Awakened from a Nightmare

Why is this book not popular? I think it will be popular if it is written with the current quality. The plot and writing are quite good, but the time advancement is a bit too slow. When I saw the protagonist upgrade, I had already written so much in just a few days...

It's really annoying to see too many of some routines. Pandora is the largest power organization in mainland China. Every time it takes action, it first fails to investigate and is stupid, and then finds that the number of people must not be dominant, or even disadvantaged, and finally relies on the protagonist to turn the tide.

The setting is very good, and the handling of clues is also very good. There are very few villains who are idiots, but there are very many female idiots. This shows that the author is not very good at writing female characters. This is actually the same for male videos, which is understandable. I really like the setting of this book. Although the plot line is a bit slow, the explanation and presentation of logical prerequisites are a bit cumbersome, and although some parts are not clear, it is still very interesting to read. The male protagonist is too shameless, really shameless. The male protagonist really ruined my good impression of the narrative and setting of the work. There are all kinds of tricks and deceptions, as if you have rich social experience. In fact, these eight hundred people are bullying the weak and afraid of the strong, which is very bad, but the male protagonist takes his kindness to others too seriously. It does not mean that he must be more positive. Taking advantage of others can also be a very cute personality flaw, which can gain a sense of recognition. But the male protagonist is really too shameless. There are routines like flirting without marrying He, but there are too many flirting without marrying He. The male protagonist has a greasy feeling that shines through the screen. He touches more than one girl. The female characters collectively reduce their intelligence. You can be cunning and deceive, but the unified operations of this male protagonist are really good. Being able to pretend is really because the author pushed the plot and gradually lost the goodwill of the male protagonist. It doesn't mean that he has to set up a character, but this male protagonist is really unlikable. The so-called cleverness and ability have turned into cheating and sneaking, and he always thinks that he can make up for other characters with better things after deceiving other characters. Although I like male protagonists with rich human nature, and I also like protagonists with flaws, the way this male protagonist interacts with the female characters in the book makes me feel like a loser. It's not that the thick and black male protagonist is not good, but this male protagonist makes people feel that he is neither up to nor down. Really, the setting and some villain descriptions are very interesting, and there is nothing wrong with the inherent cognitive description of some male points of view, but this male protagonist really seems to be getting lower and lower the more he writes.

It's too bland. Time traveler, you just have to hide your identity and become powerful. What kind of National Security Bureau? Stand aside and create your own organization to do things behind the scenes and pretend to take off. This is the protagonist. You are only suitable for the soy sauce party.

There is a major bug. There is no moon in this world. But the time travelers communicated in lyrics with the word "moon" in them. If there is no moon, then how can there be the word "month"? Furthermore, this world uses months and ten days as cycles. Since there is no moon, where do the months come from. If there is no moon, and time-travelers publish moon lyrics through newspapers, wouldn't the editor wonder what the moon is? How to write [month] and what it means. If anyone doesn't understand why there is no word for "month", let's give a simple analogy: there is no single word such as "pear", "ri", "shi", etc. That can be used to describe coke, radio, and CPU.

I don't quite understand why he arranged a plot where he keeps flirting with Shirelin. There is no emotional basis at all. He just helped her solve a problem, asked her to borrow a car, and started flirting when she returned the car? At first, I thought it was just lip service, but the further I look at it, the more wrong it becomes. Judging from his description of his heart, he also directly regarded his father as his future father-in-law. This is too embarrassing! Looking at the plot trend, is this the beginning of a harem? Most of the female characters appearing now have a romantic relationship with him, including his sister, Xiao Bai, the singer, Xierlin, and it seems that Qiao's daughter is still alive. . .

Every fucking time they fight, the villain is higher than the official level. Every time they fight, the official power is at a disadvantage. Damn it, I might as well just follow the villain and get away with it.

I have always been puzzled by the setting of this book. Pandora, who controls the energy lifeline and the most powerful force, needs to survive between the federation and the wild awakened people. The provincial governor goes to the inspection office to inspect the public security bureau, just like the real provincial high-ranking officials inspect the public security bureau. This is the result of thousands of years of development. This setting is really anti-human and too dramatic.

Twenty-eight hour clock

In the early stage, it was fairy grass, in the middle stage, weeds, and the protagonist became funny. I don't know if other people can accept the change in his personality after they started to be attracted to it. I am tired of being funny.