Pirate: Who Still Has Dreams?

I suggest you change the introduction. Let alone the one-minute Gojo Enlightenment. Even if I give you the permanent Gojo Enlightenment, it wouldn't be too strong to let the pirates go.

Generally speaking, I came in based on the cover. I don't have the ability to realize five things, and I'm still fighting monsters and leveling up. I'm bored to death. Can I expand in the personal realm and kill the masters?

The writing is too messy, the time is all over the place, and it's hard to read like it's like keeping a running account.

I hope the situation will not happen again in the later period of the Devil Fruit book. Now readers are increasingly unable to accept that the protagonist is deflated and suffers a loss.

Since the end of No Interest in Devil Fruits, the books I have written have become more and more messy, and I have basically not finished them. This one is even more messy.

Writing those chapters of Hancock made me feel so disgusting 😰, it made me feel like something was written by a loser.

I don't understand why One Piece has to do with Gojo Satoru. It is not necessary to frame other anime characters into One Piece novels. Which one can't be written about Haki, Devil Fruit, and Bloodline Factor? !

Today's One Piece is already so bad that it makes people laugh even if they want to, and you also add the one-minute limited edition of five. Are you going to choke me to death😂

The people attracted by the hanging Souchou and introductions have little to do with the introductions seen in the early stage. The writing style is good, but in my humble opinion, the writing method cannot retain people in the early stage, and only a few can read it in the later stage.

If you are cheating, you don't dare to open it too high.

Without a main line, you can't retain people.

I have read the author's "I'm Super Interested in Nen", "I'm Not Interested in Devil Fruits", and "My Shadow Clone Created a Kaguya", and the writing is pretty good. Why did I feel uncomfortable reading this book, so I teleported to it. The target character was shocked when he saw the protagonist suddenly teleported over, and a conflict occurred. The wishes of the target character were designed based on whether the target character was disliked in the original book. The near ones were done on the spot, the far ones were done by opening a teleportation gate, and if there was a time difference, the teleportation to the past had to be done. Then face the protagonist with gratitude. In this way, the protagonist only has a Holy Grail and a wishing machine. There is no fun, only wishes. Oh, it's really refreshing to eat the frozen chicken.

The front part is pretty good, but why do you want to travel through the timeline later? If this is the case, I won't want to read it later. No matter how you deal with it later, if it causes changes in the subsequent timeline, or the two timelines are parallel, I think it is a big deal. In this case, the author can write the plot however he wants. You can travel through time, so what plot will you write next? Anyway, as soon as you feel dissatisfied, you ask the system to do a task, and then go back to the previous timeline to do a task. Isn't it over? As long as the readers behind you are not satisfied, you can arrange a restart timeline, OK? Just like Marvel, one-click restart

The two ex-wives, Robin and the Empress, are indispensable

Awesome, the author finally writes about pirates again. I think the pirates written by the author are very good.

It turns out it's you, the last pirate novel in the middle and later stages was just to cause trouble for the readers.

Don't you think the plot jumps too fast and it's quite confusing to read. There is also a problem with the plot connection. It is very blunt. The protagonist rushes to the next almost unrelated thing before he has solved the previous thing. Fortunately, the characters are still standing up, and the logic of behavior is smooth. I personally suggest that you reorganize the previous chapters, adjust the narrative rhythm appropriately, and polish the excessive plot points.

Isn't it good again in the past two years? The author was criticized when he wrote "One Piece", which made the author not very good. In the past two years, the reputation of follow the ship has increased again. Sure enough, the world is like a huge boomerang.

The introduction is bland, just write it if you have an idea, don't worry about writing anything else and you're done.

I feel like every time I read your novels, there is no clear main line. I feel like I just write whatever I write. Just like this time, the system can synthesize, but what should I do with synthesis? Like the pirate devil fruit, it is to collect devil fruits and generate them yourself. What is the purpose of your synthesis? What does the protagonist intend to get from the purpose? To wipe out the world of pirates, to save civilians, or to join the navy to overthrow the government.

The biggest trouble is that I can't understand it, but the writing style seems to be okay.

The fighting scenes are too boring, and the writing style that connects the daily plot is awkward.

This book is quite interesting, but I don't know what the main plot is.

I've read the daily drug novel, can you still read it? Family members

It's still good to watch. In the latest chapter, I already got the transformation skills. Although it is only one minute, I got a one-hour extension card earlier. Although the author did not deliberately write it later, he wanted to bury an obvious foreshadowing. He probably wanted to use his ultimate move when fighting Kizaru. Although it is only one minute now, there is still a great sea route in the East China Sea, and you can basically walk sideways, especially since the protagonist has a shameless super long-distance teleportation, and can also bring people, plus the ship can be directly stored in the backpack, there is no worries at all, but there are too few updates! !

The last Pirates book was very good, and this one is also great now that I read it.

I thought that there might not be anything new in old bottles, but after reading about 20 chapters in one go, I felt pretty good. The highlight is the protagonist's fun-loving mentality. But how many audiences are there for pirate fans in this era? If your grades are not good, I'm worried that you will be delayed for another year and a half😮‍💨

The protagonist's practice of domineering is like doing research. With six eyes for observation, he can get twice the result with half the effort.

Although there is a hammer here and a stick here and there, you can still see clearly

It's pretty good-looking and feels quite fresh. Is it considered a pirate dungeon stream?