The Black Mist Zone

No, it's really poisonous. The organization is as strict as a pretender. Sorry for insulting the pretender. That's what I pretended to be my father. It's okay to frantically set up the atmosphere and create a suspenseful and thrilling atmosphere, but the protagonist's obsession with the organization all day long has no one to ask questions, and the people in charge don't report it. I really can't stand the logic of this, but you said this is a cool article that doesn't require thinking, but you are digging holes again, haha

Many book friends have asked why wired communication is not possible if wireless is not possible. Let me help the author explain. First of all, the diameter of the black mist area is 30km. The existing wired cables are not that long. They are usually 500 meters or 1-3km (easy to repair and carry), and there are transfer stations in the middle. Secondly, even if such a long wire is built, the carrying problem must be solved. If the wire is rolled up and placed outside, the people inside will increase the friction as the distance increases until the wire cannot be dragged. Moreover, the distance includes roads, woods, mountains, etc., The wire is likely to be entangled, and it will be completely useless. If you want to bring bundles of wires in, although there is no ground friction and the impact of obstacles on the road, it is impossible from the perspective of load-bearing. The weight of wires that are dozens of kilometers long is astonishing and cannot be brought in at all. Some book friends later proposed to fly a person into the helicopter, but the visibility in the black fog area is 10 meters, so even if a person is flying in, he can't see anything. Some people later proposed a sentry 1000 meters away, but the problem is that anyone who enters will be killed within a few days. It takes several days to set up a sentry. It is estimated that the first sentry cannot be established, let alone the engineering team to go in and forcibly break the road. Wouldn't it be a loss of life to line up a large number of people to go in knowing that there are viruses and unknown creatures inside?

Biology Dog said that it looks great, and the first chapter of professional knowledge feels like taking a class... I don't take class so seriously 😜

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The description of the protagonist being guarded is too ridiculous. Cheng Feng didn't report any of the protagonist's many anomalies. A real guard can record even an expression for you. There are cameras everywhere, and every abnormal movement can be studied by many people!

I feel that the way the protagonist's department works is not professional and rigorous at all. It is more credible to say that it is a non-governmental organization.

There are big problems with the logic. It's irritating. It forcibly advances the plot and forcibly creates contradictions. In order to write about the spread of foreign matter, do you have to let a few stupid supporting characters drive it? Can't it be written as a preliminary preparation for the main body of the black mist? It's a bit of a bad street routine in European and American bad movies. Generally speaking, the creativity is okay. You need to pay attention to the outline of the writing.

After reading Chapter 16, I have a question: Has anyone thought of using a long stick with a camera with a signal line to extend into the dark fog area? You can always see inside from 10 meters away, right? Why don't we tie a rope and go to the outside of the black mist alone to investigate? If it doesn't work on the ground, why don't I dig a tunnel to get to the head office? How about a helicopter hoisting a person over a black fog area?

I hope the author can pay attention to it. About sixty chapters, the protagonist obviously has a "system" obtained from the black mist. The system's fear of the black mist consciousness. The system's intention to destroy Yang Fan. Everything that the electrotherapy method allowed him to see. After that, the protagonist was shocked to find that the black mist destroyed a world (shock is used too much. Is the protagonist's reaction here very slow?) Let's start exploring later. The protagonist himself proposed the disguise of black mist consciousness assimilation, etc. Everyone else agreed. But as soon as "Ling Shan" was found in the black mist, the protagonist immediately rushed up to ask... (Others stopped it) The protagonist of the exploration team and another person were arguing with each other. Everyone knows the dangers in the dark mist, but they still talked about it. The key is that when he saw "Ling Shan" for the second time, the protagonist suddenly became "smart". See through perspective, "Monster, I can see at a glance that you are not a human being." Remind others (others have long realized that something is wrong) Of course, these are all fine. The key is that you buried the trap in the first sixty or seventy chapters. I endured it for so long. The plot develops rapidly at the back. There are too many unreasonable places. The subject matter is very good. I hope the author can think about it carefully... PS Ideal discussion Don't hesitate to spray

Although it is interesting to borrow ideas from the movie Annihilation, it also inherits the movie's moronic setting. The various decisions in it simply insult the reader's intelligence. There is also the inner life of the protagonist, who is about ten years old. The description of the rest of the general environment is okay. What a shame it was wasted.