This Hokage Is Not Hot-Blooded

The first hundred chapters are the most comfortable to read. I am used to the adventures of the protagonist's template, and I am also used to the world view of Naruto in the beginning of Konoha. It is very novel. Reading this book, from knowing the protagonist's life experience to avenging his mother, killing Hanzo, and later avenging a murder related to the protagonist, is very fascinating. The person who impressed me the most in this book is Yulu. I don't know why. What, it may be that the protagonist also thinks he is a good big brother, but it is a pity that I did not come with this book. I remember that I also read this book in March, but left after reading a few chapters. The reason is that when I first read the fanfic, I felt that the protagonist was not a sunny, optimistic, and adventurous person. In a word, this book is the best fanfic I have ever read.

This novel sounds very good, but the dark wind is hard for me to accept. I lied to you. Let me tell you one thing, the author is growing up

The author's writing style is very good and he can control the dark wind. However, applying Naruto's world view is a small failure. Although it can solve the problems of world view and plot development, after all, there is a big difference in style between most fan fiction and this book. Readers attracted by the title of the book may not necessarily buy it.

It's unfinished, but it's still a good book; there were a lot of moving parts in the early stages, and the little characters are pretty well portrayed. , The character of the protagonist is shaped by the continuous rich experiences of the deaths of each character. From someone else's knife to a human, his combat power basically collapsed after the prison robbery, but it is over anyway, recommended; Funny where it should be funny, passionate where it should be, Suspense where it should be Excellent And the author can be said to be very bold in shaping the characters In contrast, there are a few shortcomings. Some places in the middle period are not very logical (such as the decisive battle in the Kingdom of Demons, and even how to beware of Orochimaru suddenly coming) Why did his personality suddenly change? Why did he change so much? Is he still the boy who killed Fenfu because he brainwashed him? In the later period, Shimura Danzo was completely shaped into a clown. Regarding Minato's darkening, I think it is a wonderful point; as for Yahiko, I also think it is okay, but Konan Nagato How can I describe the behavior of sending the protagonist to prison? It's a bit weird. In the chapter where a genjutsu covers an army and fights against the Four Ninja Village, it can be said that the combat power is somewhat broken. Lin went to wake up Kakashi and the foreshadowing was not taken back. Then the finale is a mysterious happy ending. It feels like the author was tired of writing and wanted to finish it faster.

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My favorite part of this book is the two duels with Hanzo. After reading so many Naruto fan stories, the author vividly depicts the limits and regrets of an ordinary ninja. There is no blood, no cheats, and no science. You start with a sickle and a pepper fish, killing the entire ninja world. He had very few ninjutsu, no Chattanla, and no support for a large number of release techniques. His lifelong companion, Sanshouyu, was a low-level psychic beast that couldn't even speak. With this configuration, he could forcibly earn the name of a demigod in a period when the strongest shadows gathered together (the strongest Hokage in the third generation, the strongest Kazekage in the third generation, the strongest Raikage in the third generation, and the strongest Tsuchikage in the third generation). When the dirt appeared in the manga, it was already a period when the manga's combat power collapsed. Hanzo was killed by Mifune's plot before he could shine, and the former demigod came to an end sadly. In various fandoms, it is just a stepping stone for the protagonist who can fly Gundam. The descendants of Otsutsuki use all kinds of magic to destroy the world. Shuriken and ninja swords have gradually become decorations, and ordinary ninjas can only become cannon fodder. So I prefer this shuriken and sword ninja~

After reading it, I still want to say something. Anyway, the author also likes Rainbow Fart 😏😏😏 Let's talk about it from the beginning, to be honest, there is indeed a persuasion to quit at the beginning, not because of darkness and depression, but because the opening of darkness + child struggle is almost It has become a standard plot. Most of it is about selling sex with a sheep's head, and the whole story is underage (everyone knows what I am talking about specifically), especially the plot where Yuyao is deflated, ugh~ the smell was in my face. Maybe I don't appreciate the growth of so-called ordinary people. Fortunately, this section doesn't have too many arrangements. But the follow-up is very exciting. After reading the follow-up content, I felt like I was questioning the map and the plot. When I watched it, I felt that the plot was very rich, but after reading it carefully, it didn't feel bloated. The overall plot was condensed into a limited map and events. I always think this is a very powerful thing, especially in the creative environment of online articles that is constantly updated. Personally, I really like the way the characters are created in this book. Yuba is rude, irritable, and slovenly, but in his later years due to disability, he had to devote all his life to the protagonist. Yulu, who likes to cook but has to stay away from his family due to health reasons, looks scary but gentle. A cold male protagonist who has no common sense and only wants to kill people. Not through narration like storytelling, but through their words and deeds, flesh and blood people struggling to survive in this indifferent and desperate world, I prefer all of this, no righteous Lingran criticism, no childish and ridiculous tenderness, just through a person The silhouettes of life piece together a cold world covered by rain, but the pain and depression are engraved in the eyes of the readers. Tragedy, this is a complete tragedy, at least from the perspective of now, but because of this, it all makes more sense. The world is like this, and pure happiness is just a lie. As for fate, or the author's careful selection, the protagonist should be in the land of rain, and so should everyone else, just like their cold, damp, rain-covered lives. The deaths of Yuyao, Yuba, Yuning and others further illustrate the cursed fate of the protagonist, perhaps not just the protagonist - this is a cursed land. In this place called Yuyin, the protagonist always gets the most favor, innate talents, favor from the leader of Judgment, and help from Bai Jue, but he often faces the saddest ending. But Yuba is the complete opposite. He is disabled like a gambler who is red-eyed at gambling. He made a desperate move and chose the protagonist. However, accidents happened repeatedly and he lost all his money. He desperately waited for the judgment of fate in the pig pen. When he finally got the house, the gold card, and what he had dreamed of in his life, he had no idea that the truth had been exposed. He fell from heaven to hell. He knew the protagonist. Did he feel guilty when he chose the protagonist? Is he mentally prepared for everything? I don't know. Yu Ning's death was probably the most peaceful of all, but he was the continuation of the consequences of Yu Yao's death, and the consequences of his death extended to the Yu Xuan brother and sister. One thing to say is that the style of this book is different from the funny cover, which is quite depressing, but the overall plot line and rhythm control shown by the author in the book are indeed quite powerful. Different characters appear one after another, and the plots related to them are also interspersed, but in the end they are all attached to the main line of the protagonist's fate, which also promotes and foreshadows the fate of the protagonist. Finally, I haven't said anything about Yulu's plot. To be honest, the author, do you have any opinions on this character? 😡😡😡 As far as the plot is concerned, I thought Yuru was a very important character at first. After all, his characteristics can be summarized as a gentle monster. He likes cooking and has a gentle heart. He also has a strange quirk. He is different from everyone else, or in other words, he is incompatible with the entire Yugakure. He has similarities with the protagonist, but he has a human side that the protagonist does not have. Personally speaking, this is one of my favorite characters, and it is also the content that I can't accept the most in the Ghost Country volume. A gentle monster, a monster despised by everyone, met a male protagonist who is not afraid of corpses. I thought this was the redemption of fate. Yulu will die, which is expected, but I It is hoped that the protagonist can redeem Yulu's soul so that he can face the end of life with a smile. Perhaps he dies in the hands of the protagonist, confirming the cursed fate of their group. The ending is sad but not ridiculous. Perhaps he was killed by the evil god. He died well, perhaps to save Hanajian or to atone for his sins. But I never thought that Uru would die in such a ridiculous, almost mocking ending. He was killed by the Nagato trio because it looked like he was robbing a civilian girl. If that was the case, I could also think that it was the author trying to show the impermanence of fate. But then, when the protagonist saw it, the protagonist exploded, the fat cat stabbed him in the back, and Uzumaki apologized. That's it, that's it, that's it, it can be said in 16 words. He died like a sidekick. In the end, Yuxuan apologized and said he was sorry. The protagonist woke up and worked hard to exercise. Are you annulled? Damn it, I can tell you except when I saw Yu Zhou Lao Dao die, I was not angry enough to live like this. They are all 'monsters' who are not tolerated by the group. They also have a gentle heart, hiding simple wishes that can never be realized. But! Old Taoist Yu Zhou had a group of close friends. In the end, he voluntarily sacrificed himself for his apprentice, and He Qing, who harmed him, also died in his pursuit, but what about Yu Lu! ! ! He died like that, and by the way, his daughter was paired with the protagonist, wdnmd.

Ending Chapter 205 Assassination 2/5 This book combines Naruto with the author's perspective to depict the cold-bloodedness, danger, cruelty and intrigue of the ninja profession. These are things that the Naruto animation does not have. It tells more about the blood and blood of an ordinary ninja. Fire, pain and torture, as well as a small amount of warmth, are always dancing on the boundary between life and death. The atmosphere of the book is very depressing, and the main line is never that little bit tender. If you feel comfortable looking for this book and just looking at it, I suggest you not to come. Although this book is an ordinary piece of online literature, the story told by the author has some connotations. I don't know what the author's mentality was when he wrote this book, but when I read this book based on life and "Naruto", I had some feelings. Alas, I really like this book, but I can't bear to read it any more, because I saw something in the review that I didn't want and dared not to see – Misaki is dead. From Yushi's point of view, Ling Nai is more like a big sister to him. She is the purity that the dirty and miserable himself cannot reach or even dare to covet. She is a holy existence in his heart. He just wants to protect her from a distance, as if he is guarding the pure land that is about to disappear in his heart. Compared with Ling Nai, Sanxiao is the one who is more likely to have an emotional bond with him. Even if this relationship cannot have an end, I don't want to see death. . .

Others are just okay. The main drawback is that the protagonists are too emotional. People's personalities are determined by their childhood experiences. According to the protagonists' experiences, when they grow up, even if they are not murderous madmen, they will be indifferent to emotions. Looking at people is no different from looking at dogs. In the end, If the protagonists and others who were raised by humans are rich in emotions and compassion, they even feel more than ordinary people. In addition, the author does not know how to foreshadow many things that come out of nowhere. There is no prelude in the front, which can easily make people feel very abrupt.

Someone wants the original picture. Have you seen the bowl at Madara's feet?

This is my favorite Naruto fanfic. It's the most interesting and to my taste. You should write it slower and don't finish it. I can't let go of Kikumaru, Kaneki, Itachi, and everyone in the Demon Hidden Village.

To put it bluntly, this movie can be considered a masterpiece among Naruto movies. Personal feeling: The one before killing Hanzo looks better than the one after. Of course, this is just a personal feeling.

At the beginning, it was discovered that Hanzo was the big boss, and then the protagonist began to become Hanzo, making every move. And the ending is more like the original work. The beginning and end are just like fighting Kaguya and Madara. After the ending, it is completely messed up. He started to be really good at describing people's hearts. He wrote out all the possible reactions that we might imagine when a person takes another path. But in the end, I don't know what he went through. The writing was very messy and many parts were completely inconsistent with the character. It ended very hastily. In fact, things started to get completely messy when we got to Hashirama Cell. The protagonist started to make the same mistake as Hanzo. With some descriptions, I really thought he would end up just like Hanzo. This was originally an epic,

I accidentally found this novel, and I couldn't help but sigh, what a guy, this is a guy who borrowed the Hokage's bottle to fill his own wine. It's not a mockery, but an appreciation. Compared with other Naruto fandoms that are neither fish nor fowl, this book makes readers feel that the author is seriously creating stories, rather than relying on the big tree of Kishimoto to beg for food. This sentence simply means that the author is writing stories rather than copying them. This is something I appreciate very much. There are many Naruto fans, and most of them are about the departure process from Konoha. The protagonist ingeniously chooses the Kingdom of Rain, the future base camp of Akatsuki, as a novice village. Combined with the identity of the protagonist Uchiha Obito, the future life trajectory of the protagonist can't help but become weird. What kind of interactions will the protagonist have with the Nagato trio? What will be the development of the protagonist and the Uzumaki brothers and sisters? The protagonist is friends with Konoha. Are they enemies? Where will the protagonist and the Judgment Organization go? What will happen to the protagonist and Ayano? Can the protagonist save Obito and even the fate of Uchiha... The author leaves a lot of clues and leaves us with a lot of room for imagination. Although this is very different from the usual straightforward writing style of Naruto fans, it can make people who have never watched Naruto anime also enjoy it. Therefore, I hope the author can persist in this kind of creation, or he will become a benevolent person if he fails.

To be honest, when I saw Brother Lu, I thought it was a fairy grass, but later on, the plot was pushed for the sake of plot, which was a bit blunt and completely inconsistent with the protagonist's character. . . What is the reason for the protagonist to return to Yucun? Is there any place in Yucun that the protagonist deserves to miss? Later, Obito died and angered the fourth generation was even more inexplicable. Didn't Kaneki even less optimistic about his younger brother? It would be understandable if the protagonist didn't have deep feelings for Obito, but while having deep feelings for Obito, he also wanted to prevent him from going to the battlefield right under his nose? What is the logic of this? I am not the author of the plot. If you want to write about a duel between brothers, you can, let the plot and the characters be combined instead of opposing each other. Logical. You want to keep the original plot of the Three Wars, but can you write that Jin Mu has something to do and is unable to get away, or that he has to perform a mission or something like that. But while the author writes about doting on his younger brother, he also does his own thing when he has enough time, leaving Obito behind. The characters and plot are disconnected, which is really a pity.

， I have been reading novels for so long, and I have read all kinds of novels over and over again, but the thing I wanted to read the most was found in the fan fiction that was originally meant to kill time. . . Things are unpredictable.

It was really good-looking and a masterpiece at first, but later on... To be precise, it started to stretch my hips in Moyin Village. It is most obvious when Obito Uchiha dies. The final ending... Six Paths Madara was blown to death by the 600 billion detonating talisman? Even a Boruto would not dare to compile it like this. It is obvious that the author wants to finish it as soon as possible, without any logic.

Alas, don't equate sadness and sadism with good writing...

Undoubtedly the best Naruto novel I have ever read! Depicts the most realistic world of ninjas. The characters of the ninjas are exactly the same as in the original work, and there is no system yet. It's a pity that it was a little unfinished in the end, and some holes were left unexplored. But what I am worried about is that if Toneri and the others come, the Ninja World will be transferred to Boruto in advance, but the author did not fill the hole. I guess the fact that Tao Shi and the others were scolded by Zangwan proved that they had a direct blood feud with the dog, and they would never be able to get over it.

The story is a tragedy, and the plot is also very sad, but I always feel that the readers are not allowed to vent their sad feelings at key points. It is a very sad scene. I wanted to cry to express my feelings, but I found that the plot was too bland and I could only feel uncomfortable. For example, if you discover that your brother is not dead, you should be surprised and excited that he came back from the dead, angry that he killed his best friend, and despair of being unable to avenge his best friend. Various emotions were mixed together, and then mobilized my fragile nerves, controlled my tear ducts, and made me cry with empathy. . But at the end of the book, it was just incredible. I felt that the foreshadowing in the previous paragraph was not well expressed. My tear glands were ready to secrete tears, but my mood was no longer sad. I wanted to cry but couldn't. . . It feels a bit pity. But overall it is still the best Naruto fanfic I have ever seen (๑>؂<๑)

People in the world of Naruto have ignorant minds. When they have been oppressed for a long time and are exhausted physically and mentally, if there is a person who claims that he is a god, has great power, and can protect himself, then he has a lot of potential to give up his free mind, even his body, and even everything, just to have a little bit of support in the gloomy heart, and that's all.

The plot and character portrayal are all very good, but I think there are two problems. One is that the plot is relatively depressing. This type of film is generally not good, but it is not even half a star better than the Shuangwen that is now rampant. The second issue is the role. Yuba is the best character in my opinion. He has a bad mouth, advances and retreats, a knife and tofu. He is very plump. Yuba's death is natural. You can also see Yuba's influence on the protagonist in the subsequent plot. Then there is Yufu, a very distinctive little person. Before he had no goal, he lived in a muddle-headed way. After he had a goal and a bond, he dared to risk his life. Yushu feels a bit anticlimactic. He was portrayed as someone who would do whatever it takes to achieve his ideals, but later there was no explanation. With all due respect, a person who doesn't even care about his son for his own goals, no matter whether he does good or evil, will never remain unknown. Uru is even more so. He clearly showed his affection and righteousness and gave up everything for love, but he died ridiculously in the hands of Nagato's group of people. In the original book, there is no need to say who the Akatsuki organization is. Although it has changed a bit in this book, Yahiko is also dead, and Akatsuki's beliefs have also changed. Why would they still attack Uru? It's unreasonable. Then there is Misaki, emmm, I have no impression of this character except Kurama, and he died in a daze. Nono U, her multifaceted talents and rich emotional heart are fully written. Although I don't understand how she can be a shadow clone of Huang Quan's right-hand man without being discovered, but it seems that the only value of her character is to help the protagonist open his eyes? As for other supporting characters such as Minato Kakashi and Obito (yes, I think the author put Obito in the position of a passerby like Kakashi), they are quite distinctive in front of the main character Kaleidoscope. After that, I think it is just right to see the kaleidoscope in this book. Because everything collapsed later... The problem with the characters in my opinion is that I vigorously portrayed Yuba, Nonoyu, and Yulu, but I just liked this character and died, and I just found a character to replace him. When he died, although there were warnings in advance that something would happen, when he actually died, it still felt abrupt. Death is not an unacceptable problem. The unacceptable problem is the vigorous portrayal of them. In the end, only Yuba can be seen as a shadow on the protagonist. The shadow is still very faint, as if they are white-skinned. They are obviously so sad that they have a kaleidoscope, but they do not see the impact on the protagonist at all. After the kaleidoscope is turned on, the plot is no longer as exciting as before. It completely becomes the protagonist's unique performance. The plot also speeds up and finally ends hastily.

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The rhythm is very good, and the plot is compact and exciting. I am 93 years old and have been reading books since I was a freshman in high school. I have been reading for 13 years. This book is one of the few fairy tales I have read this year. Unlike the short stories that make old bookworms boring, this book is very realistic and has a sense of pictures. The short stories revolve around the plot of Naruto, and this kind of book is very realistic. The style is to enter the real world of Naruto, which makes people unable to put it down when reading. I read it to the end in one breath. The only delay was writing about the second monster. I don't know if the author can listen to it. It's rare to find a good book. I can't help but want to type a few words to comment. I hope it can be helpful and encouraging. I have been reading books for so many years, and I probably won't write reviews for more than ten books.

Let me state in advance that although I ordered all of them, I jumped to read No disrespect to the author, but some parts are too uncomfortable to watch Let's talk about Yushi first, his lazy title is so wonderful Fully explained that there is only a wrong name, not a wrong nickname It's like Yuba said the same thing, he is really just a lazy dog Yushi has always been forced to act. He obviously longs for love in his heart, but he never takes the initiative to fight for it This was the case when he met Obito, saying that family love needs time and tenderness Can't you take the initiative? I will kill you if I get married! In fact, many things that Yushi encountered were not without a chance to be undone, but they were all delayed by him It was only after he lost the bond that he realized how important they were to him, and then fell into the abyss of revenge I really mourned his misfortune and was angry with him After seeing the rest, I couldn't tell whether I was angry, distressed or disgusted with Yushi. I still lamented His love is too reserved Those with a strong sense of empathy really can't stand reading this article, myocardial infarction I prefer to read sadistic stories, but I can't stand the way of this abuse Yu Shi looks miserable, but I can't feel his despair at all Because he has no hope at all! Author, do you know what despair is? Losing hope is called despair! Despair without hope is a piece of shit! The feeling of reading this article is like being stabbed by the author with a knife When it rains, a lone star of evil appears, and everyone who is close to him will die anyway The pain is painful enough, but where is the hope? The bonds that Yushi has established with others are either forced by circumstances or just follow the tide. There is no bond that he wants to protect from the bottom of his heart and absolutely does not want to lose. If he sincerely cares for him, what I want to see is tearing the most precious things to pieces! I read abuse articles to be abused, not to resist a bag of rice! ... Oh, I am so depressed. I am not happy with this article at all, so I have to vent in the comment area. Sorry if I am wrong. After all, I have not read them all. For the sake of full subscription, please don't criticize me. In addition, although the viewing experience is not very good, the plot setting of this book is really good. Let's look forward to the follow-up development.

It seems that relying on Ling Nai's death to open the kaleidoscope for the protagonist is no longer reliable. Let's guess who will let the protagonist open the kaleidoscope, Kikumaru?

I watched it four years ago when I was a junior high school student, and now I look back on it. If the plot didn't collapse too much, it would still be fun to watch. After the 350th chapter, the character design also collapsed. The whole team at the beginning was gone, and it was a new line. If the score is out of 10, I would give it a 7'

Already added to book list recommendation, please don't be a eunuch 👍👍👍

I've ordered everything, why don't I add more essence?

It's so fucking disgusting. In Chapter 270, all the character designs collapsed and Yahiko became extremely disgusting? Minato became the Hokage of the mission? It's really disgusting to watch.