The Path of No Duality

The writing is very good, and it shows that the author has a deep writing skills.

I give recommendations every day and give monthly passes from time to time. I am afraid that this book will become a eunuch. After all, it is such a beautiful book and I don't want it to disappear.

This book has been chaotic since the middle period, roughly after Shura Field, starting from the northwest. I suspect that the author adjusted the outline before and after that, or that the initial outline was only close to that. The author frequently pays homage to other types of online novels. Although it is creative and brings readers closer, the fourth wall is broken too frequently, causing many harms. It is a double-edged sword. The biggest problem is the interference of Mugenliu. The tone of the entire book is off-kilter. Many people have mentioned it and there is no need to repeat it. The ambition is too great, there are too many characters, it is very difficult for the author to control it, and the ending is also a bit weak. This is probably related to the fact that the author is not a professional and has limited time. However, writing it as it is now cannot be considered a collapse, it is still not easy.

The following is only for some of Wan'er's content, and does not involve the readability of the author's novel Let me talk about my feelings. When Wan'er was hesitating whether to conspire to kill Fuji, she faced two choices, but a demon pulled her away but no one stopped her. Fuji watched her step into the abyss but did not lend a helping hand. Some people would say that the choice is up to you, but in the face of temptation, threats, and opportunities, how many people can refuse after being polished by society? Readers who read novels cannot refuse, and authors who write novels will not refuse. According to this standard, will 99% of people in society be condemned and considered to be innocent of death? We are now condemning Wan'er and scolding her for forgetting her original intention and failing to keep her moral bottom line. In fact, we are scolding ourselves and the protagonist. Society pushes Wan'er to change, and various bad guys coerce Wan'er to make choices. Friends and confidants watch Wan'er step into the abyss without reaching out to rescue her, and they still sigh afterwards, "Ah, this person turned out to be like this. He deserves to die." The butt determines the head, but those of us with a God's perspective have not clearly seen our own position. I will not put myself into the protagonist of the novel just because I like it. My position is based on my identity in real society. Wan'er will die if she dies, but please keep some disgusting words in your stomach, otherwise things will change in the future and make people laugh. The above are all my humble opinions. They are just one person's opinions and cannot be true.

The first half of the novel is very exciting, and the portrayal of the female characters is particularly outstanding, with the lingering charm of Jin Yong. However, a single bad ending brought a work that could have been a god to the bottom, and instantly made me lose confidence in the author's new book. Unlike most people who abandon the book because of the emotional drama, I think the biggest problems with this book are the following points 1. Pick it up again and put it away lightly. The main character's real strength is due to his mixed-race background. The main character cannot be with the person he likes because he doesn't know his background. He is about to be exposed countless times, grabbing the readers' hearts, but the author suppresses it and covers it up countless times. It can be said that in this novel, the protagonist's life experience is like Zhang Xiaofan's secret in Zhu Xian. All readers are waiting for it to be exposed and trigger an explosive plot. However, this book is good. The author directly reunites the protagonist and his parents in private, and then says "The child has known it for a long time." He 🐴 reveals this important truth that hangs many readers, wtf? We have been waiting for a big scene where the two clans go to war, and then the protagonist's identity is exposed, his three views are subverted, and he runs away from the Horned Clan, but the result is just like that? It's really a rotten pit 2. There are countless rotten pits. I still remember what the protagonist seemed to agree to do with the possessed person? Nothing further. Readers don't even remember it, so the author is probably very happy. 3. Interspersed with unlimited flow settings, the failure among failures. The essence of romance is all about the Shura scene of romance. How does this infinite flow setting help portray emotional scenes? To rob him of the drama, not to mention the sci-fi world view at the end, is simply letting yourself go. The fairy sword fighting, one of them pulled out a gun, said "I'm eating shit" and then pulled the trigger Except for those who are specifically making jokes, I have never seen such mixed writing. 4. The author simply does not know how to depict big scenes, nor does he let the protagonist pretend to be X. Can't romance protagonists just show off? The final ending, it was over without even starting a fight? I still have to take Zhu Xian as an example. At the end of Zhu Xian, Gui Li merged the three heavenly books, holding Zhu Xian in hand, reversed the situation and turned the tide. Can't Fuji just pretend to be X like this? The author can completely create a super-kill or super-powerful treasure that can only be used by mixed-bloods in the later stage, and then Fujio saves the Horned and Human tribes alone, and finally hides his merits and fame and lives in seclusion for many years, leaving behind a legend. This is the title of the book, "The Great Road of Non-Energy," but I would like to ask, has the "Dao of Non-Energy" become narrower? Speaking of not being able to depict big scenes, I even think that the reason why I don't write about the war between the two clans is because the author can't write it 😅 5. If the new book continues to be so bad, I will really call the police. I finally understand that this author can't tell the whole story even if he writes a novel of three to four million words 🙂 Finally, where is the promised postscript? Leaving an unclear ending, huh?

A few days ago, I opened the starting point again. As soon as I saw that the book "The Best Way" was finished on the bookshelf, I went back to Katse in one go. I want to write something, here is my humble opinion. The writing is very good, the supporting characters are outstanding, everyone has their own personality, the basic characters are not broken, and the setting is also very imaginative. Like "Infinite Horror", the supporting characters have created a very moving world. I am thinking that if the author is not in a hurry to finish the book, but perseveres even if it is interrupted, maybe this book can become a god. I think it would be best to write tens of millions of words for this book. . One is that the author wants to express too many things, there are too many characters, and every supporting role is demanding to be flesh and blood, so the early stage is very long. From the protagonist to the ground bridge, it may have been three million words. I followed it for a long time, and the protagonist had just joined the army, so I stopped pursuing it. Many pitfalls seemed anticlimactic, such as Lin An, who was given a lot of roles in the early stage, but later on, he lost his presence. Like this and the one with the ring, they only interacted with the protagonist once or twice in the end, but they left a deep impression on me in the early stage, and I didn't see them much in the end. In fact, Chu Yue, who has been interacting with the protagonist in the military camp, did not appear in the first two million words. When reading, it feels like the previous character slowly disappeared in the end. On the other hand, in Infinite Horror, it would be good to directly send many important characters to get lunch in the middle stage. It would be simpler and more straightforward, and the branch plots could be dealt with earlier. Otherwise, the main line will progress very slowly. Like the protagonist, he has not experienced many big scenes. The main plot is actually very simple, that is, from the teacher's gate to the valley, after traveling to other worlds, to the northwest to join the army, and then to Katse. The world is so big, but the place where the protagonist goes is too small. I think it's a pity. To put it bluntly, it is too long-winded about the characters and loses the plot advancement. You know, characters in novels serve to advance the plot. If the supporting characters do not have an impact on the protagonist for a long time, do not have very important plot scenes, and do not have an important impact on the plot, there is really no need to write them all in detail. I think the author is too kind-hearted, and he must be a little reluctant to let go. As a result, he suffers and is too tired. Just like Fuji, I appreciate such kind and persistent people, but they are often too sloppy and end up losing a lot of things. Xiu Xiu, Xiu Xiu is mentioned again and again in the book when she thinks of the broken teleportation talisman. I think it's a little delayed. Once is sensational, repeating it several times is deliberate. But the faults do not hide the merits. Many characters are so brilliant that their shine cannot be concealed no matter what, such as the witch. Yes, I support the witch. I think the description of time is much better than Xiu Xiu, and the witch is a more three-dimensional character. Because the transformation of the witch from hostility to attraction to jealousy and finally to being together is beautiful. Moreover, in the middle and later stages, Xiu Xiu completely became a vassal of the protagonist. She focused on the protagonist but had no effective practical actions. I felt that it was a bit thin and false. Love under racial justice is much more unforgettable. The author writes the emotional drama very well. When there are three women and one drama, I hope this beautiful story will never end. And when it comes to fighting, especially fighting in the realm of enlightenment, it's not very good. In fact, I even think that there is no need to describe the battle between more than thirty enlightened people and one black corner in detail. After all, watching this kind of battle at the protagonist's level is like a child watching the Champions League, where you can only see who scores the goal. The detailed description is not as good as what Li Yunjing said, "The vision of a long rainbow over the military camp that day was that the leader of the Orc Tower was chasing the Horned Tribe." This side description made my blood boil. Also, remembering names is a skill, but the author's requirements for me are a bit high. There are so many people named Chu who are not related by blood, so it is a bit difficult to remember. If there are brothers, just change the word, wind and moon, or wild and feather. The two of them appear together and leave together. I can't tell them clearly when I read them. Haha I hope the author can continue writing, and I am looking forward to the author's next book. I hope the new book can be more cruel and cut off some irrelevant character descriptions. Or hold on a little longer and update it by tens of millions of words. No matter which choice I choose, I feel that I can become a god in my heart. Because the author's world philosophy is great, his imagination is great, his writing is acceptable, and his novel skills are gradually maturing. I hope the author goes further and I will continue to support him no matter how many years he writes.

Well, a new book will be released in March. If you don't release it, I will be a hammer🔨

I thought what you said was true, but in fact I am pretty sure the author is teasing us again! In this way, if the author updates daily and reaches 100,000 words in the 31 days of this month (2018.12.1), I will reward him with 100,000 coins. This post will not sink, even if you say this

I clicked on the free-reading coupon. I am willing to call this book a magical beginning, a magical plot, and a WOC ending. It may not be favored by lovers of refreshing novels, but it cannot be considered a refreshing novel in the first place. To be honest, the ending makes us readers feel deeply resentful and willing to respect the author's writing style. In fact, I personally also want to code words in private. After reading too many brainless cool articles, I will think in my heart: I can write better than this about any JB stuff. However, I haven't written anything yet, so I think maybe this is the best ending. After all, this is not a cool article...

I have read almost half of it I came with high expectations, but I saw not very good content. I am really unhappy The book is above the fast food article, but it is really not a good book Every book list boasts about the amazing opening, it is really just nonsense, nonsense The writing is good, the pace is slow, there is a lot of psychological description, and many words with repetitive meanings are also very verbose. I don't lack patience. I will comment after I finish it slowly.