the atmosphere, characters, and environment in the latter part is much more than in the previous part. I don't know if it's because there are no new characters or something else. It feels more and more stale and cliché. I felt unhappy and made some complaints. After all, I spent money on it.

The failure of this novel is that the protagonist is mute and pretends to be someone else. Enough of a trap,

The author is very capable, and the writing is good, and hard work will always bear fruit, no matter what; but you need to conceive your work quickly, and the reader's patience is always easily exhausted, isn't it?

Some people don't like harems or multiple heroines, while others do. A book can never satisfy everyone, and it can never satisfy everyone's tastes. The author must make a choice. In the genre of Western fantasy, I think there are more readers who like multiple female protagonists. When I watch Western Fantasy, I like multiple female protagonists. Western Fantasy without a harem is really boring. You might as well think about it: Isn't the Beast-Eared Girl delicious? Isn't she sweet? Dragon Niang, doesn't she smell good? Isn't she a mermaid? Succubus, doesn't she smell good? Isn't she sweet? There are also nuns (priests) and female knights on the human side The author still understands it very well. The author and I are of the same mind. If one day I start writing a book, all the above will be there

Personally, I think it's a very interesting book, but it's a pity that the author ended it too quickly. I thought it was a million-level book, but it's a pity.

I have read the latest one, and I am about to start reading it again. I would like to ask all my book friends if they have any similar novels, such as Western fantasy, sword and magic.

It has been more than 9 years, but I still remember the delicate, close-to-life, and novel feeling that I had when I read Mortal. It is reproduced in this book. It is wonderfully written. I like this kind of novels where every section is carefully polished. This is a good book like tasting a fine wine. My original wishes were written till the end, and I wrote it until it reaches the altar.

Whether it is the description of the battlefield during the plane war, the cultural scenery on the "homecoming" journey, or the barren small countryside in the hometown of his comrades, it can indeed bring a sense of immersion to readers. But I encountered a typo as soon as I sank in, dear? ! This is the most basic attitude issue, right? Then the plot design is too freehand. Many readers complained about logical problems, but I think it is more like a structural problem. Take the protagonist's team doing private work when conducting reconnaissance missions. If the author emphasizes that the army's logistics are stretched, the weapons and equipment must be maintained by the soldiers at their own expense, and the prices are high and the military salary is not enough, and finally a wave of other troops who have no ability to do private work, then the reader will easily understand - the task is above, and making money and saving lives is yours. The author has written all this content, but when a good hand is played, readers will not turn to the previous article to summarize and find evidence. Finally, let's talk about my personal thoughts: Reading it is like eating Wallace, it tastes pretty good, but when I swallow it, I think it's not right. When I read the comments, everyone else ran away, and I could only stare at the bathroom with toilet paper in a superimposed state of flushing or not flushing. Whether to abandon this book or not to abandon it is indeed a question.

The first half of the book is well written, and the overall worldview is good. But I can only say that the second half of the book is perfunctory, full of nonsense, and overwhelmingly filled with meaningless plots. The characters are getting more and more mentally retarded, and I feel like I can't write anymore, and I don't want to be a eunuch, just because of the word count.

Needless to say, this is the only work that I, a prostitute for thousands of years, have paid to read, and it is worth it.

The student party just gave me a huge reward of 5 yuan, and tomorrow's breakfast is gone😭. The writing is okay, but the protagonist should stop touching his nose. This action is really super low. I don't understand why so many writers like to write that the protagonist's habitual action is to touch the nose. Is it because of the runny nose?

It looks okay now, but it's not easy for a 10-year-old bookworm to find a book.

Isn't Darcy a red-haired swordswoman? Why did she become blonde? Please explain.

Like it very much. It would be great if it wasn't serialized.

It took me a few weeks to catch up, and if I write it like this, I still need 15 million words. Become a dragon knight to conquer the plane and become a princess.

The Battle of Moyunling should be the first climax of this book. As a result, neither He Boqiang's sadness over Suldak's death, nor the protagonist's resentment towards the devil, nor his disappointment at the incompetence of the staff group were revealed. The protagonist did not gather the troops to resist on the way to escape, and ended up writing a cliché story about a hero saving a beautiful girl. He obviously saved her but didn't seem to see the existence of an emotional line. So what is the purpose of this plot? The confrontation with the academy swordsmen in the city was even more immature, and the young nobles were portrayed as too stupid. This is where I abandon the book.

Fourteen or forty?

The third transfer has finally been mentioned. When can the third transfer be arranged? The rhythm...

Looking forward to the next one 👍

The author's writing style is very good and the framework is very good. Many characters are brilliantly written. A piece of grass jelly But I have to complain. Darcy is dead. . I really can't stand it. And it's after the protagonist helps. . And there is no reason why I suddenly got engaged and got married. . Are you waiting for the protagonist to confess? I thought the plot was that the family was forced to marry into the family. . The result is not that the motivation for the behavior is very unreasonable. Then he died like that. The writing was really unreasonable. . I can accept death, but I can't accept it being unclear. . What a waste of such a well-written character with soul. And in the later stage, the protagonist obviously lacks civilian personnel. Can't the two eldest ladies take over? A lot of management can participate The succubus's children are in such a miserable condition. Do we need to think of a way? Protagonist, there is no problem in fighting the final battle in the Warsaw plane. . The writing is very detailed, but it must also fit the character's mental journey. . The latter is a bit unreasonable. But it's a really good book. But when can I learn the legend? At least the legend ends. . The two protagonists are one at level one and one at level two.

The overall structure of the two novels is very grand, and the writing style is rich and thick. They are definitely at the top of the works I have read in recent years. Come on!.