One Piece Collapse Plan

In fact, as long as Ace doesn't become a pirate but becomes a marine, he most likely won't die.

Time Travel Ace is very good, but what is more embarrassing is that the author has too many settings. Forget about the setting that Luffy's mother is a Celestial Dragon. If Eiichiro Oda writes a plot about Luffy's mother next, the author will be in trouble 😥

First, your protagonist is Ace, but you are writing about Roger in the first chapter, describing the general situation of the world in the second chapter, and the statement is very messy, and writing about entrusting Esto to Garp in the third chapter... It took you until the fourth chapter to write the protagonist Ace, is this slaying the dragon in heaven, it is too boring! In online novels, whether you can sign a contract depends mainly on the first three chapters, but you haven't even written the protagonist in the first three chapters. To be honest, the first chapter is very important. Whether you can sign a contract depends on the first chapter! Extremely important! So the entry point for your first chapter should start with Ace, the protagonist!

In the end, do you want to be a pirate or a navy, and eat the Sha Shao fruit?

It's totally fine to write about Ace. You can try changing it like this. In the first chapter, write that the protagonist travels to the world of pirates, becomes Ace, and then lights up the golden finger (system, devil fruit, or weapon). He uses this golden finger to practice hard since he was a child and march towards the pirate king. This may be better.

Emmm, when will the protagonist eat the fruit?

It's totally not enough. Please write more.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

At this time, a handsome boy passed by by chance

The heroine is coming out in the next chapter, can anyone guess who the heroine will be? Someone guessed that two more chapters will be added, please use your imagination.