The Wrong Way to Open a Journey to Another World

Uh-huh, I don't know what to say, so let's just leave it like this!

The background setting is great, the characters' IQs are online, they are neither lickers nor virgins, they are two scarred souls who save each other in the dark night.

It's so boring, the environment is bad enough, but why are you still doing a romantic drama! ! The clever author will slowly show it in the subsequent bits and pieces, instead of just adding sugar and filling it to the ground, the protagonist is like a teddy. I have no experience of trying to survive in ruins. The protagonist's background design is in vain, wasting the era background he set.

The story of a good person who persuades people with virtue (physics) and gives out sweets in a different world is very interesting, I mean it.

Come on, I feel like the author has his own story

Correct the typos and fix the punctuation, and the reading experience will improve a lot.

The story is quite interesting. It would be best if you could fix the punctuation, otherwise it will be too tiring to read. Two monthly passes support it.