A Second Chance to Set It All Ablaze

Damn it, there's something wrong with you, you have so many ambiguous women and you don't accept them. If you don't accept them, don't engage in ambiguous affairs. Just do your business cleanly.

I have read 50 chapters. Rebirth novels generally focus on starting a business and supporting family. After reading 50 chapters, I have been unable to stop writing. The development is too slow. There is no need to write about women you don't like. It's annoying to read. Just tell him to get lost. The author's writing style is good, but it's a pity that the main line is wrong. Looking at the urban rebirth novel, the general social development is not very good, and there are many regrets and regrets. Not talking nonsense about a small matter. In fact, the beginning of my 1979 is very good. There is actually no need to explain so much about things in the school.

Chapter 725, the protagonist is still eighteen years old and still in college

This book is the most annoying one I have seen in recent times, bar none! ! Taking the train is 20 chapters, getting off the train and reporting on the university are another ten chapters! ! Did this author, who spent 4 years in college, rush to write 10,000 chapters? ? There is no need to be so grindy in some places. It is too water-friendly. Is it really the Dragon King of Jinghe River? Author? ? Are you the Dragon King? Really good at water

Brothers, good food. I feel like the comment section is a little quiet, which I guess it shouldn't be. All divers, come out and take a dip.

I was really disgusted. Thousands of chapters were written about a few female classmates and female teachers, and they kept emphasizing innocence, but in the end, a female star came and they were instantly hooked? ? ? Honey juice operation makes me sick to the point of vomiting. The author likes Gao Yuanyuan so much that she insists on being the heroine. The key is to only appear at the end. She also seduces a married man to pursue her and then refuses her for divorce. What the hell is this? After reading books for so many years, except for A Proud Nine Heavens, there is no disgusting book. Now add this one, I vomited.

The writing and plot of this book are both excellent. I am the only one in the new book who really doesn't want to be reborn to compare with it. Today's novels are all too exaggerated, either stallions or pretentious. There are really not many good books like this. A ten-year-old bookworm personally reviewed it.

The author's writing style is very good, his narrative ability is also very strong, and his characters are very vivid. However, the progress of the plot is too touching. I have read more than a hundred chapters, and the protagonist's timeline has only been a few days. I can't imagine how many chapters it will be when the protagonist succeeds. I am a little worried that if I keep procrastinating like this, many book friends may lose their patience, and once the results are not good, the author may end the book hastily. I find that there are many The book is so exciting at the beginning, but the progress of the plot is slow. After it is released, it becomes more and more exaggerated. The main possibility is that the patience of book lovers has run out. After starting to subscribe, they will feel that the author has a low word count, and also have a mentality that it is not worth spending money to subscribe to such a low-level book. If the subscription is not strong, the author will not be able to continue writing. Of course, there may be updates or other reasons. Of course, what I want to say is, can the author speed up the progress of the plot? It doesn't have to be too much, just finish the book with no more than 3 million words. Well, the author, please keep updating, work hard, I hope it will be wonderful. The above is my personal opinion. Thank you!

Is the author sure not to change such a poisonous way of rebirth? Is this kind of rebirth still meaningful? It's baffling to wake up, and it's okay to be reborn. You have to hang a sword over your head. It cannot make people feel unrestrained. You have to restrain your hands when doing anything or picking up girls. Think about whether you will be reborn again or be struck to death by a thunder. What a waste of rebirth! It is recommended that the author change this rebirth setting. You wrote so well before, but suddenly such a big poisonous point is really unbearable. It's really disgusting. If you can change it, change it as soon as possible. Otherwise, I can't stand it, and I don't know what others are like.

No matter what the protagonist says, others don't believe it and have to have someone testify for him every time. "What he said is true" "This is true" It's always so embarrassing