One Piece: Skycracking Throne

，，，， After all, the masses at the bottom are still the cornerstone of rule, and the attitude towards the masses at the bottom depends on the author's portrayal of the protagonist. I have just finished reading the manuscripts that have been saved for more than half a month, and the main plot of this book has begun. As a newcomer, the author's writing is quite good so far. Although I personally feel that it is still a little different from "One Piece Code" (the author does not mind ٩(●´৺`●)૭٩(●´৺`●)و), but I hope to work harder. Although the "Return" I am chasing has reached its climax (it is really fun to watch), my own selfishness hopes that the author can write a story according to my ideas as a reader, but the author still has to have his own ideas and follow his own outline. Come on. (P. S., I also wanted to write a book, but after writing and tearing up the outline, I couldn't read it at all and was so frustrated (´-ωก`))

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​After such a long time, a small gang has grown up in the West Sea. Even if you join an underground circle, you have to pay a price of seven or eight. If you look at other Pirates fans, the people behind the underground circles are just a background. The protagonist's early performance If your strength is low, you can't reach them. If your strength is high in the later stage, you can't look down on them. Only a wretched person like you, who grew up in the West Sea, will try your best to squeeze in. The key is that your growth is useless and you are the gangsters now. Basically, even a little bit of domineering color is gone. I don't think a small gang can cultivate many strong men. You have to know that the original navy has so many people, has been established for so long, has so many systematic training methods, and only has so many strong generals. If you are a gang that has only been established for a few years, even when Luffy appears, there are one or two who can match the combat power of the lieutenant general.                                                                                                                      I don't see any benefits in helping you collect devil fruits, I haven't collected anything. If you want to cultivate talents, I guess I can't cultivate them. If you want to develop the gang into a force, it is better to take the elite route. You are just something that can be solved by a bully. It is better to work hard to improve yourself. As long as a person has strength, are you still afraid that he will not have strong power? There is absolutely no need to create a gang to fight and fight when you are so weak. When you have the strength to become a lieutenant general or even a general, you can easily dominate the world's gangs. It is not so cumbersome at all. You can even create your own empire. Just tell me, why did you create this gang now? What would be of great help to the protagonist? You still have to use your brains and efforts to manage the gang, and you have to find ways to join other circles, balance the relationships between many forces, and be submissive to others. If you have the intention to develop this gang, you might as well put your efforts into training. Maybe you will become a great swordsman now. Do you think a gang founded from scratch by a weak person is stronger, or a gang founded by a great swordsman? Maybe the former takes 20 years to develop, while the latter can catch up in a month or two. In this world where one person is the enemy, no matter how many soldiers and generals there are, they can't withstand the dominance of a strong person. The only role of these little Lou Luo is to collect resources for you.         You might as well develop it yourself, wait until it reaches a certain stage, then find companions, find powerful Devil Fruits, then create a gang, and play farming style,

The protagonist puts the cart before the horse, his fruit development is rubbish and he has been wallowing in the gangs. I don't understand what the author thinks. In the world of high martial arts, strength is king. The West Sea is originally a gang war. What can you do if you dominate the West Sea? If you don't go through the ups and downs, you will be like Lao Sha. If you have time to not practice and run a gang every day, you are simply putting the cart before the horse.

The ultimate evolution of the green caterpillar? ? ?

Is there anyone like me? Looks like Rayquaza.

The last O'Hara has been written. Although my writing may not be very good, I will try my best to improve by learning from others and exploring myself, so this volume is more delicate. Later, the jumps may be stronger, and the panels will appear less frequently. At the same time, stories about adventures will also be described. Finally, I would like to express my special thanks to the readers who voted for me. Thank you. (Thanks to: Shui Pavilion, Crying Ye, Agents of S. H. I. E. L. D., Thousand Spirits, Qianling Qianhuan, Lao Niu Ping Tian Monkey King, Xiulan Kit, Smiling at Life, Writing About You, The Wind Piaoluo hgl, | Qing Di |, Meng Chenzai, Little School Scumbag, ~~ Book of the End of the World, Sake, Miss Nami, The Boy Will Live Forever, sos5 201988, Book Friends 170204115649901, Book Friends 161212164250496, Book Friends 20171009231056952, Book Friends 20180330135624280)

Who looked like Rayquaza at first sight? Come and gather here.

The second volume of The Wave of the Dark World has been finished. Many readers think that this volume is not as good as the first volume, but my level of writing can only reach this level. This volume is mainly to arrange a plot for the protagonist to increase his strength and form a good team. The main purpose is to lay some foreshadowing and provide reasons for the plot of the next volume. If you don't understand some of the content, you can reply below this post and I will answer the questions I can. (I won't answer any questions related to the subsequent plot) In short, I'm just writing nonsense, so you can just make do with it...

From the second article, we can see that the author is a bit ambitious and wants to write something of his own. But to put it harshly, you are not qualified yet and it is a thankless job. Oda is so awesome, I want to skip any of the flashback chapters as soon as I see them, but he is so awesome that I can tolerate the main character being disconnected for dozens of chapters. You haven't laid out the basics yet, but you want to create these radically original works, portray supporting characters, etc. The idea is good, but you can't control it, and readers won't buy it so easily. Originally, the setting and characterization of the protagonist at the beginning were very good, but the more I wrote, the more it became crooked. In the sense of writing homework, it was off topic.

After reading it, I would like to give the author a suggestion: don't promote the Kingdom of Flowers. The Arkham book is just a random boast about the Kingdom of Flowers, and it will lose its popularity. What kind of armed color is said to be internal strength, what is spread from the land of flowers, really licking it wildly, and the cheongsam heroine with original Chinese characteristics at every turn, really expresses his patriotic feelings to everyone. Whoever reads this kind of fandom doesn't know that pirates are just imaginary. Having your element doesn't mean it's your country. This kind of forceful transfer of reality to the two-dimensional world has no use except to disgust people.

Every time I walk past this place, I subconsciously think of it as Pirates: Karakura.

Looking at the title, I thought it was a Pokemon traveling into the world of pirates...

I don't quite understand what the author wants to express in Chapter 22. After eating the fruit, ability becomes part of your strength. Why do you have to give up ability and use the swordsmanship you have just practiced for a few months to fight others? It's like you can use both hands, but you have to pretend to let others use one hand. Especially after suffering such a level of injury from having her chest pierced. According to your statement, if Whitebeard doesn't use the fruit ability, he must use Congyunqie to express his strength? That's not losing your mind. What should be done is to try to combine abilities and swordsmanship in actual combat. Even if it is not possible to develop gravity swordsmanship like Fujitora for the time being, it is still possible to hold a sword in one hand and use the wind blade in the other. What you develop in this way is hard strength.

When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was Rayquaza Crossing One Piece

In the early stage, it was really poisonous and full of conspiracies. Could it be that what I saw online was a fake One Piece? If you like to write conspiracies, just make up a historical novel. Maybe you can adapt it to a TV series. A bunch of supporting characters have such high IQs, but Luffy's IQ led the entire pirate ship to death eight hundred times! Don't be too exaggerated, okay~_~

I don't know why, your writing isn't too poisonous, and the descriptions are good, but there's nothing that attracts me to read on. It feels like chewing wax!

The fruit is my biggest failure. I still don't know what the fruit is and what its use is! ! !

To be honest, using the underworld as the entry point and avoiding the main plot for development is a good starting point. (The original One Piece Code was really well written) But your content is really boring to read. I have seen about Chapter 120, ·The protagonist starts the chapter by seeking fruits and developing abilities. He has just joined the gang at the beginning and is afraid of being exposed without using the fruits. But after using the sword, I feel like I have completely given up the fruit (what kind of mentality is this?). ·These more than one hundred chapters are interspersed with mixed stories (what a tribute to Ya, the story of the sword Ya), and the weird names (Chen Yuanbei Ya~) look a bit embarrassing~ ·The protagonist's strength feels nothing concrete, and the hand This is also the case next time, either you write about IQ suppression (I recommend you read the One Piece Code, Eunuch has been around for a long time, I am not recommending the book), and if you want to write about a collision of strengths, I think the protagonist's strength should be clear to the readers, so that it can be enjoyable to read~ Purely personal opinion~

It's well written (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, except that the main character is missing and I feel a little confused. The other settings are pretty good and don't conflict with the world view. Come on, come on.

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