The Heavens' Mercenaries

How can you even finish reading a novel like this? The plot is no different from a movie, but it's written much worse—a dry, uninteresting story. It's utterly ridiculous.

... Dude, have you forgotten that the protagonist has telekinesis? 1000 Kilograms of telekinesis should be enough to carry the entire team of four while flying, right? Putting everything else aside, couldn't you even think of using telekinesis to travel?

The first three chapters are so bad they're off-putting from the start; even Shennong (a legendary Chinese physician) couldn't help them.

The power system is incredibly complex; just writing about the attribute panel almost took up a whole chapter. The protagonist's telekinesis was used by him like a pile of shit. Other people's telekinesis can fly, fight, defend, and control, making it as convenient as possible. But the protagonist was so powerful that he was left with only a half-baked telekinetic shield.

Whether the protagonist knows the plot or not feels completely different from the original work, with no changes whatsoever. Is there any point in reading your book then? You might as well read...

The protagonist is forcibly made less intelligent and turned into a robot who must follow the established rules, which ruins the book. Don't bother reading it; it's just making your brain run cold...

Time travel is something you can do alone. When traveling as a team, trouble can easily arise if anyone harbors any ill intentions.

The pacing of "True Feelings" is too fast. Basically, it's one world and one plot every ten or so chapters, then it's over and on to the next. It's completely like an assembly line, producing massive amounts of data. There's no emotional investment. These days, novels are all about making a quick buck, trying to get by; very few people put their heart into writing.

This is the third time I've seen such a terrible book.

Decisive and ruthless, with no dragging out the plot. A great book!