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The writing style is very good and the writing style is mature, but to be honest, this book needs to go further. Goldfinger needs to be well designed. The writing style is obviously very mature, but after reading more than 20 pictures, it has always relied on silver swords and technical recklessness. This is also the first time I have seen it. Seeing that the ability of remarking is more like a writing style than a competent trump card, at least the protagonist cannot rely on this to make a comeback.

Awesome! So far, the IQs of the protagonist and the supporting characters are all normal. The protagonist is not reckless all the way, nor does he only have conspiracies and calculations. He is not a brainless black man, and he is not a holy mother. He also has a golden finger that can play a role but is not too buggy and invincible. I think it will be popular if it doesn't collapse!

The writing was quite good at the beginning, but later on, I found that the author was a little confused about priorities. You are a lord who farms and fights monsters, and you are not a literary youth complaining. There is an inexplicable brain-dead plot, a brain-dead supporting role, the whole article is piled with rhetoric, and a bunch of elementary school students in the comment area speak. If the author really wants to write, it is good to go to some literary and art clubs and newspapers. Writing novels is really not suitable for you.

From the beginning to the part where the Lord's Ring is lost, the writing and plot are very good. But when it comes to this part, it's like a different author. It's not even a bit worse. It's extremely boring. I have no desire to read it. Even the princess is a bit disgusting. And the protagonist has entered. What will happen to the protagonist's subjects? There is no leader in the land planning and development. The protagonist is the flag. Now the flag is gone. It won't be long before they are all gone. In the early stage, we were rushing to build the plot. Is there any foreshadowing for the plot? The princess in the back is probably a whitewash again.

Is anyone surprised that this book was cut? As expected, why, because the author didn't deal with the relationship between "Have a Better Day" and the development of the plot. The first chapter was okay, but after entering the city, it was just written for self-pleasure. How many people abandoned the book after seeing this section? Just look at the comment area to know. This plot may be written by the author very happily. Some people who like to abuse the protagonist also find it enjoyable, but there are also many people who don't like this tone. The protagonist's things were stolen, and then he was framed and thrown into the arena, and he almost died. , The last thing I saw was that the culprit was the princess and the magician consultant, what should I do? Of course, I chose to forgive them. I'm not saying that they must die. This is impossible. After all, the protagonist is just a small character, but you have to make them pay the price. Moreover, the protagonist has a system. To be honest, how can it not be possible in a period of chaos like this in the article? It's really hard to fight against the enemy's base. If this is called smart people with brains, well...

How should I put it, the opening alone is indeed a masterpiece, but after entering the city... Emmm, is this a substitution? The quality has obviously declined. I could read the first part carefully word by word, but I skipped through the second part. I can only say that the higher my expectations, the greater my disappointment. The writing is not bad, but it is suspected of showing off. The main style of writing is obscure, but reading the obscure style for a long time is a bit boring and tiring. It would be better to add some appropriate descriptions to make the whole story more obvious. Don't force it to be written just for the sake of style. Although it is difficult to adapt to online writing, the author still has to try his best to consider the taste of the public when writing articles, and not be too self-indulgent or suffer from literary youth. After all, you are not writing novels with love, but to make money. The taste of the public determines your income to a large extent. Of course, if the author writes for fun or purely for his own enjoyment, then just treat me as fart. Finally, don't spray if you don't like it.

A really good book, with a great start. In the previous book, I rated this game as Lanke Qiyuan (although the post-processing was not as good as the early stage). I hope the author becomes popular and can write full-time.

This author really discourages me. . . In fact, I think the book is good, the subject matter is very novel, and although the plot is a bit messy, it is not too poisonous. But what I didn't expect was that the author would directly jump into the chapter and say that the princess' crime would not lead to death. If her crime was not worthy of death, then the dozen or so people she killed deserved to die? We really shouldn't use modern eyes to criticize past thoughts, so I think it's quite reasonable for you to ask the protagonist to let the princess go. After all, a country's princess will make too many enemies by hastily killing her. But you, the author, are always a modern person, right? Can't you tell the difference between simple right and wrong? This author gives me a strong feeling of "back wave". The princess is a master, so she is innocent and childish when she kills civilians, so the crime is not worthy of death, so as long as she grows up, everything can be forgiven. But you have to know that most of us are the corpses left behind by her growing up. Finally, I still hope that the author will think carefully before writing. After all, it is too difficult to find a good Western fantasy book now, so don't waste such a good subject matter.

There is a suspicion of showing off the writing style. It is amazing at first glance, but the description method is always the same. After reading it for a long time, I got a little tired of it.

Look what I found? A great book hidden in the signed edition. The plot is currently progressing very smoothly, with good preparation and no abrupt edges. The author's description of the details is excellent, with a pure fantasy epic style. What particularly surprised me is that the author's atmosphere rendering is very good. No matter at any time, the author can always rely on dialogue, environment, objects, and creatures to set off the right atmosphere, which is slightly wasteland style, but not dull, allowing readers to sink into the book. Obviously, this book has been polished. The characters have also been established. Whether they are the protagonist or the supporting characters, they all have their own souls through dialogue and psychological description. I hope the author can continue to do so. Although it may not be a hit because of the audience, it will definitely achieve good results