The Resurrected Spiritual Master of the Side Sect

After reading dozens of chapters of this book, I was persuaded to quit because the protagonist is too simple, and everyone revolves around a simple world, a good dream, if you like beautiful things, you can read it, and the protagonist emphasizes the obligations of immortals from a human perspective, and those who do not work for others are demons! Moreover, immortals also have to act in the interests of people. What a wonderful world of novels, let's take a look! I still left. It's now seven o'clock. Nine times out of ten, I can't stand it anymore. I deserve it.

I just hate some novels about spiritual energy recovery that kill coins. They all start from the same starting point, and the protagonists all have gold fingers, but there is someone who rises faster than the protagonist. .

There are too many descriptions of the brother acting like a double protagonist, or a child who cannot be alone. I originally came here for the title of the book, but it turns out that it is all disposable. I have not even learned the low-level side training methods. I hope that I can answer the questions as soon as possible. Today's readers don't have the patience to wait.

Both of them have no IQ, which is worrisome.

What the Altar of the Heavens says is so awesome. You can extract things from the multiverse. Why can't knowledge items be directly instilled into the brain? What is extracted is actually a paper version (the holy water was extracted earlier and can be placed in the space of the altar. After you extracted the book, you put it in a box and put it under the bed. What the hell?). As a result, the protagonist couldn't understand it. He gave the skills to others to help practice, and the items and props were also given to others to use. What kind of side sect master? It's right to be a working emperor!

It's not interesting. Hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat. After reading the title of the book, I thought it was based on side sect techniques such as Netherworld Bone Flag and Heng Ha Erjiang. The external altar of the heavens is randomly selected, and both good and evil are included. Then there is no need to specialize in sects. If it is specifically selected for sects, there are still some who like to slow down the pace, or the kind of urban supernatural that revives spiritual energy.

I'm convinced that if you have a chance to draw a lottery, you don't have to wait until something happens to regret it and then draw a lottery.

First, there is too much nonsense. Setting this kind of thing is explained subtly in the article, rather than copying and pasting. Secondly, the feeling of refreshment is not enough. Or there is too much hydrology, and the front and back cannot be connected, making it difficult to enjoy. Third, the combat power is unclear. Can the Daluo Jinxian who can create the only world in the world (setting in the separate book) be compared with the garbage immortal in Shushan (the main source of the setting in this book)? Fourth, it does not respect the comic settings. Demon Slayer's breathing method is not something like the number of layers, but the proficiency of mastering it, one's own physical fitness, and the time of practice. As for other awkward magic modifications like chakra, I won't talk about it. Fourth, the setting is too friendly to outsiders. The protagonist really doesn't regard himself as an outsider. The masters he meets are all good people, and he even asks for tips. Fifth, there is so much inner drama that I feel like vomiting. Sixth, the secret book and method given by Golden Finger actually had to be taught by others, haha, a failure. Seventh, which of the heavens and worlds has the highest consciousness? It's like a joke. I feel very embarrassed. Eighth, reading a novel is like a tutorial on cultivating immortals. It is inherently fake and very embarrassing. A cultivation civilization that is less than a few thousand years old can barely be considered a demon. Is it embarrassing to insist on adding the original world history, the main world history, and the real world history? The flow of the heavens is the flow of the heavens, don't hang a sheep's head and sell dog meat.

The protagonist should either be more generous, give away everything that is no longer needed, strive for maximum rights, be the first and second in command, and accept his subordinates. Or if you cover it up tightly, you will get the benefits all by yourself.       ，，， The author quickly set a tone. If it keeps going like this for a few more days, I will have no choice but to give up.

First of all, the skills did not highlight the protagonist's advantages. After passing the skills to the person named Guo, he was not even as fast as the person named Guo. The protagonist also cannot understand the exercises at all, and has to learn and understand them bit by bit like reading a book. In the later stage, if there are no plug-ins to quickly help the protagonist break through his skills, it will basically be impossible to watch. The current situation is that the protagonist has no abilities even after obtaining the skills. The equipment is given to the eldest brother and the person named Guo, and the skills are also given to the person named Guo. His eldest brother and the guy named Guo are the protagonists, and the protagonists are just plug-ins for them.

Let's talk about the problems of this book 1. The three golden chapters are wasted. The opening chapter uses a lot of ink to describe that the house price is too high, the protagonist's job is miserable, and a series of content that has nothing to do with the theme of the book. It is procrastinating and boring. This is a very unintelligent beginning that will discourage readers. —————— 2. There is a clear gap between this book and the side door created in "Shu Mountain", and there is a suspicion of selling it like a sheep's head. Readers who want to see the style of painting in Shushan may be disappointed. This book does not include the "True Interpretation of Hunyuan Refining the Way of the Oblivion Saint" by the founder of the Wutai Sect, nor does it include the Five Poison Immortal Sword and Taiyi Wuluoyan, as well as things related to the Wutai Sect such as the Demon Killing Immortal Sword, the Hundred Spirits Killing Immortal Sword, the Qinglong Haohai Sword, and Lieque Shuanggou. The author writes a side story, and I can see that you want to read the content of Shushan to increase traffic. However, if you do not show these things for a long time, the readers attracted by the title of the book will eventually be lost. If I were you, I would write this. . [At the beginning of the lottery, give me something from the Shushan Wutai Sect, whether it is a magic weapon or a cultivation method. You have to calm down the readers first and make them sure that your book contains something from the outside world, but what about you? The mahogany sword and holy water at the beginning, what are these two things? Is this a side door? ? I thought you were going to write the movie about Lin Zhengying fighting vampires]

The practice in this book is just like a joke. The exercises can be changed at any time. All the secrets of practice can be found online. The government can't find the main character.

Legend has it that Liu Bowen cut off all the dragon veins (spiritual veins), and only Changbai Mountain escaped. In the future, when the protagonist becomes stronger, it is better to connect all these dragon veins, and then use the best spiritual land as the place to establish a sect in the future.

Judging from the current behavior of the protagonist, it does not appear that he is a reborn person at all. After being severely beaten by society before rebirth, can't you become more mature after rebirth? !

The author's writing of the main character in this book doesn't feel grand at all. It always feels awkward for the main character to hide and hide. If that's the main character, that's what the book is.

I came in because of the title of the book, but I didn't expect that it was actually a piece of cake that was being sold to someone else!

I didn't see the ten consecutive guarantee mechanism The protagonist encountered two incidents after being discharged from the hospital, why didn't he draw first later Obviously he couldn't handle the accident, but the protagonist actually saved ten consecutive games with peace of mind. There is a difference between the structure of the novel and the game. (It is not advisable to force ten consecutive lives) The protagonist is too young, so there is no need to write so many past lives. Firstly, it will create drama, and secondly, people will always remember that this is a 30+ person. (A 30-year-old working man will not be so young, and he will not make excuses. He handles things like a child.) I don't often forget about past lives as soon as I count them. I I came here with a side sect patriarch in my arms, and then I didn't see anything. There was no clear distinction between priorities. I was more likable than the protagonist 😅 (I looked at the previous ten or so pictures and didn't understand the status of the Taoism left over from the past in the setting. However, with the Xuanmen inheritance, there are ancestors of various side sects. No matter what happens, the protagonist will not be able to turn around)

The recent chapters have not been very well written. A time traveler in his thirties should not act like a "child" in his teens! 😒😒😒

The author's writing skills are still very good, but the background introduction is too lengthy and the daily routine is a bit verbose.

Your work is called Pangmen Patriarch, but it doesn't make sense that you didn't get the practice techniques from Patriarch Taiyi Hunyuan. I hope you can get Patriarch Hunyuan's techniques soon!

Since there is a fairy gourd world, it is better to give the golden lottery to the real method of this galaxy directly, or to give an immortality system to the ghost and immortal skills of the six dynasties of time and space.

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First blood! ! ! ! !

Why don't you try to use the three-dimensional mobile device with the Breath of the Sun, so that the troops have high mobility and a certain degree of lethality against monsters, and use the method of taking off the monsters with one blow to continuously grind the monsters to death? Moreover, the three-dimensional mobile device still has a lot of room for improvement. In fact, it is recommended to use some science. Energy weapons on the technical side, such as plasma cannons and particle rifles, can cause damage to ghosts. When paired with cow tears, ordinary people can see ghosts. You can also use the moon well to charge the gem temple in Diablo. The obtained magic gems can also do good damage when embedded in weapons.

The author is great. At present, in the starting point, all the heavens and the world are covered with inheritance from the Taishang lineage, preaching to thousands of people, and the descendants of Yuanshi are high above, creating the world. You are the only remaining leader of the Shangqing dynasty. It depends on you when we can resume the grand occasion of the Jiejiao Ten Thousand Immortals coming to court.

I couldn't stand it anymore, I gave up, it was so disgusting, the author probably didn't even have an outline and just wrote it randomly. At the beginning, he said that he bought a water gun to spray holy water, but didn't buy it. He didn't know how the ghost possessed him, so he thought he could deal with it with half a bottle of holy water. At the beginning, you couldn't even see the ghost and you were possessed by two people. Why do you think you won't be directly killed by the ghost? He went straight into the fog without any preparation and thought about exiting if he encountered danger. If he could exit casually, would others still die in the fog? All kinds of setting conflicts and out-of-intelligence behaviors are so disgusting.

Wutai is a side sect, but Patriarch Taiyi Hunyuan himself seems to be an authentic Taoist sect.

Not bad, very much to my liking

The last ten chapters have been boring to watch

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