Douluo Dalu: My Martial Soul Is Digimon

It's not like it was written by one person. In the first chapter, there is the protagonist's plan to deal with Tang San and others. Later, even if Tang San had murderous intentions towards the protagonist and the conflict between the protagonist and Yu Xiaogang intensified, he didn't even think of reporting the plan. Instead, he kept actively avoiding it. The protagonist gave the peaches to his family, but did not give out the money. Instead, the descendants of the school began to show off, exchange gold coins with great fanfare, rent a house and treat guests at every turn. Why are you hiding this from your family? You have the conditions to be a work-study student. Wouldn't it be perfect to change dormitories to avoid Tang San and others? In order to graduate early, maybe because he had an excuse to get a warrant, the protagonist actually blew himself up to level ten in public, regardless of the difficulty and impact of being born with half a level in three months to level ten. I have a group of friends who are equivalent to the Soul Emperor to help me. I want to take a personal leave to go to the Star Dou Forest. What kind of warrant do I need? The protagonist personally slaps his own innate divine power character in the face and sends himself into a whirlpool of trouble and danger. I really don't understand why the protagonist wants to go to school. The protagonist's growth path is completely different from that of the Douluo natives. Why hunt for souls if he can go to other worlds to break through the bottleneck? According to the protagonist's upgrade speed, the protagonist who graduated from Tang San Junior College may have become a god himself. I really don't know what mental state the author was in when he wrote the plot after the protagonist enters school.

Why write a chat group? Douluo went off topic after two chapters.

It's really dark for the sake of being dark. Yu Xiaogang specially visits new students. Tang San falls in love with Xiao Wu at first sight. The protagonist throws Xiao Wu and decides to die. You wrote that the protagonist invites everyone to dinner, but Tang San refuses to go. When he turns around, he feels that the protagonist isolates him and decides to die again. I really believe it. Then shouldn't all the children in Tang San's village have died long ago? ? ?

The chat group is a bit disgusting 🤢, The author can't write the character of the original character at all And the shock and performance of a native when encountering such a thing as a chat group. Can an ancient person encounter such a mysterious thing and be instantly absorbed like a silly netizen? Writing this kind of thing with a tilt of my head, I don't understand why I have to lose my character. When writing original characters, the degree of restoration is very important.

The hang-up is so big, the combat power is reduced to a dog

Personally, I think the chat group is a failure. If you want to open a Gongfa link, don't open it so big. The chat group can be traded. You just choose what is useful to you. If others improve their strength, you will be rewarded. Isn't this just a word count? How many times can a supporting character with a chat group improve his strength? Tens of thousands of words will be gone if each person mentions it a few times. Similarly, if there are too many rewards, the author will definitely forget to give them anything. Generally speaking, this kind of novel will definitely collapse.

Why not have some super popular and handsome Paladin types?

Just run away! A half-level innate person reaches level ten so quickly. What is your background and what are your trump cards? How do you know that others will not arrest you and torture you for secrets? What if others suspect that you have a soul bone in your body? You don't have any contact with anyone in this school anyway. It's the same if you are expelled. Why don't you just run away and apply for graduation to say hello? Are you specifically asking someone to catch you?

Don't give the jelly grass to the Qibao Glazed Sect, even if Ning Fengzhi has a urinary nature, it's useless if he gives it to him, he will still bet on Tang San duplicitously! The protagonist can just get the jelly grass, and if it doesn't work, he can run to another world!

The chat room is outrageous, why don't you use a hundred systems? The battle power is given to Xiao Gua, what do you want to do with Gua? Just tie the dog up