My Magic Era

I once watched the Spider-Man arc to the end and the Naga arc in one go, but I haven't read it in a few months. First of all, some compliments: 1. The author's writing is excellent and beautiful, and the battles are also very enjoyable to watch. 2. Many supporting characters have plump characters, outstanding personalities, and online IQs. 3. The length of the copy is measured in almost volumes, and the descriptions of each copy are extremely detailed, especially the Black Forest Chapter and the Island Chapter, which exceed my understanding of "copy". Let's talk about the poisonous points: In the first volume, the protagonist, as a time traveler, is actually charming. He has an undisguised envy of the aristocratic status, and an undisguised disgust for the civilian status, especially the aristocratic scum and envy of their status. The protagonist is brainless. He was less than 10 years old at the time and has the soul of a 30-year-old low-level worker. However, he does things without thinking. Not only does he habitually expose his trump card, but he is also proud of it. The main character, the Virgin, is the biggest poisonous point. As a hidden line in the first volume, the author has been laying the groundwork for a long time, but it is difficult to cover up the literary youth temperament and ignore the process for the sake of the result. The protagonist repeatedly spares the villain's noble team, and even prevents the powerful from coming to help, hoping that the harsh environment will scare off the villain's pursuit. Killing a popular supporting character is also a manifestation of the author's youthful illness. It is precisely because the protagonist, the brainless Madonna, lets the villain go, exposes her abilities, puts her friends at a disadvantage, and ultimately kills the popular supporting character, which also allows the undercurrent of "resurrection" to run throughout the book. From the moment the protagonist enters the academy, dominating the strong becomes a powerful weapon for the protagonist, such as female orc warriors, tauren, etc. Although this writing method allows the protagonist to quickly jump up the ranks and challenge the strong, it is undeniable that it seriously slows down the protagonist's upgrade speed. Think about Qin Lie in "Spirit Realm", he is always a small man dragging a group of big guys to help him fight, which is neither interesting nor epic. What is personally unbearable is the harem, and the protagonist is not a spiritual harem, but a physical harem. Several times, the protagonist wakes up in the bed of different women every day, which is so poisonous that it is difficult for me to recover. Even the descriptions of several women are very good. Taking it all together, I personally think this is a more wonderful novel than "Harry Potter". If it were made into a series of movies, it would definitely be very good-looking, but it is undeniable that the poisonous points in it are unbearable.

If the representation of women in the book is deleted to a large extent, then I personally think this book can be said to be a classic representative of fantasy works. This is my most direct and intuitive feeling when reading this book. When I read the first 100 chapters, the plot of the book may not have unfolded yet. It only described various experiences in this fantasy world in the form of travel, and the description of the female characters was limited to one or two, so I didn't feel particularly uncomfortable. However, starting from the back, I found that nearly half of the entire book was mainly about unrealistic fantasies and unreliable exchanges with women, which was very boring. Many popular works nowadays directly use no heroine or single heroine as the highlight of the book. Although there is indeed a small number of readers who like harem novels, I think it is really a waste based on the author's writing style. It is better to delete 3 million words and condense the remaining 3 million words into a classic fantasy novel, which is more reliable. The description of fantasy in this book is so attractive to me, but it's a pity that I really can't stand the lengthy remarks about women.

The first-person narrative is quite good, very immersive, and the advantages outweigh the disadvantages I am currently watching Wasteland, Chapter 131, and I can't stand it anymore. What I can't stand is the protagonist's scum. The previous chapter describes the protagonist's flirting with various women. A seven-year-old child flirts with various women. It is normal for girls to like cute and cute children, so it is understandable that the protagonist is popular with women (self-comfort, self-interpretation) , people understand that you are a seven-year-old child who is not defensive, so it doesn't matter if you let the protagonist eat tofu, a seven-year-old child, you can be a man or a woman, so I understand these things But I can accept that the previous setting is that the protagonist is from time travel, and has a very old psychological age, okay, in modern society, is there anyone who sees a woman's legs like a pig brother, is he in a daze and can't walk, the protagonist is so old and has never touched a woman? You've never eaten pork before but you've seen pigs run away, so you use a long paragraph to describe that the protagonist freezes when he sees a woman, gives up thinking, and forcibly loses his intelligence. This is too poisonous Okay, speaking of the above, I can still bear it, but when I saw Chapter 131, a female character at the age of seventeen (in ancient times, seventeen-year-olds fully matured and gave birth to children) and a seven-year-old child, tongue kiss! ! ! ! ! . . . . . . I couldn't stand it any more The more I thought about it, the more poisonous I became 😅😅😅😅

I am very curious, why whenever the protagonist sees a female character, no matter how many times he has seen it or whether he is familiar with it, he still has to describe her appearance. What's even more amazing is that every character has a curvy front and back. Is this the author's unique hobby🐎?

My personal thoughts after reading it are that the character of the protagonist began to collapse from the end of the first volume. An important supporting character died trying to save the protagonist. The author's writing was unclear and there was no foreshadowing. How could it lead to a climax? It feels like it was forcibly written to death. When I read the early part of the second volume, I couldn't stand the protagonist's womanly kindness. He knew the consequences of being caught and kept making mistakes to expose himself, but because of the protagonist's halo, he was okay. The author didn't handle it well and it became a big poisonous point. But there is no problem with one saying that it is written in the first person.

A world with gods and dragons. The author wrote 1,600 chapters and the protagonist is still a little mage of more than 10 levels. The key is that it still sucks. I paid for this book and bought a watch last year.

I have read more than a hundred chapters. The content is really good, but the main character is really not good. She is too holy and stupid. As an adult time traveler, the main character is really disappointing. Such good content is wasted. There's no reason why the rating is so low. There are too many poisonous points and it's frustrating to watch.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I couldn't help but give up in the end. I can only say that the public's eyes are sharp. It's damn good that this author is so popular. There are too many questions. The whole process was not exciting, it could even be said to be boring. Most chapters are not coherent, which seriously affects the reading experience. I always like to insert long descriptions in unnecessary places. It can be seen that the author likes to describe the details of the world very much. But there are too many of these parts, and most of them are unnecessary. Even if there are so many cumbersome, useless and boring words just to create a sense of immersion, it will be off-putting. The article will not be condensed. To put it nicely, it is to describe to the readers an imaginary exotic world. To put it badly, it is to "fill in the water". And it is different from the deliberate watering down by other authors. What you write seriously is more tasteless than just trolling. The boring thing makes people think you are trolling. This is the saddest thing. Different authors have different style habits. Some people like to think of a good story before writing it, while others like to finish writing the first draft and then slowly revise it, deleting, deleting, editing and compressing the 10,000 words down to 5,000. Just to make the article interesting. And I think the biggest shortcoming of this book is that it is "boring". On various levels. There was no fluctuation in my heart throughout the whole process. The few times I read it, it wasn't because the book was good, but because the poison made me sick. Maybe the plot will get better in the future, or there may be more poisonous points, but the first half just gave me the feeling of boredom. You won't be bored watching it in your free time. It's tasteless to eat, and it's not a pity to throw it away.

In fact, I have abandoned this book for a long time, and I shouldn't complain about it again. However, since I came across this book by chance, I naturally recalled the emotion that filled my heart when I first read this book, and the anger that ignited in my heart when I read this book now. The beginning is actually quite good. The first person should never be too fussy. Although it may not be as convenient as the third person in some aspects, the sense of immersion is stronger. However, the character's IQ rises and falls, the character's personality is forcibly distorted to promote the plot, and the combat power system is forcibly ignored for the needs of the plot, as well as the first person's lack of sense of substitution due to the excessive amount of third-person information, all challenged my patience little by little. Because of the comment in the review that it would be better in the middle and later stages, I endured and subscribed to 4 volumes. But what I found was that the character's personality was even more distorted, and the character's IQ continued to fluctuate. So I gave up. After half an hour of writing the book review, my anger has almost dissipated. I am surprised that I can still spend so much time on this book that I have abandoned for so long. Okay End OK

Let's talk about the Age of Magic. This book has very distinctive features: a slow-burning story, detailed environmental descriptions, and delicate emotional descriptions. Reading this book is a completely different feeling from a fast-paced and refreshing novel. The most attractive thing about this book is the heroines. Yes, I like multiple heroines, but I don't like brainless harems and stallions. After finishing a heroine, the heroine becomes completely invisible, and novels with no role are a bit disgusting. This book spends a lot of chapters to create the image of the heroine. Each heroine has a distinctive character, and the character image is full and vivid: Qige, Bingxue is smart, unruly, strong, very independent and action-oriented, and has a strong ambition in magic herbal medicine. Yingli, in a word, is the feeling of first love on campus, from campus love to marriage, every little bit, the accumulated feelings over time Katrina, with her endless tolerance and endless tenderness for the protagonist, is probably Jijia's most nostalgic embrace. Mora Yaer, who dares to pursue love and has her own persistence in magic, feels like a sister, Jijia is like her child adoptive husband Aliya, the widow, has all the advantages of successful business and mature women, intellectual and gentle, and well-rounded in dealing with people. . . . I won't list them one by one. I like all the heroines, but the author handled the Qige line very poorly. Qige waited for the protagonist for eight years, but there was no news from the protagonist for eight years. Kurtz also told Qige that the protagonist was dead, which was completely unreasonable. The protagonist obviously wrote a lot of letters to Qi Ge, but the author decided to arrange a scene where the letters were seized by Qi Ge's uncle. It was in this deceived situation that Qi Ge got engaged to Wales. The section where the letter was seized is the biggest failure of Qige's emotional line. Only when the protagonist's letter is received, Qige's persistence will become reasonable and the engagement will not occur. Besides, isn't it very romantic for lovers who are separated in two places to exchange letters and express their feelings to each other? Moreover, the love between Qi Ge and the protagonist is completely affected by family pressure and political situation. First, the protagonist's letter was seized by the Qige family, and then Qige waited to no avail. Due to family pressure, he got engaged to Wales. Finally, he could only use the political situation to break off the engagement with Wales. Ji Jia has absolutely no control over the love between himself and Qige, and can only drift with the crowd pitifully and pathetically. Although the ending is good, it is annoying to watch and makes the protagonist feel useless.

The Holy Mother is really disgusting. I really like this book, but when I see the plot of The Holy Mother, I want to go back in time and beat up the author. It's really disgusting.

The protagonist is an adult, the protagonist is an adult, the protagonist is an adult. Please don't just turn into a child's perspective. The more powerful and delicate the article is, the more frustrating it will be to read. . . Especially the early stage of the article. Of course, because it is the early stage, I am not familiar with this world, and I can say that I am still a little scared. It's been hundreds of chapters and you're still like this. Instead of setting the protagonist as an adult who travels back in time, let's just let a local child bring the memories of earthlings, but don't bring life experiences. Such a protagonist's behavior and social survival style can be described by the author.

I accidentally discovered this book more than a week ago and spent more than a week reading it in a daze. I would like to share my humble opinion. 1. The author's writing skills are very good. Even if he writes in the first person, which is criticized by thousands of people, it will not make the readers feel uncomfortable in the first person. The narrative and character scenes of the novel are also very natural. The author also rarely describes third-person scenes to avoid this. 2. World view setting The author is very smart. The whole article does not clearly tell you that the world in the novel is set on the basis of Diablo 2 and World of Warcraft. However, the names of each magic skill, monster name, and item name in the article remind you: Hey, this is Diablo 2, and that is World of Warcraft. The world view setting backed by the advantages of two major IPs is organized and allows veteran players to seamlessly participate. Anyway, I laughed while watching it: Yeah, isn't this kudzu an item in World of Warcraft? Damn, the word "life skills" is a direct copy of World of Warcraft. Finally, a beautiful fantasy world is portrayed for readers. 3 Characters The author's portrayal is very successful. When talking about Ying Li, you will think of the gentle image of the leader's sister. When talking about Qige, you will think of the image of an unruly and eccentric royal sister. Even when talking about the supporting role of Marvin, you will think of the image of a one-armed shrewd apprentice businessman. The IQs of the protagonist and villain cannot be said to be very high, but they are both online. 4. Just like the novel label "Calm", the pace of this novel is slow and steady. This is not in line with the current mainstream trend of fast-paced and refreshing novels, but it is a treasure for someone like me who has been reading for more than ten years. The joy of slowly understanding the joys, sorrows, sorrows and joys of each character, rather than the rapid progress of the novel, reminds me of another novel "The Dust of History". 5. Unfortunately, the author's update attendance performance is not very good. This is the biggest taboo in the popularity of online novels. This will lead to the loss of a large number of readers. This update problem will lead to low popularity, and low popularity will cause the author to end hastily. Right! I personally think that this hasty ending is the biggest regret of this part. According to the author's rhythm, I think there should be an Eastern Continent chapter, a return to the orc country, etc. The last chapter should be the chapter where the protagonist reaches the peak of his magic. This book is not without its shortcomings, but if the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, it is a good novel.

I support the author, what the so-called experts in the online literature industry say about single heroine, third person, etc. It's completely stupid. Have you ever read a literary classic? The essence of the novel is the author's world structure, imagination and logic, which can build a magnificent world for readers. The language is also very transparent, which shows the author's skill. It seems to have the same excitement as when I read Devil's Rules and Tomb of Gods. I have been running on the road to school, and my daily expenses are also very tight. I am reading both pirated and pirated versions of online novels. Most of the original versions are those that are popular and not many people read. This book has good results, but I am preparing to get the official version. I feel that I have just entered the middle and late chapters. I look forward to a good ending. Many novels start to collapse in the second half. I look forward to a wonderful second half of this book.

As an 11-year-old reader, I personally like it very much and find it very comfortable to read. It's very slow, don't fall into the trap if you are impatient. It's a pity that the orc brothers I have always missed did not meet the protagonist.

There is no doubt that the first volume of this book has some bad points. For example, the author of Wannian set the protagonist as seven years old, but the author has not changed it yet and narrates it as five years old every time. However, these are minor problems and do not affect the reading and plot. In the process of establishing the world view in the first volume, the author uses delicate writing to slowly reveal the background of a magical world, and also has a good portrayal of the protagonist and supporting characters. Although the portrayal of the protagonist's perspective seems a bit too cumbersome and uncomfortable, after reading a few chapters and getting into the mood, there is no doubt that it is a pleasure to read! I still remember that when I watched Huang Yi, it seemed like "The Legend of the Great Swordsman" was narrated from the perspective of the protagonist. I was not used to it at the beginning but after I got into the pleasure of reading, I still read it in one sitting. It was very satisfying. Even at the end of the first volume, part of the protagonist appears to have lost his wits, and the main female character in the first volume was written off as a result (Guoguo Magician), it does not affect the excellence of the first volume. I guess the new author's creative flaws are understandable. But at the beginning of the second volume, the author switched to God's perspective and wrote four or five chapters, which made everyone feel sick and unable to swallow. Those who wanted to jump to read it didn't know how many chapters the author had from God's perspective, so they could only subscribe and quickly look for the word "I". To be honest, based on my subsequent reading experience, those few chapters were unnecessary and did not affect subsequent reading. But then, the author did not adjust the progress of the protagonist at all. In the state where the female supporting character who mainly affected the protagonist died for him, the author arranged for the protagonist to slowly recognize a new parent and a new sister, then slowly awaken the magician and start school, and then slowly enter the group of women, and then again Let's take a medieval duel legacy. If you want to duel the protagonist, agree to it (didn't the author consider the shortcomings of the protagonist's development that he will encounter opponents at any time and ask for non-stop duels?) Especially the unscrupulous Madonna-like use of magic to reduce intelligence in the middle before going to the magic academy and awakening the Mochi. (Walk on water to transport troops, a moron operation) There is no doubt that "the author is basically unable to balance the mental level of the protagonist's pre-travel age experience and post-travel physical age." Before the time travel, he set the mind of an adult, and after the time travel, he traveled to a five-year-old child. The author's follow-up arrangements for the protagonist after writing the main female protagonist Guoguo to death were completely unable to win the approval of many readers, including me. Recently, I suddenly discovered that the author also set various planes, and the main interface... I suddenly lost interest in reading it. The orc world, the elf world, the dwarf world, and the human world have basically not been explored yet, and the so-called planes have been set up? ! ! ! Ascending to the latitude level? This kind of telling the truth is no longer interesting. It's a pity to abandon the book!

At first I thought it was unfinished, but when I came across this masterpiece, I didn't want to read it. I waited until it was finished before reading it. Then I came across this novel again after so many years, and I still had more to say. The story in the first volume was very good, and the flaws were not hidden, and it had the visual feel of a road movie. Then I stopped reading it. Finally, I remembered that I had given up chasing it before because it was bad. One of the masterpieces I am still chasing is "Goblin's Heavy Dependence" and the other is "Green Mountain". I hope these two will not be unfinished! To be honest, the other works of the author of "Green Mountain" are only those that can be read in online novels. This "Green Mountain" is different. It is a masterpiece with a strong sense of youth. In the past, it could have been serialized in the magazine "Legends of Ancient Times". There are also two and a half excellent works that are still updated, one is "Bu Jian Ting" and the other is "Seventy-two Transformations of Disha". There are also the eunuch's masterpieces "The Spring and Autumn Period of the Chu Family", "The Pirate Code", "Starting with the Birds"... That's all I can think of.

Saw it on the recommendation again! I particularly like this beginning. The criticized first-person perspective is actually very comfortable to watch. In the first-person perspective, the magical world slowly unfolds through the long caravan journey from the protagonist's perspective. The author's writing is very good, and the world has a strong sense of reality, like watching a movie. It is unique, novel, and fascinating. I remember that I stayed up all night reading this book and couldn't stand it until noon the next day before going to bed. But when Sister Guoguo died and the protagonist changed the map and entered the city and entered a new family, I was instantly confused after reading it! The two volumes are completely interrupted, and all the previous plots that foreshadowed the world came to an abrupt end. I feel like I'm reading a brand new book, and it's still very bloody about the aristocrats and the bad things in the academy! I no longer feel the fun of caravan travel, and it can no longer be integrated into the book, so I can only put it on the bookshelf. After that, I wanted to pick it up many times but couldn't stand it, so I just put it on the bookshelf~_~ If you just read the early caravan trip as a short story, it is quite excellent, the kind of excitement in the first person The medieval magical world that comes to you is so addictive that you don't want to wake up. The daily caravans described by the author are fresh and elegant. If you stop reading when Sister Guoguo dies and don't look at the messy trivial matters in the city and the emotional line of the harem, and let everything stop suddenly, this is simply a fantasy novel! ! ! Just reading the first volume, the fantasy and vast world slowly unfolds like a picture scroll, the leisurely childishness from the perspective of a child, the mystery of magic, the playful interactions with the dance troupe girls, the warm affection with Sister Guoguo, and the sadness of the tragedy at the end. As a short story, it is simply perfect! ! !

I don't care about the first-person perspective, but this is a work full of logical loopholes, confusing rules, and deliberate plot. The author's writing style is very good, but it seems that writing novels is not the author's main job. It is probably not even a hobby, and this has been the positioning from the beginning. This novel does not have any plot continuity or logical foreshadowing, nor any explanation of social rules. Everything is covered up with scenery and characterization. For example, the protagonist is a chef who travels to another world, but his IQ and behavior are only 7 years old. He has always been 7 years old. Whether he trusts blindly or hurts himself to save his enemies, there are too many. If I have to explain it, I can only say that the protagonist is a virgin and a stallion with insufficient IQ. He can live safely and travel to become a chef thanks to the good education environment and public security order of our country. I'm not bashing the author. In fact, the author's writing style is very good and very imaginative. If it weren't for this world view, I wouldn't have read half of it. But the author must have other jobs and things. He probably wrote this book in the first place just to take a gamble. The subsequent updates are just perfunctory and perfunctory along the outline to make some extra money. The plot is written so slowly because he is probably ready to stop updating at any time.

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

The opening scene was like a breeze blowing on my face, which made me feel so comfortable. A new world slowly unfolded in front of me, neither fast nor slow. Even if the fog of the world only blew in a little, it didn't make me eager to uncover her veil. The protagonist and supporting characters each have a unique soul, constantly spinning and exuding their charm. Thank you so much to the author, I love this opening so much.

In fact, I dislike first-person books, but this book changed my view.，

To be honest, this book is like an appendix. There is obviously a lot more that could be written and the world that was built could still be written, but it ends suddenly and unprepared, which is a pity.

It is recommended that the harem romance be marked in advance. When I saw it was almost 200 chapters, you did this to me. It made me sick. Is it difficult to establish a normal view of love? The protagonist must be written as a diaosi, a black-bone mackerel😰

I read more than one hundred and ten chapters. I feel that this book has many advantages. The first-person writing is very good, especially the various details. The psychological description is the most detailed I have seen in more than ten years. But the problem is also here, it is too detailed! It seriously affects the progress of the main plot. Therefore, after giving people a bright feeling at the beginning, the subsequent articles gradually weaken the readers' desire to continue. I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and I feel like I just experienced the plot. . . Not started yet? The main reason is that the author talks about everything without being able to distinguish the priorities, and the details are clearly written, leaving no room for the reader's imagination. There are also issues with various settings. I guess the author may be a chef. He writes a lot about food and is very professional. Open a chapter at random, 30% will be about food, 30% will be about various details, 20% will be for supporting characters, and the last 20% will be used to advance the main plot. . . . . This is really a masterpiece, no wonder it has millions of words. I couldn't hold on any longer, so I gave up. This book is more suitable for people who have not read many novels, such as my brother, who has no experience and has never even heard of a magister.

The only book with so many flaws that I can still bear to read 😆

With full support, the ending was too short and stuck in my throat. I hope the story of Ji Jia, Qi Ge, Ying Li and others can be continued. The female characters are all very well drawn and heartwarming, and all aspects of the logical plot have a beginning and an end. Some other minor flaws can be ignored for the time being. The first time I met Qi Ge on the island in the middle of the lake in the imperial capital, and the coming-of-age ceremony with Qi Ge Yingli married, it was so warm and warm. I hope it will be continued, and the first person is more interesting.

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I don't know why so many people criticize this book for being written in the first person. What happened to first-person novels? Who said that novels cannot be written in the first person? Why does the novel have to be written in the third person? This book is very correct to use the first person. Savor it carefully, or listen to the stories slowly told by "I" in your spare time. There are ordinary warmth, but also magnificent, joyful and sad. This gives another feeling to character novels that the third person does not have. Of course, the kind of person who can see ten lines in one glance and have hundreds of lines in one glance must not be able to do so. Hehe

I deleted, deleted, and revised this book review, and hesitated for a long time before choosing to post it. According to my usual personality, if I encounter a book I hate, I will just say it in the upper right corner without saying much, but this book really stuck in my throat. The author's writing style has something, but in terms of the settings given by the author and the things the novel shows to readers, it really makes people wonder whether the author has any It is very admirable to write with intention and not to revise for 3 years for a certain age. It can be seen that the author has written an outline in advance, but the twist of the story is so blunt that I want to give you a knife. The plot is only a part of the novel. It is really uncomfortable to forcibly distort the characters in order to promote the plot, especially after spending a lot of pen and ink to describe it. After writing a distinct character, doing this again makes people feel even a little disgusting, which is why I write so much As for the first three volumes of this novel, although there are many details in the setting that cannot withstand careful scrutiny, in general, combined with the author's excellent writing style, it can be said to be top-notch But the image of the protagonist is disgusting, an ignorant child It's acceptable. The 30-year-old invincible chef is okay, but sometimes he shows a bit of shrewdness, sometimes he's so stupid that he's actually 7 years old, and sometimes he's so mature that he talks about some truths. I'm about to vomit, okay? The scariest thing is that this is a first-person novel. How can any first-person novel mess with the character of the protagonist in order to advance the plot? Author, you are really a genius. I don't want to say too much. After all, the author has written so many words. I hope you can learn some lessons from your next book 🙂