Starting from Fist Wan's Violent Beating of One Piece

After finally surviving the three golden chapters, the whole chapter collapsed when I encountered Xiaoba. Are you cautious about starting a fight? Very detailed? Are you worried that killing Hachi will make you an enemy of Rayleigh, a brother/eldest son who has no concern for you? Are you still worried that killing Arlong Pirates will lead to enmity with Jinbe? Then why do you have to attack Aaron's stronghold without thinking before doing it? Is your plot conception ability so poor now? The previous Conan book had a lot of ideas when it came to Naruto, so why did this happen in the early stages of this book? When you have to fight face to face, you have to worry about this and that, and the controversial plot is written in a mess. The original plot knows how to handle it tactfully. It directly describes the aftermath of the fight and the surrounding soldiers were blown away. Some of them died and some fell into the sea and their whereabouts are unknown. Just like Luffy later found Hachi. Isn't it much better to write like this in the original book than "this can't be killed" and "this can be killed"? Even if you were a little more rigid and wrote about Xiaoba's team going out for business, it would be better than how you handled the plot, right?

I really like reading it, but the updates are too slow. I have to take time off every now and then. If I don't want to write, just stop updating or start a new book. Don't waste time here.

Everyone is criticizing your original plot. Can you practice it in private? Coming up something original and posting it for people to see is very impressive, you know? Obviously you can become popular with your fandom, but why do you have to bring your original creation? I even pushed two books in a row I don't have the shame to push it for you. If someone sees it, I will be told that it is disrespectful.

Come on

Well written, the most beautiful part of the copy is the night of beheading.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun. I have heard that calves born in sheep pens will behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, but becomes tired. Isn't this abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues , great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing that makes you cry for the author, and there are six things that make you sigh for the author. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If not passionate, the actor's heart will not be touched. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who rarely updated, delayed updates, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, and were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and let future authors feel sad about it!

Has the author stopped reading One Piece? Why do I feel like I'm reading One Piece fan fiction from four or five years ago? The natural type has been withdrawn from the version a long time ago, and you still let the protagonist eat the natural type. Nowadays, whoever is famous eats the natural type? No wonder you are stuck in traffic because you are the natural type. All the bosses here are eating fantasy beasts, either green dragons or nikas. All the five old stars are phantom beasts

Fist is willing to beat up One Piece violently. Isn't the Chinese translation equivalent to "After learning Jin Yong's magical skills, I will kill and pierce the red pupil"? Mechanically, no matter how much you brag about it, this is only in the realm of fighting, so what about the numerical difference? As we all know, even if you see Akin busy learning about One Piece, you should understand that One Piece's combat system includes three major directions: numerical monsters headed by Haki, mechanical monsters headed by fruits, and unique skills headed by technology. Only those who have reached the top in both numerical values ​​and mechanisms are the real top players. Do you dare to say "defeat the Pirate King" by learning a set of martial arts from a low-level martial arts world that is far-fetched and regarded as local skills? Can you defeat Naruto by learning Quan Gulong's martial arts? ? 🤣

Let's collect it first, but I really didn't expect that Ken Wan can come and touch porcelain One Piece 😅 Why does it seem that Ken Wan's skills are better than One Piece?

There is an obvious mistake about the evil dragons. If you take the heads of the evil dragons, you can't exchange them for bounties at all, because they are Shengping's younger brothers. When Shengping agreed to become the Shichibukai, their bounties were already invalid. How can they exchange for bounties?

Your combat power is indeed very strong, but if your opponent uses supreme oppression + supreme beauty, how should you deal with it😏

When it came to Kaido, it was clear that Kaido would be written by an author who could foresee the future. It didn't matter, but the One Man and Three Demons sect was a serious Taoist sect in the Republic of China. Later, Tu Junfang joined Quanxing because their entire sect had sacrificed their lives in the anti-Japanese war, and the inheritance was broken before he joined Quanxing. You wrote that all the three demon sects of the Republic of China joined Quanxing and committed all kinds of evil. Isn't this pure blackness? Is the author conducting a reader obedience test?

It can be said that I have seen it since I was alive. The previous Siyang books were only weak in originality and the fan fiction was okay. However, the current books have lost even the little bit of spirituality they used to have. What a pity.

It's a question of whether Ken Wan can defeat Sabagi, but why come to touch the porcelain pirates? How powerful can such low-level martial arts skills be to fantasy? Even if a pirate's life is returned, he will be frightened to death by Quan Wan

I won't talk about the mental retardation of the main world. What the hell did Fulilian write? The Hokage has been practicing for so many years just to get you to switch camps, right? It really disgusts me.

At the same level, it can actually allow people to change their identities. You still accept it with joy and want to experience it. Damn it, if you put yourself in someone else's shoes, you are already on the same level as a goddess. Can't you convert others into explorers? How? She is the consciousness of the world, so she can turn you around, right? Can't you kill her and then take her as your own? What I want to see is a river of blood! The reason why I came to read your article is because I can't stand a little grievance. In the end, I was still fucking wronged. So didn't I read it in vain?

It's quite speechless. There is a big problem in the first chapter. According to what you said, everyone has only one life. After entering the new secret realm, everything will be reset to zero. So forget about those ordinary people or those with very weak strength. Who wants to go to the new secret realm again with a little strength? That is not asking for death. Use your own brain and think about it, which normal person will become that kind of precarious person again after finally gaining the power to barely protect himself. Don't get me started on laws or anything like that. People who have mastered power will never accept losing their power, even temporarily, because it means their lives are no longer in their own hands. If what you write is like this, then the state and society must have very low control over the secret realm. Don't talk about patriotism or anything like that. If you achieve a high position in a place, would you still be willing to go back to your hometown and be your grandson? It's impossible no matter how you think about it. And according to what you wrote, the country and society simply have no ability to have any impact on a new secret realm? Not to mention the new secret realm, the old secret realm also has little influence. As for those who can't let go of their family members, you can definitely let them come too. According to the settings you wrote, everyone will start from scratch after entering a new secret realm. And everyone shares a life in the secret realm and the real world. No matter which side dies, they will die. Then those strong people who fought hard to survive in the previous secret realm will never enter the new secret realm again. They will only guard the door of the secret realm, force others to enter, and then take away the things of those who come out. Of course, if the person who comes out is very strong, he will be invited to join.

You have to deal with the boring battle between humans and demons from 20 or 30 years ago, which is older than the divorce breakup trend, and the writing is also messy. The original book is also about the battle between humans and demons, but you insist that it should be a single-player movie. There are not many original characters. This is not a multi-player book. The number of original characters is unlimited. It's obvious from now on that it's not working. The descriptions of those invincible characters are as if they are mentally retarded. The second generation has exponential growth but they don't know what to do. Then the B king has an invincible mechanism and has been doing it for 5 years. The B of the first generation doesn't even know what he is doing here. He just laughs: Ah, my junior has rebelled, and then he has no role? The third generation rebelled as if they had no brains (actually it was because of your poor writing skills), and the fourth generation was even more of a clown. The four invincibles you created have nothing to do with invincibility, they are just four stupid pigs. Counting the protagonist, the invincible who actively accepts the hunter, you can make up the five stupid pigs 😅

I just finished reading the revised chapters 124/125. Before, I was forced to change my identity by the goddess, but after the revision, I actively allowed the change of identity. The reason is that his father is suspected of being a hunter and cannot let go of family ties, so he needs to evaluate the three parties (explorers, hunters, and demons) objectively and fairly. This reason is really reluctant. There is a certain way of picking up the bowl and scolding the mother, and putting the bowl down to scold the cook for being mean. Since ancient times, the fence-sitters have been the most hated, followed by the Virgin White Lotus. And hunters are exactly such a middle-of-the-road person. Secondly, sympathy or empathy with other factions usually requires the support of interests. Do hunters and demons give the protagonist any benefits or support? No. On the contrary, the explorer does give the protagonist status and other benefits and support. As a result, the protagonist has wiped out all the benefits and turned around to find another job. He kept talking about benevolence, justice and morality, but the reason was that his father was suspected of being a rival, and it was for the sake of family ties. Suspicious! ! In short, the revised content can be better than before, but the improvement is limited. It is still a failure and a poisonous point.

To put it bluntly, the author's ability to create original world views and settings is simply a mess. After writing so many chapters, the texture system of the original world cannot reflect the unique expressiveness and systematicness at all. Its only function is to patch the setting where the protagonist is washed out after completing the dungeon. This is the second dungeon. The almost perfect martial arts skills accumulated by the protagonist from the first dungeon have been almost completely washed away and need to be retrained. The ability to burn fruits is not even mentioned. So what's the use of your golden finger? Copy-limited gain experience card?

Shit within shit, the spirituality of Siyang's fan fiction has been worn away by the so-called originality

But the facts are there, one piece meets the future with the sight and knowledge style, the principle of the six styles is enough. The secret life return can also put the consciousness into the whole body to control all parts of the body. Even the hair can control attacks, speed up digestion and return blood, and the armed color can be released externally and destroyed internally. What kind of thing can Fist want to use? Name one beyond these, not to mention that One Piece has many monster physiques, Kaido, Big Mom, Whitebeard, Barrett, young Garp, and the previous generation Giant King and Loki

Tell the brother who just watched, run! If you don't believe in Xie and like Akaishi, you are in great luck, he will poison you later. A divine author who likes to enjoy himself

If a fan author tries to create something original, it will be a dead end.

If you can't write a group portrait, just write the protagonist. To create such a complicated world view, the result is that all members of the national team are making sticks, and Aunt Mei is a poet! It's this kind of situation where the main character saves the day, and the key protagonist doesn't have any personal charm!

Villain hunters will be rewarded a lot for clearing the secret realm normally. Since you have decided to use the extra reward to attack normal people, don't blame others for being killed. If you can always ensure normal clearance, others will not be able to find out that you are a hunter and you will not be persecuted. As long as you do the things of a hunter, you have actively stood against others. What qualifications do you have to ask for sympathy from others? Does this mean that while the hunter is killing the normal secret warriors, he is asking the normal secret warriors not to fight back?

Why is the author so merciful to the book review section? Although it is not fairy grass, at least it is more readable than 999% of the books in the starting point. It is a good idea to give some comments in the book review section a ten-year banning package. It is purely for the sake of trolling. You don't even have to give them ten seconds to survive. Author, you are too kind.

Abandoned, there are more and more bugs, the author can't write well about what you are good at? You have to do a whole job, don't pretend to have that nose if you're not up to that level

Although the stream is unlimited, it can still be seen that the author has added a lot of original private goods in it. Is it because original novels always resist the public? I'll be honest, your original content in this book is really average|･ω･｀)

As the title states, the level of the author's main world and the different worlds are obviously different. In the previous different world, the protagonist could go there, but the main world was completely filled by the protagonist, which is equivalent to a cool point. It can be seen from the author's hesitation in writing original works that the current level of supporting characters is still poor. This leads to the fact that the chapters with original supporting characters in this book are not at all good. The author should consider continuing to write the protagonist's solo adventure in the heavens in the next book.