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The writing is excellent and the style is mature, but honestly, if this book wants to go further, the "golden finger" (advantage/powerful ability) needs to be better designed. While the writing style is clearly mature, after reading over twenty chapters, it seems the protagonist is still relying on the silver sword and technical skill to brute force his way through – a first for me.

Fantastic! So far, both the main and supporting characters have fairly normal intelligence. The protagonist isn't just reckless, nor is he solely driven by scheming and plotting. He's not mindless, dark, or cruel, nor is he a saint. He also has a useful but not overly overpowered cheat ability. I think it's bound to be a hit if it doesn't fall apart!

The writing was quite good at the beginning, but later I found that the author couldn't distinguish between the main and the secondary points. This is supposed to be a lord farming and monster-fighting story, not a literary youth venting his frustrations. There were inexplicable and brainless plots, brainless supporting characters, and the whole thing was just a pile of flowery language.

The writing and plot were quite good from the beginning until the loss of the Lord's Ring. But then it's like the author changed completely; it's not just a little bit worse, it's incredibly boring. Not only is there no desire to read it, but the princess is even somewhat disgusting. And what about the protagonist's people now that he's gone?

Was anyone surprised that this book was canceled? It was expected. Why? Because the author didn't handle the relationship between satisfying moments and plot development. The earlier chapters were alright, but after entering the city, it became purely self-indulgent writing. How many people dropped the book after this part? Just look at the comments.

Well, the opening is indeed a masterpiece, but after entering the city... Emmm, did they change the director? The quality has clearly dropped. I could read the beginning carefully, word by word, but I skipped around in the later parts. I can only say that the higher the expectations, the greater the disappointment. The writing isn't bad, but it feels a bit like showing off.

This is a really good book, with a great start. The last book I gave this review was *The Chess Master's Tale* (although the later parts weren't as well-handled as the earlier ones). I hope the author becomes popular and can write full-time.

This author is really discouraging... In fact, I think the book is good. The subject matter is very novel, and although the plot is a bit messy, it's not too bad. But what I didn't expect was that the author would directly contradict me in the chapter comments, saying the princess didn't deserve to die. If she didn't deserve to die, then the dozen or so people she killed deserved to die?

It has a hint of showing off one's writing skills. It's amazing at first glance, but the consistent writing style gets a bit tiresome after a while.

Look what I found! A great book hidden in the signed edition. The plot is currently progressing very smoothly, with well-laid-out foreshadowing and no abrupt shifts. The author's attention to detail is excellent, giving it a pure fantasy epic style. What surprised me most was the author's excellent atmosphere creation.