The Commander’s Infinite Odd Jobs

I only now realized that I had done something wrong with such a good book. Reading it in the middle of the night made my blood boil and I turned on the computer and punched Lei Ritian. Then the machine gun exploded with poison and killed everyone alive 😭😭😭😭

I just saw the author's complaint and I don't know what to say. I can only give some things I can see from the online articles I have read over the years. I hope it will be helpful to the author. First of all, I can say with certainty that there was a big problem with the author's selection of materials for the online article, or that the author did not figure out what the audience of his online article liked to read. Not all worlds can be written in Infinite Stream. Even the main god Infinite Stream will not choose worlds randomly. Basically, it is either popular works or works with similar styles or related to each other. It is rare to string together unrelated works. It is not uncommon to do this. But in that case, the reading preferences of the author and the reader overlap greatly. To put it simply, readers who watch StarCraft/Warcraft don't like to watch Infinite Streaming, unless they are wearing Blizzard Universe/Warhammer series. The other thing is that the author is a bit indifferent when writing the sub-world. It seems that the readers of your book are basically rushing to the interstellar space. But you can look at the proportion of the non-interstellar space to the interstellar space after finishing Blue Steel. The two sub-worlds combined account for more than 50% of the interstellar space. To be honest, it would be much better if you returned to the interstellar world after the Yamato dungeon. The two non-interstellar dungeons would be too slow.

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Does anyone want to read Warhammer science? I want to show the results of three years of working on Warhammer 40k 😏

I have only read Chapter 16 so far. I will let other readers tell me what I am not satisfied with: First, the writing is a bit wordy, with long sentences and large paragraphs often appearing. Although I guess the author needs to create characters and advance the story, this is not conducive to the reading experience of online readers. Second, there are too many typos, which also affects the reading experience. A story with a good intention but too many typos is like a top student writing like a chicken and a crab. It is recommended to do more proofreading and error correction. Third, translating names of people and places requires a convention. Since your book is for mainland readers and the game already has an official translation, it is recommended that you follow the official translation, which will help quickly gather fans; if it is not for reasons such as copyright, insisting on your own translated version will look arrogant and stupid in the eyes of readers. Fourth, don't speak in a neon style, this is a European and American game. Bottom line, even if you can't do a high-end translation, don't suddenly say "Idiot brother". I don't know about others, but I don't want to eat filet mignon with miso soup instead of red wine. If these problems can be solved and improved, I can order them all. If I still remain the same after reading 100 chapters, then I'm sorry, I can only choose to leave. The above.

No matter what you are like, as long as you play RTS, we are friends; no matter what you write, as long as you write about Red Alert, StarCraft, Empire, Warcraft, or Total War, I will give you a reward first. There are fewer and fewer people writing this. It's not easy. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's rare to find a StarCraft novel. After reading more than 100 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. I was too tired to read it. The author's book is too fond of playing and talking about various game animations. He seems to be afraid that others will not understand his description, so he uses other games and animations to explain it. The more you look at it from behind, the more chaotic it becomes.

The author, I have been following this book since March because of the book StarCraft. Something like this happened. I want to comfort the author, but I don't know what to say. I haven't joined the group because I don't know the group number 😥 Most of the monthly votes have been given to the author. Come on, author (I don't know what to say, I support the author but I don't know how to express it) Author, can you reply to me? 😃

What will the Martian Mechanicus do when they see the Transformers on Cybertron?

Typo is Kodak's passive skill. Don't underestimate me, you bastard