My Pokemon Trainers Are Beautiful Girls

Muscular Hunk

I hope the author can calm down and read the book friends' suggestions Elven literature is too niche. Especially the one where the protagonist is an elf is even more niche. For example, are you going to take the college hegemony route? Or go on an adventure around the world? According to the world view of this book, there seem to be powerful enemies, and maybe it is possible to open a doomsday expansion pack. As for the interpersonal relationships between the protagonists, should we focus on describing the elves (it seems to be the case now), or should we focus on describing the elves and the elf messengers as the title says? 1. There is no definite solution to these problems, because this type of writing has never been done before, let alone any mature routines. The author can only use our suggestions as a reference, and never write words that you don't like. If you don't like it, your book friends won't like it either. 2. Book friends have various suggestions. For example, in the book review area, I saw some people dislike the slow pace, while others like the slow pace of daily life. Where does the author stand? Some people say that the slow pace means that the protagonist's strength is too slow, the cheats are weak, and the degree of growth does not seem to be great. He does not defeat various elves, cross-grade challenges, shine in the arena, awakens the sky-breaking ability, and other elves lament that it is so terrifying. This type of reader wants to see cool, cool battles. Some people like the warm interaction between the protagonist and Xiaoyu; the warm interaction between the protagonist and other cute elves. But I also said that the pace is slow, maybe because I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and other people has not made much progress. Good friends today, good friends tomorrow, and good friends the day after tomorrow. This category just wants to see sweeter dog food. Both of them are said to be slow-paced, but what they want to see is completely different. The author still has to judge for himself. 3. The author seems to be a weak subject and everyone needs to be careful. Don't feed yourself off books.

To be honest, I really don't feel like a muscular man. Isn't it good to have a streamlined figure? Taking into account both speed and strength, I always feel that muscular men have a dull feeling and cannot appreciate aesthetics.

Good looking

It feels quite similar

Nanny

Wife

Some suggestions. From the previous description, we know that the protagonist is very strong, grows very fast, and is even mistaken for a legendary elf many times. But what is the strength of this (maybe I read quickly and didn't pay attention), I really don't know, I don't have an idea. The protagonist knows too many things now, including grass, fighting, crystals, and even more methods. It can be seen that the author has a lot of plans. But these are not integrated into a system at all. The protagonist's current fighting method is still very vague. You say he is a warrior, but he is physically strong and knows many and very powerful fighting skills. You say he is a long-range mage, but he has been focusing on close combat in recent times. The positioning is very vague. And the protagonist is crushed most of the time. It is difficult to see where the protagonist's flaws are. You can give the protagonist a battle, a battle in which he is completely defeated, so that he can recognize what he lacks so far. Just like students need to take test papers to understand what knowledge points they have not mastered. Then when the author Ji Fang made the outline before, you can see "Mastering Fighting Energy" here, and you can also let the protagonist fight with the purpose of mastering fighting energy, abandoning other abilities and only using fighting abilities to squeeze his potential. At present, the protagonist is shown to us as a training maniac, as if he has become a numerical monster. When he looks at the data, oh, he is so strong. But I don't know how much strength I can unleash. The above are some suggestions. I feel that the current image of the protagonist is still lacking and has not been fully developed.

The book is a good book, the author writes it very delicately, and the characters and settings are reasonable. However, the updates are a bit slow, or in other words, the early plot is relatively flat (not watery), and there are not enough explosive points. Combined with the fact that there are not many updates, it will be more uncomfortable to follow the book. . . It is estimated that the author may save the manuscript and wait for it to be published before releasing it (exerting pressure 😃). Then I hope it will come from the plot. It depends on the arrangement. The protagonist is ready to appear. There will be a small climax, but don't delay it for too long. The National Day holiday is almost over.

Yeah, yeah, I feel like I've been reminded many times that ups and downs are the core of the book. 😐I can even summarize the entire plot in five hundred words. If it weren't for the subject matter, this way of writing would be killed in seconds. So why is it that in so many chapters, your protagonist's feelings about continuous self-growth have become more and more diluted, and even the core character traits and abilities are not obvious. What is now deeply rooted in people's hearts is diligence (?) Daily life can also be composed of stories! Come on. Growth and growth verification are only one part of the core drive, emotional characteristics and personality charm are the second part, and the ups and downs of the story rhythm and the constantly unfolding unknown world are the third part.