The Great Nation’s Military Reclamation

To be honest, after reading for so long, I haven't seen such a tragic and melodramatic book in a long time. Even though you wanted to write a more realistic novel, as you said, it's based on a true story, I really couldn't continue reading. The first 250 chapters were all about building up Yinhua's goodness. Childhood sweethearts, innocent and pure, it was quite heartwarming.

You've traveled through time. Back then, the nation's millions of troops were short of a single guard like you? If you want to serve your country after time-traveling, but feel you lack the ability or power, then do something practical. Be honest with the nation and use a few verifiable precognitive events to prove you've traveled through time. Show that your ability to foresee many things would be of no less help to the nation than a million soldiers.

The beginning was fine, but it felt like there was no main plot later on. All the female characters were initially described as so beautiful and having such good relationships with the protagonist, but those relationships changed too quickly. The protagonist's first love broke up with him due to a misunderstanding, and then she suddenly died of leukemia.

It just feels like the protagonist wasted all those years before his time travel; his intelligence didn't grow at all, his experience didn't increase, women just pounce on him, he acts impulsively, and he squanders his money (especially on women, even their classmates)...

I simply couldn't bear to read the descriptions of the relationships between the three characters in the text: Ye Wancheng, Yang Geyong, and Ye Yuze. The era of Ye's father and Dr. Ye was from 1976 to 1986. People at that time had very high moral standards.

The author must have gone overboard with the prices listed; what kind of ship costs $30 billion?

I paid to read dozens of chapters, and because the earlier chapters described some aspects of the Production and Construction Corps, I thought it was alright. Although the author completely ignored everyone and there were countless plot holes that didn't reflect the actual situation at the time—making an eight-year-old child omnipotent and able to progress smoothly—I thought I could persevere and…

Some personal suggestions. The first 100 chapters were quite good, but the Tangshan scene felt pointless and almost unnecessary; it became a major flaw, significantly lowering the overall reading experience. What was the point of writing it? The protagonist's age is a given; if he helps, it feels even more jarring. If he doesn't, well, he gets criticized for being cold-blooded.

To be honest, the only flawed aspect is the protagonist's age at the beginning. If you had set him to thirteen or fourteen, many things would have made sense. Without those constraints, the writing and plot would have been excellent. It's a pity.

I'd also like to visit Xinjiang; does it have a military reclamation city? May our motherland prosper and flourish.