My Everyday Evolution Game

If you upgrade your rice-carrying skill to the master level, can you carry a bag of rice to several floors? ? ?

Do you guys have any deals?

How to say it. This is an author who has not been severely beaten by Qidian Orphanage. He naively thought that the protagonist's parents were just a setting. But actually. As of now. The protagonist's parents are a burden to the protagonist and to the entire book. As a result, the plot cannot be developed. Because my parents are here, I can't participate in the dungeon. If you cannot participate in the dungeon, the plot will not advance. Forcing to push the plot will lead to giving the parents a "death constitution", and all kinds of things will happen around their parents. The additional green plum also has this problem. A green plum in a vase is destined not to become a heroine, because she cannot satisfy the protagonist (physical differences), nor can she help the protagonist. Destined to be a burden. And because of the existence of this female protagonist, the description of the female supporting role cannot be too much. If there is too much, the protagonist will be overshadowed, and if there is less, the description will not be enough. If there is a next book where the protagonist enters an orphanage, maybe the results will be better.

It hurts to see you write the plot of the official background. You can't just create a different world and write it however you want. Now it's metaphorical and so on. It's embarrassing to write and it's embarrassing to watch.

Good books shouldn't be buried like this! There are only three or four good books of this type.

I feel aggrieved by what you wrote. How have you ruined the character of the protagonist? He keeps thinking that the sky is falling and he is standing tall, enjoying the country's welfare but doing nothing. I don't understand why you wrote this book to show us that the protagonist is always cowardly and does nothing and lets others support him. What's the use of having this protagonist?

1. Shenhao, what is the use of buying a house and going to school? He has been doing missions on a daily basis unlike Shenhao, he has never lived in so many houses, and his strength level has already exploded before he even went to college. 2. Qingmei is a failure and has no love at all. Her mother's assistance is even more annoying, and accompanying Qingmei on tasks as a nanny is even more annoying. 3. Don't want to expose yourself and pretend to be so long, and then suddenly join the organization to dedicate yourself? Although he obviously has a high IQ during the mission, he shows his lack of common sense when dealing with the leaders of the organization, and he keeps hinting at persuading Qingmei to join. 4. Xia Tong, the person in charge of the first department, is very childish in his interactions with the protagonist. Even though he cannot beat the protagonist in terms of IQ and force, is he still going against the protagonist childishly to attract the protagonist's attention? A girl who looks cute on the outside is really a cat on the inside? 5. The devil's daughter appeared out of nowhere. I thought she would be dealt with or reported by the steady protagonist, but she turned out to be a tutor and a cook. Then she became more and more public. Is it necessary to hide and disguise?

I was really drunk, and it was quite toxic at the beginning. Can you get trending hits just by writing? There are a lot of those things online, I'm afraid you have never used Weibo.

Excluding all the old jokes and jokes, it's just a weak character and a novice writer.

The author is definitely in need of an operations officer. If so, add one 🙂