Restarting Life at Twenty

There are too many emotional scenes in this drama. The male protagonist is entangled with Xia Wenzhuo and has sex with so many women at the same time. Author, can you control so many people? Be careful that everything will fall apart later. I suggest you finish the Xia Wenzhuo part first.

Brother Watermelon, I feel that your book may have a polarizing effect on readers. People who like it are happy with it, but people who don't agree with it will be confused. The reason may be due to depth issues. Although the author himself must have personal style preferences, sometimes he has to make changes to suit the readers, which may be uncomfortable, but there is nothing he can do about it for the sake of performance. In fact, I personally still prefer the current style of this book, because I really hope that this book will become more popular, so I still have some opinions that I don't agree with: the verbal plot expression can be simpler, the main line can be a little more compact, and there should be as many exciting points as possible. Sometimes it is neither popular nor popular, and many readers don't approve of it. Alas... Come on, brother!

After reading a lot of rebirth novels, I discovered a problem: Many authors like to write about a hundred films ago where the protagonist does nothing! Whether it's writing about high school life here or there, or about family troubles, anyway, it takes almost a hundred pictures, before the theme begins and the protagonist begins to develop! I don't know what's wrong with it, many authors layout it like this! Some authors are very capable, which is okay! Can persist. But more than that, I just can't stand it! But I also found that for a well-written urban rebirth article, you can basically finish the first thirty pictures and then start getting down to business! These are relatively clean and well written~

There is nothing wrong with the writing being in-depth, and there is nothing wrong with the previous protagonist being so weak and exploited that he can only rely on fists or resistance. But when it's time to feel good, you should feel good. In more than 60 chapters, there is a highlight of the college entrance examination. There has not been a big highlight since college, and readers already know that this highlight is the Internet. Everyday trivial things are fine, but they must serve the main line. If the article cannot be repeated, it will be too trivial. For example, you can take it with you in one go when you go on a trip. You can just say a few words when buying an umbrella. Bringing the umbrella with you expresses your feelings. Confessions bring out conflicts, and the reconciliation of conflicts brings about greater conflicts. But the journey to buy an umbrella was too cumbersome, and the games played in the car were not very interesting. After so many chapters, the protagonist's computer business has not done much, and the operation of the website has not been written in detail until others learned about its influence. (Why the website is popular, why people choose this website, what improvements have been made to the website, what is the purpose of the improvements, and what is ahead of other websites) These are all not written. On the contrary, it is daily eating and chatting, and the values ​​​​are exported non-stop, all of which are conversations with brothers. The conversation between a beautiful girl and her brother almost always takes up a large area of ​​description. Entrepreneurship articles can write about people's hearts, but the theme is still entrepreneurship. Business development, how to develop it, what aspects of your business are ahead of others, and only then do you seize other people's territory and others set you back. The advantage of this book is that no one is a fool, and not everyone helps the protagonist. I hope the author can improve the storytelling, because most people read novels just to read a story.

Standing in the wind, even a pig can fly. . This sentence is purely to deceive people who don't know what to do! With no connections, no channels, no social resources, and most importantly, no ability or means, you can fly and let me take a look. Just the political struggle within a company and the struggle for interests and rights can kill you, but you still want to take off? To give the simplest example, in the battle of thousands of regiments, why is only Wang Xingfei of Meituan rising? Also, why are highly educated people taking off in the Internet industry? So don't believe those claims that pigs can take off even if they stand in the wind. It's pure nonsense.

Those who have had enough of being reborn in middle school and high school still fucking remember the big and small things decades later, the college entrance examination questions and so on, and they can still write those songs and novels, and even more awesome ones can even make movies. The key is to remember the box office, stock lottery, betting and so on. The protagonist doesn't have a golden finger, so he just remembers it after rebirth. I've had enough. I'm out of books and don't want to read this type of book anymore.

I endured reading more than 20 pictures and felt dizzy. Maybe I am not good enough. I wish this book a great success! ! ! 🙏🙏

Let's put it this way, more than 800 chapters later, the little boss in Novice Village lives a more elegant life than the protagonist, causing others to lose their job prospects and playing with other people's wives, while the protagonist is still bitter and grudged and unable to take revenge.

I don't even dare to write like this in my diary. It's only been three years since I wrote three thousand chapters of the timeline. It's so long and boring.

Chapter 200 jumps to more than 1,600 chapters. I am still in my sophomore year, and the ancient martial arts have come out. It is boring to abandon it.