The Sole Savior

To be honest, I looked at such poor results with the attitude of being a eunuch at any time. I didn't expect that I could persevere until now. Yes, at least I am responsible for my own work. The plot is okay, the writing is not delicate enough, but I can see that it is gradually improving. Come on, I'll keep an eye on you.

This book is okay, it's pretty good in this genre. I've been watching behind the scenes for a long time, and I'm definitely qualified to say that the subject matter and content written by this author are okay, but the writing style is too poor. However, such poor results can continue. No matter what, I admire you very much. At least you can be responsible for your own novels. I hope you stick to it Come on

Original drawing of Starry Eyes.

I don't know how to express my feelings about this book. At first I thought the protagonist was just killing monsters with foreign objects, and then he occasionally got skills, and the result was a percentage increase, even at a very low level. The protagonist has a purely ordinary physique, so it is roughly equivalent to a bunch of seemingly useless skills in 666 (more than 140 chapters later, I haven't seen much highlight in these skills. The strongest skill is given to a dog, but as far as I can see, the dog has done nothing). Others said it was watery, but I thought it was acceptable at first. Especially when I perfected the new system, I felt that the book was getting better. But I don't know why the author didn't work on the gangs and the protagonist to improve the system. Instead, he went out all day to pretend to be sexy, and the pretense was not in place. The important thing is that the plot hardly progressed... Until around chapter 130 to around 140, about 15 chapters were about discovering monsters and killing monsters... Fortunately, I still watched it continuously. I can't imagine how broken my mentality would be if I chased it day by day. Only from this moment did I realize that it was real water... The fact that this subject could be written like this made me collapse. I think it was a matter of rhythm and plot control... Forget it, I won't pursue it anymore 😭

Everyone should read this book for the imagination. To be honest, the imagination is really big and quite novel. However, the writing style is a bit poor, and the people in the book are not very intelligent. It just feels a little inexplicable. I don't know what is strange. I just feel that the book The people are not like real people, and this kind of imaginary book is to constantly promote the plot, so the protagonist's hammering here and there does feel a little bit watery, and with such a huge world view, establishing a system early or cooperating with the government can greatly promote the plot. It was a bit dull in the early stage, I don't know if it will get better later on.

The protagonist doesn't know how to improve himself when he has time. Go and practice free fighting or shooting. Even if it's not good enough, you can also improve his physical fitness! They are all planning to establish an organization! There must be a set of basic training methods and training plans, right? But this book is like playing house! I was really speechless when I saw it. Moreover, it feels like those skills are all dependent on the system, not the protagonist's own abilities. Instead of doing this, you might as well just give the equipment and let the equipment have its own skills! 😅

It's really tasteless, and it's a pity to discard it... The settings are still attractive. It's just too watery... I wanted to see something about attracting people and cooperating with each other, but after n chapters, it still didn't exist. I wrote n chapters about a monster, and I kept flipping through it without even reading it, and it didn't affect the rest of the story at all. I wanted to see the setting and plot behind it, but I was too discouraged to watch it. Really tasteless.

There are too many flaws... I feel that the author's writing is very messy. He wants to write everything, but the result is nothing. Moreover, the protagonist gives people the feeling that his IQ is not online, and the supporting characters are also forcibly reduced in intelligence. When I read Xiaobai's novel, it was too watery, and Shuangwen's novel couldn't feel good either. It was grinding and whining.

The book is okay, but the pretentiousness and deception are a bit stiff and not very smooth. The author could go and watch the ferocity of the natives in Real Trouble, which is quite comfortable in terms of pretentiousness and deception.

Can anyone tell me why the protagonist's nonsense turns out to be true? This makes the world feel unreal and very disappointing.