This Assassin Has Issues

Personal opinion: I support the author in other aspects, but I really don't understand why the author said there is no heroine at the end of Chapter 57 of the second part. This is not a fashionable trend... It's okay if some books don't write it, but this book combines the previous emotional foreshadowing and plot with foreshadowing. After reading some book friends' comments, it should have a big impact on readers who have the same sense of expectation, resonance and sense of substitution for how they will develop like me. Moreover, a lot of ink has been spent on hinting and describing the relationship. The overall atmosphere created by the novel includes the tone of the love dialogue between the two at the beginning, the setting of their pairing, and Xue Ling's emotional changes and explicit expressions (including jealousy, etc.). Even Fang Bi's own feelings are not unchanged. With so much foreshadowing, it is like building a big cake in front of hungry people, and then suddenly saying that this big cake is not actually intended for you, so don't even think about throwing it away. 😥 This feeling of loss really had a great impact on my reading of the book. Personally, I even instantly lost most of my expectations for the subsequent plot. . . Even if it is later dealt with as a friendship/beauties relationship and eventually forget each other, or the protagonist is a cold-blooded animal who just wants to survive, there is actually a contradiction and a huge gap between the overall look and feel and the early foreshadowing. It lacks a bit of relaxation and human touch. Maybe I personally don't like the somewhat sad and regretful ending. At the same time, I personally think that such an arrangement is indeed unreasonable and unreasonable. Finally, I saw that there was a female protagonist on the character sheet? I hope the author can consider it or can you reply with some related thoughts? 🌝 Now I am going to keep it for now and read the follow-up later. It is really not easy to find a novel that suits my taste. . Or do any book friends know of any other twists or arrangements in the future? Also, if anyone knows the group number for this book, can you tell them? Thank you

I finally feel comfortable. Punk is against the law and tomorrow is poisonous. Sure enough, with the author's writing style, it's better to write about martial arts.

After it was released, I saw that there was no heroine, and I wrote down a few words I wanted to say to the author: 1. To be honest, I have not read martial arts for many years, and I have a good taste in martial arts. I rarely see such good martial arts novels. The author's writing is excellent, so it's okay; Actually, the author doesn't understand what it's like to write a novel without a heroine - like go away, if you don't use a large section of text to describe the heroine, or emphasize the relationship between the heroine and the protagonist, it doesn't matter if there is no heroine; however, there are obviously so many ambiguous plots, and there are so many interactions between men and women and then there is no heroine, I really feel that the author is suffering from literary youth disease, and it is an incurable one. I don't read books written by Wen Qingbing. Especially the one with a forced tragic ending. To be honest, there are too many articles on the Internet, and young literary writers all imagine that tragedies can actually become gods, but what? In the reader's mind, it is as uncomfortable as eating a bowl of fried rice and ending up with a mouthful of shit. 3. Finally, I suggest that if the author writes a novel without a female protagonist, he should not spend so much time embellishing the female characters and their interactions with the male protagonist. Let's be less guilty of literary youth disease. Farewell.

This book is definitely a good book, and the writing is very good. Every character is like a person rather than a character in a novel. It feels like a world, and we are looking at the story of a small point in this world. I have been reading the book for ten years, and I think this book is definitely enjoyable and interesting.

The writing is good, and the plot is well written, but actually I gave up halfway through the first time I read it. In the past few days, I picked it up and read it again. The most popular thing I read in the book review section was the debate about the heroine. I would like to express my own opinions. First of all, as a woman, I can actually accept whether there is no heroine or a single heroine. On the contrary, the stallion harem is a bit difficult to watch... The author has been constantly emphasizing that there is no heroine in this article, but he also spent a lot of pen and ink to describe the emotions of the characters. In fact, every girl in it is very interesting. They have distinctive characteristics and personalities. Shang Jiuge, Ning Xia, Xue Ling, and Sister Ping are all very likable. Any one of them can open a book on their own and become the heroine. The heroine I am talking about does not necessarily have to be in love with the hero. They can be family, friendship, comradeship, or even sympathy between opponents. I think the emotional line between Shang Jiuge and Sister Ping is handled very well, but Xue Ling, Ning Xia, the doctor, and Qin's assassins are very distracting. The female characters keep confessing to the male protagonist. The male protagonist and everyone say that I don't want to fall in love now. I have important things to do. I like each of you, but not to be together... Etc., It's very tiring to watch. If you really want to write without a female protagonist, then why do you want to write that these girls are obsessed with the male protagonist? In order to highlight the charm of the male protagonist? Personality charm can only be reflected in love, right? For example, Xue Ling meets the male protagonist when she is desperate. She can rely on and admire the male protagonist. She can regard the male protagonist as the kind of person she needs to work hard to become. She is strong, smart, and confident. She must survive no matter what and protect the people she cares about. Why do you have to fall in love with the male protagonist? Even if you really like her, you can keep it in your heart, and you can quietly work hard to become a person worthy of standing by his side instead of confessing your love every time. The same goes for the doctor and the female assassin under Qin. People who are clearly said to be very sober and understanding, turn into love brains when it comes to the male protagonist? Everyone needs to express their feelings once? The male protagonist is also very strange. Since he is not ready to fall in love now, and he keeps flirting, he seems to be telling every woman around him, "Do you like me? It's okay if you like me, but don't fall in love with me, it won't work out." He feels like the legendary green tea man, who is flirting with the girls around him, causing others to misunderstand him, while constantly emphasizing that "we are good friends and buddies" and "I just treat you as my sister". Overall, each character in this book is outstanding individually. The characters are vividly described and very likable. It is a very good martial arts novel. However, on the emotional line, it feels like the author used a harem style to write a so-called novel without a heroine 😅

#Some personal views on Shang Jiuge I will say silently first, Jiuge is the Zai'er who submitted this article She herself is a sword, sharp and fair, but also informal. To friends, she has the simplicity and gentleness of a scabbard; to outsiders, she has the sharpness and fairness of a sword. To give a high-level summary, she is an interesting person - she always behaves fairly and calmly, but always unexpectedly. She is not the protagonist, but she takes up so much space. A large part of the reason is because she is interesting. (Also, thank you Qiu Ming for giving me a lot of face) Look at these interesting people, they are always special. #Some people say that Jiu Ge is too long and drags out the plot Personally, it is interesting to have such an interesting character running the plot... This is not called off-center, but the story told by Qiu Ming itself does not have an absolute center. (Rainbow Fart must be arranged, because this writing style, this plot, and this story are worthy of arrangement.) #And (as expected, this oral habit is contagious), I am currently writing a fan of Jiuge, a kind of poem and song It is just in time for the release of Assassin, so I present this lyrics here to celebrate the release of another book by Qiu Ming / I am in a dream Capture the still unknown shadow of the sword Return to the world Look at the turbid world and I am alone Caressing the hilt of the sword Knowing that life is admirable and sad to be desolate Reciting the ancient saying It is sad to see that there is good and evil in the world I am involved in the world and want to live in the world The soaring eagle I don't know that the world is uneasy - Officialdom is muddy water People are afraid And I finally saw what was right and wrong The heart of the sword has become clear Using a human sword to tell the truth I don't know who has a black heart I am accused of killing a thief I never believe that evil triumphs over good Being magnanimous is also punished A sword heart goes to court There are always people to speak out the truth Only those who are pure can be clean Justice will last forever Or It is the human heart that disappears There will be no sorrow in the ages The despicable actions The proof of my persistence will disappear into the invisible I only wish that the world is vast The years are ruthless Or the human heart will eat itself Peace begins in the ages The despicable actions The clarification of my persistence will disappear into the invisible Only the shadow of the sword remains. / Then, at the end, he said silently, Qiu Ming, come on. No matter what the score is, I really think your book is very beautiful I hope that we can help each other, as you said ——A reader who reads masterpieces seriously

There's something wrong with this author. Does he like dual-player games so much? Do you do whatever you want just because your writing skills are good? You

Assassin is on the shelves today, but I am late So the first order is presented, a congratulatory poem as usual, matching the theme, so it is "Jiangchengzi" (It was so hard for me to flatten it) The following text: The curtains of the painting building are always bright, the silver screen is broken, and the wind is clear. A half-pipe bamboo flute, inscribed in Drunken Shang tune. Could it be that this body is scattered and lost, and it cannot be found? The rain should clear up. I stand on my eyebrows and count the green peaks, to explore the gods and pull the dust stars. A song of love, holding the head high and asking Qi Ying. In my dream, I heard that the stars were green, and I wanted to look back and see Pingting. Come on Qiu Ming! Just wait for my Jun Qianwazi to appear

He couldn't beat outsiders, and then he was said a few words by one of his own, and slapped Xue Ling... He laughed, and his three views turned from pink to bad. The protagonist has the typical mentality of a domestic violence abuser. Xue Ling didn't have any reaction or expression yet, so she just listened silently, a typical victim of domestic violence. 😒 It's not easy to write a character that I like very much like this... To be honest, the plot can be rounded, and it can be suppressed first and then expanded, but if your character's three views have collapsed, it is difficult for people to accept it.

A classic light novel with rich characters, the male protagonist is all about flirting but not marrying, the plot gradually collapses, and the dialogue explains the setting. I really don't understand why a novel with a beautiful girl in the introduction has to add a line afterwards that there is no female protagonist, and the ancient beauties who took the initiative to express their feelings are not worthy of the modern male protagonist, right? Martial arts and martial arts, either writing about martial arts or writing about chivalry. If you don't plan to have a female protagonist, then you have to get the plot right. It's nothing more than being the best in the world, good versus evil, and the country is in turmoil. After reading the whole story, I can only say that it is an excellent light novel, but it is just a martial arts novel.