The Daily Life of a Shut-In Pilot

There are not many new books to read recently, and I have searched through the starting point of professional articles and can't find a few that pay equal attention to professionalism and story performance. The opinions on this book are essentially based on the selfish intention of "I want to see better/more palatable novels." It doesn't matter whether the author accepts it or not, because in the end, the market will always give a score, and it is the market that controls the author's writing. Rather than accepting it, I hope that if the author reads the comments, he will be inspired to write a good and heart-stringing story. Start with the title of this book. The protagonist of "The Daily Life of a Dead House Pilot" is not a house pilot, and the content is not the daily life of a "house pilot" or a "pilot." In fact, the words "dead nerd" had the opposite effect: Those who wanted to read "dead otaku" were dissuaded by the words "dead otaku" and "everyday life" after reading two chapters, and were dissuaded by professional science popularization and the overly dark workplace. The introduction to this book has the same problem. Introduction There is no way to know the core selling point of this book. The word "nerd" keeps discouraging readers who are interested in hard-core professional content and workplace drama. The content of the book makes some common mistakes: 1. Sentences similar to "xx doesn't know yet, he will xxxx" suddenly jump from the story description to the God/author's perspective, pouring cold water on readers who are immersed in the story. The solution is simple, don't write like this. 2. Rigid workplace conflict. Create a negative character with serious stereotypes: alcoholism, violence, sexual harassment, and work as if it is to serve personal vendettas. The main objects of the pilot profession are one's own brain, hands and feet, and the weather. The common contradictions are that the brain cannot keep up with the hands, or the hands cannot keep up with the brain, or the sky is going to kill me. I can understand that if the protagonist flies and falls every time, the story will not be able to be written. It is essential to add conflicts between people. But... It's really not well written. The main reason is that the contradictions are not connected. The villain appears, the villain provokes, the protagonist slaps in the face, the villain makes small moves, the protagonist's crisis and contradiction intensify, what's next? I don't know how this MAX accident is connected with the previous contradiction, but here I hope something happens to Lin Lin 🙏 3. After the accident, he retired from the third company with shaking hands. To be honest, I quit immediately after seeing this, but I didn't delete the collection. It's like licking the sugar water off the outside of a popsicle and discovering that the inside is filled with steaming, spicy roasted gluten. What readers are looking forward to is to feel refreshed. They have just completed an incredible event, and they must not let others praise them first: Holy shit, is this okay? As a result, someone suddenly pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. It's like just being on the wealth list and buying a set of clothes worth 100,000 yuan back to your hometown. You have to roll in the quagmire for a while, wait for someone to say a few words, and then take out the invoice and say: Country bumpkin, you can't afford this set of clothes with your annual income. If you want to rise first, suppress it first. It doesn't mean that when you are about to come out, you should brake suddenly, put a rubber band on it, recite Duan Buddha, and then continue your needlework. Go to sleep first. Having said all that, I still look forward to the author's MAX accident. The sense of reality created by details such as balance is your advantage as an author compared to other idiots who can write career stories as youthful love. Make good use of this.

No, something always happens to the protagonist's plane. It will definitely be associated with some mysterious and mysterious things. Then who dares to let him continue to fly?

Chapter 123 of this book is preceded and followed by two novels

The key point is that it's so professionally written that I can't stand it anymore. I read books to relax, but it's so professional that it's uncomfortable to read, and the storyline is boring.

This book writes about civil aviation from the perspective of a pilot. As an amateur civil aviation enthusiast, this book writes about the things in the civil aviation circle and narrates these things through the main line of a pilot's growth.

First of all, thank you for writing this book. I am very interested in flying. I have never been able to find such a book in Qidian. This time I finally have it! I have some immature suggestions, please give me a thumbs up: 1. I feel like the development trend of white writing, please say goodbye, slap in the face is really embarrassing 2. Please be moderate in the special situation... Boss, I will not dare to fly again if you write special situations in the future 3. In fact, I kind of understand why you write special situations. If it is daily, according to my understanding of civil aviation, does it mean that it will be boring to write like this every time on daily flights? Maybe you can consider a series of assessments such as modifying and flying internationally to recommend it? 4. There are many flyers on site b who like to listen to ATC. There are several ups such as the interaction between the girl from the control tower of Nanyang Jiangying Airport and the training aircraft made by the hot cat. It is very popular and can be referred to. There is also a captain up called Xinyou Lingxi Grocery Store, which has various videos related to flying. It is also very popular and has reached 100,000 followers (Actually, in the United States, I am personally very interested in the part about learning to fly in aviation school, hahaha. There seemed to be a Japanese TV series that filmed the process of a girl becoming a female captain through a series of training and rotations. It seemed to have done well. However, it seems unlikely that this book will be included in it, so it will not be listed in the suggestions. I will give it a try The above is purely personal. If you don't agree with it, just pretend you haven't seen it I wish you this book will get better and better.

The recent plot has been a bit watery, maybe due to the resumption of work. But we want to see the protagonist's daily life of flying a plane.

This is the first time I read a book on this subject. Good luck to the author. It's very interesting!

This time can be said to be a foreshadowing by the author. What I hope to see is more characters, plots of the protagonist and other personnel. After all, the ground service is too boring.

You can write some situations where the villain appears, which would be more interesting.

The role of Chang Jianjun is really interesting.

Pilots mainly deal with various emergencies and bad weather.

The main character doesn't look like a nerd.

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

After careful calculation, it has been more than ten years since I read the novel. I still remember the first novel I read called "Zhu Xian", which opened up a new world. As I read more and more books, I discovered that there were batches of novels that were based on routines and templates, and my taste became more and more sophisticated. I couldn't stand such novels that were seriously divorced from reality and were purely yy. Reading novels, I personally think, is also a kind of practice. It can broaden knowledge, increase knowledge, or learn the spirit that the author wants to convey. So the author's soul must be solid or real, and I will not be able to read the white text like a running account. Although there are many beginnings of "Qidian Orphanage", a good author will definitely convey what he wants to convey. Writing flesh-and-blood characters like Zhang Xiaofan requires practice, but each protagonist who is artistically processed with the help of ordinary life or personal experience will definitely resonate with readers. I found this book while visiting a bookstore a few days ago. I saw it was about pilots and read the introduction. At first I thought it was from Du Niang or YY, but after reading it I found that there were so many professional terms, so I followed it until now. A very realistic novel, it also made me understand some things about pilots. It turns out that not all pilots are cool. From pilot to captain, they have to go through so many procedures, and they all climb up step by step to find the blue sky in their hearts. I hope the author's Xu Qing can stick to the image the author wants to create and do it step by step. It is a part-time job in itself, and it is also a way to vent personal emotions. Don't change your original intention just because of readers' comments. Admittedly, if it is too poisonous, it should be changed 😁😁😁. Stick with the rest! Although I am not rich personally, I support the genuine version and I will definitely subscribe until it is completed! Author, come on⛽

Author, you must understand that your book is of great significance. To be honest, it is closer to our lives than those of fighter pilots. Moreover, this book is probably the only one among all online novels that introduces civil aviation, excluding the overbearing captains like female fans. Write it well, and if you write it with a little bit of comfort, maybe it can become the next burning gyroscope. I have always believed that your purpose of writing this book is not to make money. In this case, you can write it according to your own thoughts. We are just readers. You have to present us what we want to see. If our words and actions can easily change your outline, is what you end up writing what you want to write? Is it something we want to see? I'm afraid it's neither fish nor fowl, and misses both. Of course, if you encounter some problems during the writing process, it is normal to ask our readers for their opinions. But you must always have your own ideas, and you must not hesitate to release the captain in the future. For us, writing style is not particularly important, but the style of your entire book must be clear. The first part is realistic, the middle part is dangerous, and the second part is more and more like romance. So I think what you wrote at the beginning was the best because it was very real, but then I kept skipping to the end because it was a bit boring. You don't need to please every reader, you only need to please the people you want to please. Do you want to write this book for those who want to see the life of the rich and show off, or for those who want to understand aviation technology, or for those who want to understand this industry. That's not to say that when writing about reality, there shouldn't be pretense and slap-in-the-face plots, but there should always be emphasis. You are so good at flying, and then your girlfriend is so rich, and your relationship is so great, it seems that all the elements are covered, like a pot of chicken, fish, pig, beef and sheep, will it be delicious? You want to explain that the protagonist chooses to continue flying because of his love of flying, not because of the pressure of life. Doesn't it mean that he must be rich and powerful to show that he has good economic conditions? Isn't it a necessity of life? I started watching the flying genre with the Dragoon Fighter, and then I watched the Falcon Fighting Falcon of the Great Kingdom of the Nine Heavens. I think the rifle is the best one. Although he is talking about less advanced models, it is very professional and interesting. His style has always been obvious, with a strong military color. You can feel that what he writes is a living soldier. He has his own consequences and his own past. He uses his own character to determine his own actions. But looking at our protagonist, I don't even know what kind of person he is. He is sometimes timid, but he is also brave in the face of life and death. He was particularly touched by what his girlfriend did, but at the same time he fell in love with someone else. His big heart seemed to come out of thin air, as soon as he started flying, instead of being honed by surviving in more dangerous conditions (the period of disappearance) like Li Zhan. Of course, Rifle seems to be full-time, so he must be more meticulous in character creation. You don't have to be so picky about the characters, but you must think about how the book will end and develop. What kind of thing do you ultimately want to write? Otherwise, even if you write according to the readers' wishes, the final evaluation will be just bad. The most important thing is that writing a book is just a side job and a hobby. Your focus should still be on flying, and there is no need to update too quickly. A truly good book is not judged by its speed, but by its completeness of completion.

I'm not very optimistic about the future of this book. As a pilot, if you want to show your ability, you have to deal with various failures and face various desperate situations; but as a civil aviation pilot, you always face various desperate situations. Although you succeed in the end, your boss, colleagues or passengers will all whisper in their hearts that this pilot is probably a disaster star.

After reading more than ten chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The main character's personality is that of a woman. She's pretentious and has a lot of inner drama. She's weak and weak. I can't stand her being a woman. She's a mother-in-law and a mother-in-law.

So everyday! Looks professional, but passion does not belong to civil aviation

Can you not make the male protagonist so mentally retarded? Later, I was in a hotel with the flight attendant at night. A man and a woman were alone in the same room just to drink porridge. Then the company investigated and didn't think clearly. Is this a three-year-old child? No vigilance at all? Furthermore, doesn't the heroine, a shrewd businessman, know how to get rid of the Yingying Yanyan around the hero? In terms of professionalism, it's quite good to watch, but the male protagonist's emotional intelligence is really poisonous.

Some people write about civil aviation pilots, some write about flight attendants, and some people write about air traffic controllers. We ground crews are so miserable, orphans and invisible people are really miserable 🙏

What I have seen on the shelves so far... Are all for professional training. The author has too many personal items, and this book is destined to be a niche. However, the author's writing and narration are very good. To be honest, it's like reading a campus novel. There's really no need to include the teacher's lecture content, and once it's written and put on the shelf, it's still classroom content.

The protagonist's personality is too faceless. I strongly suspect that this was originally a female video. The author forcibly changed the female protagonist's gender to a male and posted it.

Does the author know what a dead house is? . . No one really thinks they can pass the physical examination, right?

Which character in the book is your favorite? Go and call him or her! 🪖I confess, I like Mei Tingting😌

I have read more than forty chapters so far, and I would like to express my own views on the highly professional content in the work. As a novel, highly professional content can make the content of the novel more exciting when properly described. I am also happy to see all kinds of unclear knowledge and plots and settings based on this knowledge, but this does not mean that I like to read highly professional content without explanation throughout the novel. I'm here to read a novel. What are the three elements of a novel? Characters, plot, environment, and those highly professional contents can be components of the three elements, but they cannot replace them. So far as I have seen the progress, I personally feel that the balance of professional content in at least a few chapters is not good. Reading those chapters makes people wonder whether they are reading a novel or an operation manual, a textbook or a professional paper. On the other hand, when describing this kind of content, you must consider the scope of the readership and make appropriate popular explanations. These explanations can be interspersed, written in the author's words, or explained in a single chapter. In short, they should not cause reading difficulties for most non-professional readers (unless the readership you intend to deal with is professionals, then I have nothing to say). It is a pity that the author does not explain much about professional content in this book. Most of the explanations still have a certain professional threshold, and many times they are explained by the chapter. Some people think that it is good to read explanations by various experts, but I think this is the author's dereliction of duty. These should have been written by the author in the work, and now it is up to the readers to assist in the explanation. This means that the more places that need to be explained by enthusiastic readers, the more reading difficulties the readers will have. What if the book does not have enthusiastic readers who are reading and explaining? What if this chapter is said to be closed one day (it is not impossible), at this time, how should ordinary readers understand these professional contents? Check it yourself? Search engines are not omnipotent. It is quite difficult to find textbooks or reference books for many professional details. Some people will say that I am done with the plot. Why do you care about these incomprehensible things? However, as a novel about aviation, its plot advancement relies on this professional knowledge in many cases. It stalled. He pressed the xxx button to open the xxx system operation. He looked at the xxx instrument on the left and pushed the xxx lever on the right to let the plane cut the wind, turn on the xxx, and finally pulled it back to level. After this whole set of operations, I felt that WOC was so tricky. It was really too nervous and exciting. Those who didn't know had no idea what was going on. He did what he did and how it started and ended. At this time, proper explanations of various professional terms can completely solve the dyslexia of most laymen. And at least up to the point where I read it, in similar situations, the author's explanations are very few. As a layman, if I don't read the explanations of the enthusiastic experts, I will have no idea what a certain English abbreviation of the professional term means, what role it can play, and how it can help the protagonist. The chapter that impressed me most was in the thirty-odd chapters. The second half describes a process. When it comes to an operation process, there are five or six lines in one paragraph and at least a dozen English abbreviations. Most of them are not explained before or after, which makes it completely unclear what is being done. If this process plays a key role in the subsequent plot, then when I don't understand it, when I watch that kind of plot, it is like watching a black box. I only see the input and output and cannot see the process at all. The reading experience will be greatly reduced. In order to avoid some people who don't understand what I'm talking about and just criticize me, I would like to emphasize a few points: this article is a personal opinion and does not represent any group; this article is not malicious towards the work or the author, and is intended to provide suggestions so that the author can improve the quality of the work; I have normal intelligence, extensive reading, and restrained language. I have no intention of conflicting with others. It is recommended that you speak rationally and do not make personal attacks, otherwise you will be responsible for the consequences. above

Before 219, the rhythm was very good. I once suspected that if I kept writing like this, the author would have nothing to write about. After all, there were many problems during the simulation, but if I really followed it, it would be mediocre. It was pretty good until I saw 219, but after the accident, I felt it was a bit broken. Whether it was the protagonist's character or the villain's IQ when he came out and was slapped in the face, it turned from professional writing to novice writing. The character profile given to me by the protagonist at the beginning was average in terms of operational skills, but he was better at being down-to-earth and diligent. He had a bit of courage when encountering emergencies, but he would not go beyond the scope. He would still be fooled when he should. But after experiencing the baptism of 219, people have changed. It is understandable not to mention the fear of flying in mentality, but also understandable after developing a big heart. However, technology directly gave the protagonist a halo. The operation level was as high as the captain's level, contrary to the previous average level. When encountering an unexpected accident, no matter what, it can be solved. If there was luck in 219, then the description of the subsequent games is that it does not rely on luck, and it is a pure technical breakthrough. The protagonist's upgrade is too abrupt. It feels like I've reached full level immediately. Moreover, the arrangement of the villain and the heroine is not good enough, as if they were forced to do so, and the heroine is not portrayed deeply enough. How come they cover each other for the blind date, and directly commit themselves to each other after a bottle of wine. Moreover, the heroine went abroad for a year, and there was no description of how to communicate and enhance the relationship during the period. When she came back, she was still in love with her, and started discussing having children. The heroine is still a rich second generation. The rich second generation who was slapped in the face when the villain came out also felt like a fool with no IQ, no self-cultivation, and a stupid person. Are the education levels of today's rich children like this? How do you test a pilot's IQ... I won't complain too much. In short, I feel that the level drops sharply after 219, as if it is like a dive with both engines stalled. I could give 8 points before, but now I can only give 4 points. Let's see if we can save it later...

After this book was put on the shelf, it was like a different author😥

What I wrote in 2019 is the same as what I wrote in 2009. I also went to the United States to study. I don't even know the small apartment. It's like someone who never went to school. The protagonist in his twenties is like an elementary school student.

This book has ended in Chapter 118. What follows is business wars, celebrities, and harems.