Ninjas Should Wear Meaty Costumes

The book is very good (maybe a bit boring in some parts) but very interesting. But the author didn't add more updates, which made me feel uncomfortable. It's not enough to read. It's not complete enough. It's been a long time since I've read such an interesting novel. It's not enough to read. It's so uncomfortable. I hope the author will add more updates or something.

This book is so ridiculous, I like it so much

I have found the biggest reason why this book is not popular: a thoughtful system It is estimated that 90% of readers have been discouraged because of this.

I feel it's even better written than the previous book. I'll keep following it.

I want to see the protagonist use the Noxian Guillotine

How should I put it, the author still has some ideas and writing style, but the last dozen or so chapters have really failed to arouse my interest in following it. Originally, the results were good compared to the previous book, but now I see less and less content in this chapter, and it's not without reason. From the moment enemies appear in the desert, the plot reaches a small climax. But the problem is that the author did not relax enough. The protagonist just finished killing a wave of people, and new enemies appeared without a transition in the middle. Some enemies may not even require so much space to describe. Such continuous tense plots can easily make readers feel tired, and the most fatal thing is that these plot arrangements are not interesting, making it even more tiring to follow. What the author is best at is actually the description of interesting interactions between characters. The scene that had a profound impact on me was the scene in the previous book when she was "chasing" Sanxiao in the rain. Not only did it make people laugh, but it also instantly established the characters of the two people. In this book, the relationship between Shiraki and A Fei, and the complicated grievances between the ninjas of Konoha and Iwagakure are also interesting points. However, the author gave up polishing these details for a long time and instead blindly pushed the plot, which makes people feel a bit regretful. Now the difficulty of acquiring skills has been significantly reduced, and the protagonist can acquire various fancy skills at will. What's even worse is that the protagonist throws out his cards one by one like a turn-based card game. Every skill seems to be awesome, but none of them can save him from the long battle. You have to keep playing new cards... This makes it difficult for readers to have expectations for these skills. Not only is it deprived of one of the fun points, it also makes people feel that the protagonist has no specialization and no characteristics. To write a good battle, you need either an impressive move or a convincing layout, but unfortunately the author failed to do it. After reading two books, it can be seen that the author's plot rhythm control is a weakness. After all, fans still want to interact with the original characters, as well as supplement and even expand the original world view and plot, rather than self-contained cheats and endless branch lines.

Ahhhhhh, not enough! ! ! This book is pretty good, and I like it (at least for now). Good luck, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

I read the introduction as "pulling out Uchiha Madara's fallopian tube", is there any way to save me?😅😅

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Sand sculptures never go out of style, you can always believe in sand sculptures

I haven't watched it yet. Is the heroine serious?

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He is ruthless to others and speaks well of the Holy Mother to the people of Konoha. Tsk tsk

After reading the previous article, I suddenly had a question. After being reincarnated, Suitou had clothes, which were the last ones he wore during his lifetime. If he had tricked White Zetsu into letting Madara change into women's clothes and wind up his windpipe before his death, would Madara be summoned and undressed by himself? This would change the ending.

You can still see it in the early stage, but it will directly explode the poisonous hair in the later stage.

Does anyone recommend some sand sculpture novels that are not as talented as this one? It would be best to be from a fan (shuhuangzhong) 😭😭

The timeline is wrong. Shisui committed suicide after Sasuke was born. However, the year Sasuke was born was the Nine-Tails Rebellion. The Nine-Tails Rebellion was also influenced by Obito. The plot line is wrong.

At first, Bai Jue's mother was too clingy and I didn't like her, but later she turned into a cat and it was just right. But it would be very bad if it disappears later. The part in the middle where Bai Jue's mother turns into a cat is my favorite.

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All kinds of saucy operations, making people burst out laughing

How did the idiot's systematic writing make me laugh like an idiot? Could it be that it has been assimilated?

I haven't read it yet, just reading the introduction looks a bit like Qingyu, the death-seeking ninja next door.

This book is very satisfying both in plot and character description. Ninety percent of the Naruto fanfics I read before were born in Konoha, adding plots and following the original works. But the author's book left me with no idea what the plot would be. Not only did he bring the characters to life, he also wrote his own style.

Now that this book is complete, can you still see it among new books? Very outrageous to say. . . .

It's over, I want to watch the time-traveling protagonist travel across the heavens

It's a great idea, although it's a bit sloppy but it's not a big problem. Mainly at the beginning, the reading experience of Bai Jue's Mother was too clingy and I didn't finish reading it several times. It will be much better to become a cat later. Highly recommended

It was an anticlimax, but the biggest pity for me was that I didn't get together with Nonoyu in the end. The two of them were really sweet, and I've never read a novel in which Nonoyu is the heroine. This is the first one.

"When someone falsely accuses you of eating something from him, instead of cutting open your stomach to prove your innocence, you should gouge out his eyes and swallow them so that he can see clearly inside your stomach." - Churchill

Good guy, this book is so ridiculous! However, I like it. 😜😜😜