Source Code: Evil-Slaying Protocol

This is the book I want to see in the science fiction section! ! !

I haven't read it yet, and I'm not interested in science fiction or cyberspace, but the introduction is really good. I can see that the author's writing style is at least not bad, and the setting is also broad. Keep it up, and I wish the domestic science fiction circle will become more and more prosperous.

Your paragraph is a bit long, one to three lines would improve the reading experience. Sometimes the word "water" does not have to be represented by a symbol, but can be depicted by a character, and a monthly pass is given to calculate the toll when passing by.

After seeing the first six chapters until the protagonist was attacked by a hacker for the first time, the writing of the golden three chapters was too cumbersome. I understand that you want to build a future science fiction worldview and introduce the mysterious life experience of the male protagonist. However, the descriptions of technology and equipment are too much and too hard-core. Internet novels mainly serve the story and plot and are for the public. You can describe some important details. The male protagonist goes to his friend for a consciousness tour. You can describe the loading of the protocol process in detail (because hacking can be mentioned later). There is no need to take a speeding car home and write two lines of automatic storage. When you read a novel, you convert words into pictures. When you write a novel, you don't need to convert all the pictures into words. It is entirely possible to shorten the 6 chapters into 3 or 4 chapters, and use the episode when the hacker's consciousness is invaded as the climax of the beginning. Finally, it is best not to use DS. Its descriptions are sometimes very empty, and the improvements it makes may not be good. And if you use it, does it count whether it was written by you or written by AI?

With tears in my eyes, it's been a long time since I last saw such a thoughtful book on Qidian... This is the science fiction I want to read😭😭😭

The author's habit of coining abbreviations is amazing...

I wish you all a Happy New Year~ The author pays attention to your health and has a calm mind. The main thing is that my personal habit is to read the story in one go. I am not used to catching up on updates, so I have been reading it and I can't give any feedback... However, the Spring Festival is here and there is a shortage of books. That's it. Let's start reading.

The author is an old eunuch. I hope this story can be finished normally.

This book makes me dream back to the time when Qidian was first founded. At that time, science fiction was still trying old-school hard science fiction.

Hey, Duck, I know you are in a hurry, but don't be in a hurry. This is not an excuse for you to write RPG as RBQ...