My Mythical World

Let me start by saying that I listen to books, and I have listened to more than 60 chapters in one day. Listening to a book is different from reading it. The quality of the author's first few pictures can determine whether we can listen to it. The story of the original World Tree at the beginning was really good, I kept listening to it. Then we arrived at Honghuang. I don't know if there is something wrong with the author's settings, or if you have an opinion about the Great Desolation. From the beginning of the prehistoric plot to the chapters I listened to. They all exude a kind of malice. It seems like Hongjun killed you in his previous life. All kinds of black. Perhaps we don't know exactly what Hongjun's style was before he became a saint. What we learned may only be the first sentence: Hongjun was the first immortal, and his disciple Pangu was the first to open the sky. Then I passed by Hongjun, who was fabricated in various novels. But I just think your article smells so bad. Then there are the players. It seems that among the 200 dwarfs, not one of them has a normal IQ. A world where there has never been a virtual game suddenly appeared. Then 100 people went in and learned about the background, and their IQs were normal. As soon as we knew that this was the innate period, we all came to wisdom. I wonder why the seven-foot-tall men of the 21st century, who have been influenced by the kind of feasting and entertainment, and who only care about health in their 20s, cannot understand the great truth? Is Jiang Zhi determined to kill Hongjun? (But you can't change it if I complain.) (Finally, you need to have 500 fan points to comment and say that this setting is really sb.) (I hope you can bring some better stories and less drama this week. Maybe it's because the three views don't match.)

Very interesting to write. The characters' mentality is well grasped, the plot is full of resilience, and the players' psychological changes are good. It is worth noting that I hope the author can describe more reality and provide more realistic foreshadowing of the creator. Increase the meaning of the founder's life. If he lives alone and lives forever, avoiding annihilation will seem a bit empty in the later stage (it is recommended to add love...). It is recommended to add the inner monologue of the original inhabitants of the world and the emotions between them and the players. It is necessary to grasp the balance between the high-end combat power of the indigenous people and the players, and not be too biased in favor of the players. I hope World Tree will become more exciting in the later stages...

Everything is water, even though it can be slapped to death, I have to write 5 or 6 chapters to describe it. It's as disgusting as someone trying to describe how he eats shit.

I've only read the first chapter It's only one chapter, but I still can't help but want to post a book review and make some small suggestions. 1. To be honest, there are too many bugs in the first chapter. If I hadn't known that Jiang Ping was originally the protagonist, I might have thought that the man in black was the real protagonist just like the hot comment at the end of the first chapter. 2. Regarding the issue of the protagonist's IQ and vision, after getting the Book of Creation, the protagonist watched the evolution of the entire universe, and then added that what he watched was the truth of the entire universe, which can almost be regarded as personal experience, but no matter what, in this long time, you have gained so much knowledge (the setting in the book), you should become a little smarter, you are not required to be extremely smart. You can think calmly about coding, but I saw that the protagonist is like a fool (please forgive me for using this foul language). After learning about the system's functions, I was first disappointed and then surprised. I am very disappointed here. Assuming that it only has a function of making games, it can also allow you to live a life beyond ordinary people. You are just an ordinary person now. If others are rushing to beg for it (such as me)! ? Besides, it allows you to watch the evolution of the universe. Even if this thing is fake, it won't be any worse. Use your little brain that has gained countless truths and think carefully! 3. This is even more speechless. This question follows the second one. Because it is too long, it is divided into two questions. I am even more speechless here. You have watched the truth of the universe (you said it yourself), experienced the evolution of the universe personally (I would like to say that this is equivalent to living for that long, but forget it when you think about the protagonist's IQ), and have experienced more than others. And for you, under the deception of an intelligent system, you just listen to him. Doesn't the protagonist have the slightest doubt? Does what the system says really have to be right? Can't we be prepared with both hands? 4. I have watched the truth of the universe and experienced the evolution of the universe that ordinary people have never experienced. In my opinion, this is only inferior to the second golden finger of the system. It should have played a huge role and had a huge impact on the protagonist. Even changing a person's second golden finger has no effect at all. The protagonist has not changed at all. This setting is worse than nothing, the protagonist is still so stupid! ps. The above opinions are just based on the first chapter, and the rest has not started yet 😵 If the author can delete and modify some bugs, then the reading experience will definitely improve a lot!

The player is an unknown failure

I feel like the author is getting better and better as he writes, making great progress. It may be a little boring in the early stage, but it gets better and better later on. Personally, I think some people are cheating by buying fake books. Just like it and don't be influenced by book reviews.

It's too watery. At this stage, the content of each chapter is too general and the theme and plot advancement cannot be seen. Withdrew

I came across Half Immortal Grass by chance when I was looking for behind-the-scenes videos. To be honest, it was really good. I finished reading it in one day and am now waiting for the update. I would like to talk about a few things I want to complain about and some suggestions I would like to give to the author. Here are the complaints: 1 The protagonist's vision was too low when he got the Goldfinger in the early days. When the Immortality Potion first came out, the protagonist couldn't wait to get it. This is just the first world, and there will definitely be better ones later. Wouldn't it be nice for him to slowly wait for the pollution-free improvement of the Great Destruction? In addition to Xilin, there is also the digger who may be a foreshadowing in Hill World. I think they are all ordinary and have no highlights 3 Why not write about Honghuang? This is the protagonist's stud battle. The giant does not pay attention, I don't know why there is no inspiration Here are suggestions: 1 When the author joins the player, he can join the organization's representative. Isn't a group of people stronger? You can write more imaginative ideas, like Pangu is an egg, it is very interesting 3 Write about prehistoric times, I am looking forward to this 4 Hill World Seriously, I almost feel like I am reading other novels after reading the last few chapters, it is too detailed, it can be abbreviated appropriately 5 Combat power can be clearly defined, it is too vague 6 If I really have no inspiration, I can do an activity to let readers recommend what kind of world to create, I recommend abyss hell, technology world and the like I hope the author will give it a big boost (ง •̀_•́)ง, I will continue to subscribe

I tossed and turned over and over again and couldn't fall asleep. I carefully read through the life of the pangolin and thought about its possible words. The duck neck downstairs seemed to have lost its fragrance. I recalled everything one by one and felt that something was missing. After doing a set of Tai Chi and five consecutive lightning whips, I finally knew what was going on! Right! That's you! Author, you owe us an explanation!

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The player looks like a kid who got a pistol

Why can't it be dubbed without dubbing? Ah, brothers, push me up

I have seen about 200 chapters so far. Players have lived there for hundreds or even thousands of years, experienced various life-and-death battles, and conspiracies. From the perspective of their age, they can be considered the ancestors of everyone on the earth. Yet they are still like little brats who post screenshots on the forum every day to show off. Bullshit is more important than culture? Another issue is time. The game time is accelerated. Don't cause any live broadcast bugs to come out by then. After all, it will last forever. Every time someone enters the game, it will last longer than a lifetime in reality (each time the game is online is almost equivalent to another life or even several lifetimes on earth), and the sense of identification with reality will become lower and lower. After all, the earth has only lived for a few decades, and they have lived in other places for hundreds, thousands or even tens of thousands of years. Having said so much, I just want the author to know that the group of people who enter the game are no longer children. From the perspective of mental age, anyone who is alive or not dead is an antique-level character. Don't let them be too childish.

Don't always kill the awesome character you created, throw it out of the earth and let him explore the universe. Now the protagonist is just a low-level country creation god.

I think it might look better if we raise all humans

Let me mention a few points. The author has not tried to hide it. It is already obvious that this is not a game. Each of these players has the mentality of the protagonist of the xx novel decades ago? Where did this template come from that has been expired for decades? Either it is a higher civilization or a mythical existence, one person, one life, a life-changing opportunity, for the sake of Hongjun's treasures, which are no more than 10 at most, did everyone go? ? ? Even if you win, what happens next? Those who are weak in combat will try their best to get nothing, so why go? And since so many people agree to kill him? Why doesn't anyone react? How can a few treasures have a ceiling-level thigh strength? Not to mention that 100 people are randomly selected in a place where everything is the same as reality. Everyone thinks that they are the son of destiny. If their equipment explodes, you can keep it? Not to mention someone riding on the front leg and then retorting on the forum that he wanted to ride someone else. Take a screenshot unless your idea is successful or it will be a big deal... As for thinking that others are NPCs, people with normal IQs will not think so... After you have been with a thing for so long, is the other person really intelligent or an unintelligent tool? Can you still not tell? As for what form of intelligence it is, even if it is artificial intelligence, does it matter? I really don't know where this inexplicable sense of superiority among players comes from?

You can take a look at the original world at the beginning, but forget about it later. The world tree is boring enough, and the whole "Apotheosis of the Gods" is a show with a bunch of bad jokes, but you still feel good about yourself.

One person's wisdom is effective, and everyone's wisdom is inexhaustible. Everyone has good suggestions for the book, such as what characters or special worlds, etc.

The writing is okay, unlike other creation gods who end up in person, pretending to slap faces with the immortals in the world they created, rolling on the ground and practicing bastard boxing with the mortals in the world they created, and having sex with women of the human race created by their own blood in the world they created! It can be regarded as a true creation book.

I feel that Honghuang is not well written. It is just a gangster cultivating immortality. After thousands of years of cultivation, it still has the same gangster virtues. Also, the players are really unscrupulous and have no sense of awe at all. I recently watched the setting of Da Luo, the only one in the world. I am really afraid that the players will go too far. Da Luo will project over and slap them all to death, and the players are conscious Brain waves are still coming in, and we are about to enter this kind of world. Even if you are beaten to death by the set saint, your body will not die, nor will you be in a vegetative state. At least you will spit out blood, coma and stay in a hospital to show the power of the saint. However, there is nothing and the sadness of Spring and Autumn and the emotion of romance. Under the saint, all ants have become laughing. In other words, it is too unconventional and brings down the prehistoric pattern. Just like the main god's road, you can ask for money after dying and resurrecting, or you can just take away the first-level soul if you anger the god. Otherwise, there is no substitution. Players regard themselves as superior to others and are unscrupulous. Anyway, it doesn't matter how the main body dies in the game. The protagonist is the creator god, not the nanny god. Players must Pay for your own arrogance and arrogance, and it is best not to write about The Great Desolation directly at the beginning. It is okay to contextualize him and write it at the end. Otherwise, it will be like the great gods who have appeared in the Great Desolation. It's not that high, no matter how extraordinary it is, it's easy to accept, just go step by step.

It's a pity that the players messed around and destroyed it, which turned off many readers. It would be very hurtful to start writing like this. I originally thought that this book could surpass the goal of raising all human beings, but now it seems that it still has little success.

First of all, let me state that I am not deliberately trying to be arrogant. I am expressing my doubts To summarize at the beginning, the author's 2.0 Soul Realm and Pure Heart screening settings are meaningless and unreasonable. I don't know if the author got too excited and forgot about the setting or what he thought. The chapter review even replied that the setting of Pure Heart is for the heart, and Purity is just that the benefits are not huge enough. I would like to ask, since you are idealistic, what settings should you add? Then doesn't your screening mechanism have to take into account the possibility of idealism to filter out pure hearts? If not, what should we screen? What's so pure about that? Can white and black be considered pure? The setting is to prevent impure people from entering and nourishing monsters. If you enter, because your interests are darkened, you cannot feed the monsters? Okay, since you are idealistic, then you can kick out the person who turns black after entering. As a result, a reader helped the author fill in the loopholes, and the author did reply. As long as he didn't turn into a monster, his account would not be banned? Well, since you are like this, then you screened out a turtle in the beginning... You didn't screen out because you were afraid of staking the enemy. Now that you have screened out, you say that you are idealistic, and then you go in and turn the person into a black man. You also say that it will be fine if you don't turn into a monster. Doesn't this mean you are not succumbing to the enemy? So what is the function of your stuck stuff? Why not just open it? Anyway, the result is the same.

How can you play the Genesis style if you are not good enough? Guide to the protagonist's character: (1) If you can say nothing, try not to speak, use your eyes, use your momentum, and a supporting character who cannot conquer himself is not a good supporting character. (2) To be honest, try to learn to stutter as much as possible, one or two words at a time is enough. (3) Please don't have too many expressions. Example: A creation god opened his eyes with three parts of indifference, four parts of being superior, and seven parts of heartless eyes, and blurted out: "F*ck! Get out!" Do you think it's appropriate? There are readers who like sand sculptures, but in the environment of creation-style novels, there are definitely not many readers who like this kind of description. Although your writing is not as exaggerated as the above, it definitely has this problem.

This type is fun for players in the early stage, but it is a failure in the middle and later stages, because players do not need to bear any consequences. They are trying to kill themselves in the world, and everyone in the small world lives hard and hard. It feels like bullying. Especially when compared between the two, it is even more disgusting (introducing player flow all have this problem, some handle it well and try to humanize the player as a tool, but if it does not handle it well, it is very disgusting)

The author writes very well and has a great worldview structure. I am just afraid of eunuchs.

The author can consider creating a plug-in era, the kind similar to Digimon + supercomputer + Pokemon + combined system. Includes cultivation, possession, splitting, battle pets + loading upgrades. But don't make it like the pets in Digimon who work hard for their lives. It would be embarrassing if the owner just stood aside and yelled a few words. The small world gathers summons, soul contract, training, and combined combat to develop your own combat power at a super-calculated level. Do you know an anime? "The Adventures of Lolo" can inspire you.

After reading it, I would like to share some of my bad points 1. The prehistoric part is very well written, and there is nothing wrong with the player's thinking. But some ferocious beasts can use their hooves to make explosives. This is really speechless and they almost killed Hongjun with gunpowder. This is really poisonous. Do you really think it's a game? 2. The protagonist is the creator god

The author has looked at it, and as for what world to write about, what I actually like is originality, that is, the kind of world that is not the original God! Words or stories of the earth, but a different world. I have to say that the Zerg one is really great. The children of destiny are not necessarily decent, and they may not be able to defeat the villains. In fact, in the eyes of God, their pros and cons may be meaningless, or it may not matter at all. Then I will recommend a few worlds that I like better. For example, the world is full of demons and ghosts, and the mainstream is monks and Taoists. They can catch ghosts and subjugate them, write about human ghosts, sadomasochism, and the tragic life of ghosts. However, it is not recommended to write about cultivating immortals. It is too cliché. Even Taoist priests only live longer than ordinary people. Cultivation of immortals is too cliché. For example, in the world, the monsters are stronger than people, but people find ways to tame the monsters and then train them to fight. For example, in this world, technology and magic are blocked, but in the Cold Weapon Age, the world's land is very large but its richness varies greatly, so big and small countries fight every day. For example, in the abyss world, the world is a 999-level abyss. The deeper you go down, the stronger the demons are and the more resources they have. There are demon lords on each level. In order to obtain resources, the upper-level lords will go to war against the lower levels. It's exciting, and it's more bloody here. After all, there should be no good demons. Be careful with 404. , For example, the colonial world can be said to be the world with the most temporarily used points. There are countless planets. One of the races is recognized as a noble. 99% Of the planet lords are people of this race. Mainly when they are adults, they are forced to find planets to become lords. The rich second generation inherits the family business, and then recruits other people to finally build planets, and they can also engage in Star Wars and other things. It requires a very macro universe. Although I know writing is not easy, I think the worlds written by all authors are basically the same. You end up training or guiding the child of destiny, and then challenge the gods, and then win. Maybe you are worried about life span, so you always become a god. In fact, it is not necessary. Players are not important. The God of Creation must treat all things as dogs. If the world has a short lifespan, you can let a few die and release a few more, making it an open world, but you must remember that players are passers-by, never be the protagonist, and the players should not have too many roles. Maybe I am a reader and it is relatively simple, but I still ask the author to read more about my transactions. I really like this book you wrote. Finally, the update is too slow!!!

Author, please tell me what's wrong. If you don't want to write, just say it. We old book fans are tired of waiting.

I think this is more consistent, because Raheel should be an intellectual beauty