Restarting Life at Twenty

This drama has too much romance. The male lead is entangled with Xia Wenzhuo while also seeing so many other women. Author, can you handle all of them? Be careful, it might fall apart later on. I suggest you sort out Xia Wenzhuo's relationship first.

Brother Watermelon, I feel your book might be polarizing among readers. Those who like it will love it, while those who don't will be confused, perhaps due to its depth. While authors certainly have their own preferred writing style, sometimes changes are necessary to cater to readers, which can be difficult, but it's unavoidable for the sake of success.

After reading many rebirth stories, I've noticed a problem. Many authors like to write about the protagonist doing absolutely nothing before the first hundred chapters! Whether it's describing his high school life or his family troubles, Anyway, it will take almost a hundred photos. The main theme has only just begun to unfold, and the protagonist's story is only just starting to develop!

I've just read over 300 chapters. It's very well written, with excellent character portrayals and a logically sound story. Four monthly tickets to show my support! 👍

It's true that the writing is profound, and it's also true that the protagonist is constantly being humiliated and manipulated, only able to rely on his fists or fight back. But there should be satisfying moments when they're meant to be. There's a satisfying moment about the college entrance exam that comes around in chapter 60-something.

If you stand in the right place at the right time, even a pig can fly. This statement is purely meant to fool people who don't know anything about this! Without connections, channels, social resources, and most importantly, without the ability and means, you think you can fly? The internal political struggles and power struggles within a company alone could destroy you. You still want to fly?

I'm fed up with all these reincarnation stories where the protagonist is reborn in middle or high school and remembers everything from decades later, including college entrance exam questions. They can even write songs and novels, and some even manage to make movies, remembering box office figures, stock market data, lottery numbers, and sports betting.

I forced myself to read through more than 20 pages, and my head and eyes started to spin. Maybe my reading comprehension isn't up to par. I wish this book great success!!! 🙏🙏

Let's put it this way: there are over 800 chapters now, and the minor boss in the beginner village is living a more carefree life than the protagonist, causing others to lose their jobs and futures while he's having sex with other people's wives, while the protagonist is still suffering from deep resentment and unable to take revenge.

I wouldn't even dare write a diary like this. I've written three thousand chapters, but the timeline is only three years long. It's so rambling and drawn-out.