Side Swordsman in the Steam Age

Actually, I found this book quite good😜

Why is there only one person named Zhong Shenxiu in this book review who keeps trolling other people's book reviews? If you don't like the book review, just delete it. Don't use your own account to troll others. As for why you think it's your trumpet, and you go around maliciously trolling people to lower other people's perception of books. If you still can't stop speaking and deleting comments, isn't that your trumpet?

Since I have been reborn in a new world, I can just briefly mention the past life as the background. The past life is mentioned too frequently in the article, and the new world is often described as a comparison with the past life. This not only weakens the reader's sense of mystery and desire to explore the new world, but also mixes the timelines of the two worlds together, losing freshness and fluency. In addition, there are a lot of setting words explaining the setting. I hope there will be more words about the environment, characters and plot.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that the author slowly unfolding a world is not only a shortcoming, but a very good advantage. I have been reading the book for five or six years, and my personal style is, I saw that in the later stages of some books, the pace is getting faster and faster, they only pile up concepts, and the text is dry (It is almost the protagonist who beats and beats to become a god, beats and beats to become a saint, and the protagonist is perfect) I just abandoned the book. So the author keeps the pace, come on!

Author, take a look at your homepage introduction on Qidian. For those of you who want to masturbate, Qidian also put other book introductions on your book last time.

Immortal cultivators... Immortal cultivators know nothing about aura. Who in modern times has no aura at all. You can actually breathe out the scent of spiritual energy in one breath? Do you smell the freedom of corrupt capitalism?

I asked the author to be the best man when I got married. His name is also the best man anyway. Please help.

It feels like it would be good for the protagonist to become a druid.

Can you update Salted Fish Warlock?

It is recommended to skip the prologue, otherwise you will be unable to help but communicate with the author about whether it is possible to cultivate immortality in ancient China. As the protagonist's golden finger after his soul has passed through, he can just mention the things like cultivating immortals in one go, such as ancestral secrets, special physiques, time-travel plug-ins, etc... I don't have to be verbose, the world of cultivating immortals is still established in the real world, does the author think there are too many "trolls"? The fantasy and weirdness of different worlds and the freedom to let oneself go are based on people's imagination. As long as the power system and social customs can be logically consistent and reasonable, no one will delve into it. The author bases the origin of cultivating immortals on the real world, which lasts for more than a thousand years. He also brings out the imagined immortals and earthly immortals in the history of various dynasties. Isn't this digging a hole for himself? In hundreds of years, the immortals have completely disappeared, and not even the legends have been left. You have built your golden finger on the so-called "end of the Dharma era, and the inheritance has not been extinguished", aren't you looking for trouble?

I really liked this book, but having to move the body after Klaus died was a fucking failure. Who is stupid enough to write like this? Is Klaus a genius or something? The protagonist is also a person of blood. Rubbish.

I read the new book... What the hell is it about? I read it because of this book, but it turned out that it was like a different person, and the character descriptions were just like a joke. Is he still a reborn person? Even worse than modern junior high school students, so why bother? The description is like that of an elementary school student, and it is also said that the soul of a thirty-something social person and a high school student are fused. Is the thirties offset by the high school teenagers, leaving only eleven or twelve years old?

In the first few chapters, the protagonist's character is not attractive at all, and he is a bit servile. The young master sees that you are fine because he cares about his own life. Your life and death are not at all different. You act like a fool and still want to be someone else's brother. You are really a slave to your life. If you don't change, you will really be discouraged.

My wish to be a dog will come true soon

Let me tell you something from my heart. First of all, I am currently fully subscribed. As far as online articles are concerned, the writing of this book is not bad. Secondly, I have deleted this book from my bookshelf and I probably won't read it in the future. Finally, some personal words from me: It is normal for this book to be stuffed with private goods. I have seen a lot of private goods, but I cannot understand your aristocratic supremacy. You and I and everyone reading this book are not aristocrats, nor can they be aristocrats.

The first piece of advice is to persuade others to quit! Don't want to see

Even lower-level nobles, illegitimate children will not be recognized in the West. And the butler is not an aristocrat. It's just random. The slave is the steward, and he can kill you. There is also the right of first night. I was so convinced that I became a slave and became addicted. And do you think you will trust your slaves after becoming an extraordinary master? If the male protagonist's woman will definitely be fucked by the master's wife. The thinking is too childish.

First of all, I would like to thank the author for his hard work While reading the first five chapters, I unexpectedly discovered the value of money💰 Chapter 3 When it was first mentioned that small silver cents can buy seven or eight pounds of wheat flour Later, it was mentioned that gold pounds can buy a ton of small silver coins. Wheat Flour Chapter 5 The second time it was mentioned that small silver cents were exchanged for gold pounds, it was 100 cents for one gold pound This created a huge difference One US ton of wheat flour = 2000 US pounds of wheat flour One ton of wheat flour = 2240 pounds of wheat flour And one cent = 8 pounds of wheat flour So 100 cents = 800 pounds of wheat flour ... According to the price of wheat flour One gold pound should be exchanged for 250 cents (U. S. Tons) or 280 cents (British tons) ... Even if the gold pound has a premium, it should be at least 200 cents... 4 Pieces of 50 cents or 10 pieces of 20 cents are suitable... Thanks to the author again for the above

What the hell, you can be a pawn for others, the boss will give you enough benefits, what can a swordsman or a noble be the protagonist? If you are willing to be a dog, the protagonist is an out-and-out good dog.

Chicken ribs are tasteless and it is a pity to throw them away. . . To put it bluntly, it is chicken breast, pure meat, no meat at all. . .

It was too slow to pick up, and many readers gave up the book before seeing the exciting parts.

Why didn't Salty Fish Warlock write anymore? Are you still here obviously?

Not to mention anything else, I start with a maid who understands everything, so she has some influence.

Come on! As an old bookworm, this book is really appetizing!

... Let me complain... Too much explanation, too little action... The system is too complicated... There is so much extraordinary knowledge in hand, so few supporting roles have been cultivated, and the formation of forces has not been mentioned at once... It is really too much of the historical legends, three religions and nine streams, and too little action for the protagonist...

I just found out about a new book. , Another one is also out of the palace.

Talk. Can the names of the two swords Wuxiang and Onikiri be changed? It feels very awkward.

Author, when will you be able to write about traditional cultivation of immortality? You, a time traveler, traveled to the Western world. Although it is okay for you to write like this, it is really a bit awkward and feels weird.

I am looking forward to writing a sword fairy with a cyberpunk background in my next book. The devil suddenly feels that this subject is very interesting, and I want to try to write it 😌

Why didn't Salty Fish Warlock finish the book?