Naruto Heroes Contest

If no one reads it, the author should consider changing the title of the book. It is not attractive. It is the same fan with the same common name as a few years ago, and no one clicks. I read this book after I read all the Naruto fanfics and really had nothing to read, so I updated the book very diligently. In terms of plot development, I feel it can be ranked in the top five of all books. After all, it does not follow the original work. The combat mode is no longer the Sharingan Byakugan Rasengan, and the power system is not unique to Konoha. In terms of novelty, it is much better than that comic. It is not logical at all. At least there is no similar type here. The writing style needs to be improved, especially the battle scenes, but at least the storyline can be told clearly, and the battle is no longer a one-move-second affair. At first I hated articles with female protagonists, but later I found that the stories after The Avengers were more interesting. The timeline is too blurry, the system has become a chat room only, and the carousel auction house has become a tool. I almost forgot that this is a system article Anyway, come on, one million will become a god

I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and this one is at least in the top three. There is something wrong with this data.

If you read this book, you will laugh to death if it is not funny, 😅

It feels like you wanted to write something funny, but you didn't manage it well. It felt forced and embarrassing, and there were a lot of complaints and complaints in your words. It's a bit fuzzy, like a child.

I read it all night long, and what can I say? The ending is not perfect, and a lot of people died in the end, but overall it's pretty good. The main character's IQ is online and he doesn't lick others, nor is he a saint.

This book is really hard to describe in one sentence. 1. While talking about Suna Ninja, I ran to Konoha. 2. The protagonist has the worst luck, the worst status, and the poorest 3. The system is close to disappearing directly behind it 4. The novice guide has not been written yet 5. The plot has always been Konoha, which makes me vomit blood 6. The language is all funny, gags, northerners Only then can you see 7. Points, talents, and redemption are all very loose 8. The plot has never been advanced and has been just a daily routine 9. The heroine suddenly changed into another man 10. There is no description of the passage of time. How many tens of millions of words will be written in 5 years?

As expected, I still prefer the style of the new book.

Very nice. Alas, I watched it all night without realizing it. Although many are not rigorous, this result is not worthy of it. Come on, author.

A very rare multi-travel game. I collected it first.

After reading the full text, I have an unexpected, reasonable, O. Henry feeling. It's very interesting, I still want to think about it after reading it.

Wear more! ! ! Finally found it! ! !

The heroine of Youyouzi, the protagonist is afraid that she will be beaten to death by Zi Ma

Support, encourage and encourage each other!

If this book was written rigorously, the subject matter would have been very good. There is something wrong with the introduction of the book. There is nothing wrong with the author's writing style.

I heard that the author has a very good attitude. Collect and reward first. Come on!

Author, are you planning to release a second part? If there's going to be a second part, please make a point here. I'll go see it then.

Why is fanfic in fantasy? ?

I think it's pretty good, no need to cut it!

This book is very good, why do you recommend it so much? . .

I haven't finished it yet, but it's quite interesting and the plot is not sluggish, especially the supporting characters, such as their angles, are quite interesting. But the heavy description of the characters will naturally be closer to the author's point of view. For example, the character of Rasa is too extreme, such as his stubbornness and self-esteem during the pseudo-World War II. However, looking at the timeline, Rasa did not become a Kazekage at that time and was quite powerful. Although pride is inevitable, the author wrote it in a weird way, giving Rasa the feeling of being stupid. Regarding the emotional line, I don't know if it is due to the limitations of "Internet writing", but I feel that if the results are the same, it will be too long to write about the female character, and it will be in vain to write less. Besides, there is a silly old man who is controlled by a girl and is actually against the protagonist, so the reader's favorable impression of that old man will decrease. But it is still a pretty good Naruto novel, but compared to another good Naruto novel "Naruto: Scourge" that I personally feel is almost too messy in terms of combat power. First of all, it is unavoidable that it is related to the system, and it has a common problem with system novels. It has no concept of currency and the prices in the system store are arbitrary. When the protagonist says that he is short of points, he will be short of them immediately. If there is no shortage of points, then he will not be short of them. The same is true for techniques such as the Earth Floating Technique. But to talk about the benefits, the author must be the author who has the best foreshadowing in Naruto novels so far. It also reflects the author's unique understanding and summary of the Naruto world, making the time traveler in the article truly change the world without violating the rules.

If you can't beat others, join and become their big brother

There are more than two hundred pictures... Who does the protagonist like?

It was very interesting to write in the early stage, but it was a bit unsatisfactory in the later stage maybe because the results were not very good. Overall, it's pretty good. I'd give it a 4.5 Out of five.

The little rubbish article about wearing more clothes, you can read it yourself to see how poisonous it is!

`The supporting characters are also so distinctive, so interesting, good-looking, so beautiful.