Pirate Blue Dragon, I Refuse to Be a Cute Teacher

But the logic is messed up. The plot twist is too blunt.

The biggest joke this year is that the protagonist traveled through the world of black thieves to obtain the Devil Fruit and then wanted to become the king of Wano. The protagonist lived so peacefully and happily during his lifetime, and found work for himself after death. The previous ability user just died, and the protagonist immediately jumped out. I really want to say that even if you get the fruit now, you are still a weakling. Get up and find a place to exercise, and you are afraid that others will not know you. Yes, becoming the king of a country, whether it is violent rule or benevolent rule, in my opinion, is a waste of time and thankless, and you have nothing to do when you are full. What's more, you are a weakling and have no strength to overturn the table. Yes, you are like a clown, and you jump out to return the Qinglong King in a high-profile manner.

Kill Yamato. This kind of person will only hold you back and is of no use.

Kaido is not dead, right? Kaido didn't suffer any injuries throughout the whole battle, and in the end he was just blasted into the magma.

I originally liked the subject matter, but the author's dialogue with the female character was so awkward.

I don't care about the fruit setting or anything like that. After all, it's the protagonist, so it's okay to cheat, but Yamato is your father, right? This kind of character has been completely brainwashed. What, you still want to bring him back? Are you kidding me? Not to mention that in the original work, Taiga went to take a bath with the Straw Hats and liked to put hats on his head so much. Also, after the protagonist and Taiga finished training, the protagonist fainted and lay on Taiga. Are you the tease invited by the monkey? Author, if you target Dahe so much earlier, even if he won't do anything to you, but he doesn't have any vigilance at all, if you remove the protagonist's aura and can survive two lives, I will consider you a great person.

Later, we will plan the return of the pink blue dragon fruit copied by Vegapunk. It is the one eaten by Momonosuke. It is planned to be eaten by a popular character. In cooperation with the protagonist You can talk about who you want to eat.

Does the author like Peggy Wan so much? Do you want to see who is more like the protagonist? Spinosaurus also evolved into Godzilla? Sauropods evolved from theropods, right? There is a younger brother who controls his older sister, and you give Rasmuji a red line? Why don't we just open a harem, and let him be the emperor of the Qinglong Empire? It's really unbelievable. I can accept that the protagonist is a eunuch, but I can't accept that the supporting role is played by a lalang who goes out to catch someone's wife. What's enough?

The author has strengthened the blue dragon too much. The protagonist has not been trained and has no three-color domineering power. However, his performance is comparable to the top masters in the pirate world. He is not discouraged at all when facing Yamato. I even wonder whether the protagonist ate the blue dragon fruit or inherited the blood of the blue dragon from the world of immortality?

When I saw the creativity, I thought I could make a big living but I ended up with a big mess.

The protagonist's character looks really greasy, and he seems to be "on edge" all the time. Typical dragon king character, the kind of dragon king with a crooked mouth in the city in ancient times

The subject matter is pretty good, but it contains too much personal stuff.

Why do you keep writing more and more obscene things? If the problem could be solved by killing people, then the world of pirates would be peaceful long ago. And that's a fruit, you're just a wishing device, you can change the settings randomly, and keep adding new functions, right?

Where do all these arguments come from, and where are the protagonists? I know you're going to slap Sukiyaki in the face, so hurry up, what's the rhythm? This is it.

The idea is good, but the writing is too long

Is your brain broken? Eating radiation into your stomach is not an ability at all. How can you use your brain to develop Devil Fruit abilities?

The creativity is good The writing is not great But the protagonist's character is shaped like a hook.

After traveling through the timeline, hurry up and get rid of everyone who deserves to be killed in Wano Country.

It's a bit interesting. It depends on how you write it later. The timeline is too close to the comics...

It comes from tomatoes, you can't read it with your brain