Under One Person: a Hundred Curses to Enlightenment

Why do you have to go to a company? It's a lot of hard work and there are no special skills to hide. Isn't it better to make money in the world than in a company?

The male protagonist fights too closely, and every battle involves several pictures, which makes the viewer very tired, and because the male protagonist has no life cultivation method, he has to fight for a while with everyone, including the enhanced version of the three zombies, and the fight with the roadside one. There is no content that allows you to intuitively understand the male protagonist becoming stronger. You can only see that the male protagonist is spending more and more time. But you also said that you are more precious than you are more expensive. Alas, it is too tiring to watch.

It feels like the protagonist is 50/50 with everyone

It's well written, but I have no desire to read it. I don't know if I took the wrong medicine. There is an opera singer in this book of curses. I worked out a great dancer that day. Basically, the principle of its appearance is not to become an immortal. To put it bluntly, it is a technique, and it is not a brilliant technique. With the fate of losing your life at any time, practicing the curse technique, there is no way to cultivate your life. You have to create it bit by bit by yourself. Believe me, If you were just playing with fire and water, you wouldn't have achieved the results you have now. I don't think many people are willing to read some bullshit curse. As for the author's writing style, he would be a top fan author. But the whole curse, and this book is also quite interesting. If you can't write an omniscient protagonist, you can just write an indigenous protagonist. As a result, the protagonist who is reborn and knows nothing is really blocked.

It's quite interesting, but the name sounds too much like Zha Zha Wen.

The beginning of the novel talks about going to the Taotie Pit to obtain the method of dual cultivation of life. I read almost three hundred chapters, but there was no movement at all. I noticed something was wrong and flipped through the table of contents. Oh my god, the story begins at chapter 400. Everything else is fine, except that the protagonist often has left and right brains fighting each other.

It's almost 400 chapters, and the protagonist hasn't majored in Kung Fu yet. It's outrageous.

It's a bit like Douyanshen. I don't know if the author has seen it.

Investigation report: "Number" - 287 Investigation target: "Under One Person: Can Curses Also Become Taoist" - Male Protagonist - [Zhao Jiuque] Investigation Result: [Borrowing a Corpse to Resurrection] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: Time Travel Investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know the time-travel situations of travelers in this world in advance, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay on July 8, 2025

I posted it once before, and now I'm following the latest chapter and continuing to ask questions: Although Longhushan can support Zhang Chulan, I can't understand the author's design of Zhang Chulan's question, in which the protagonist talks about his past thoughts. In my opinion, the behavior described by the protagonist can be said to be showing weakness to Zhang Chulan, or it can be said to be licking Zhang Chulan. When he asks the protagonist, he has to answer: Whether he can join the company, why he takes action against ordinary people, and other questions are none of his business! If you want to use this to resolve the conflict between the two and make Zhang Chulan trust the protagonist from now on, then I would like to ask the author, who is the protagonist of your book?

How to say it? The setting of this book is quite good, the writing style is also good, and various details are well described. It can be seen that the author has worked hard. And he just borrowed the world view of Under One Person to write his own story without overly relying on the original plot. The author is also ambitious. But there is a big problem, that is, what is the purpose of the protagonist and what does the protagonist want to do? I have read dozens of chapters and read all the free chapters. I don't even know what the protagonist wants to do or what his true desire is. This makes the protagonist like a headless fly. He can only passively cater to conflicts and events and go with the flow. The author mentioned it before that the protagonist is looking for his way, but there is no sign at all. This is very fatal. Desire is the spine of the story. A story without a spine is like a piece of loose sand, that is, as the saying goes, there is no main line. If you want to write your own story but don't want to follow the original plot, then you must quickly establish the protagonist's desire. Even if you want to write about the protagonist's process of finding his own desire, you must also give a temporary purpose and then quickly reveal the protagonist's true desire. Otherwise, the reader will be confused and unable to read. Once you write out the protagonist's desires, readers will be curious about how he achieves his goals, and will be motivated to read.

It's so well written that I couldn't stand the other fics. I just finished reading this one in one sitting.

Have you ever suffered from five disadvantages and three deficiencies? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Pig's feet time travel, haven't you seen Under One Person?

11111, The square calls Shennong.

The book is very good, both the setting and the logical relationship are fine, but it is too long-winded. Every fight has to be explained from beginning to end, and the villain must explain clearly to the protagonist what he wants to do. I wrote three pictures of a fight and two of them talking. I really couldn't hold myself together. Could you please be more concise.

It's okay to use passages from Journey to the West to set up and conjecture about the protagonist, but you have to use a good scale and don't go too far... Zhang Zhiwei's mouth was spoken once in the original plot, and it was never used again. You wish you could talk about it one chapter at a time.        ，

I had an idea a long time ago. Aren't those curses just spells that rely on the medium to follow the cause and effect? So can we rely on a medium to reverse the cause and effect of the curse, for example, reverse the curse that makes a person lose his energy and blood every day, use his energy and blood to stimulate physical growth, and turn the curse into a gain?

After reading more than 300 chapters, I feel very good about the protagonist's character, storyline, description of battle scenes and various references to classics. Just one problem, the author, don't you read it again after you finish writing... I will give you an example: "The person walking in front is Tu Junfang. He is still wearing the slightly old dark gown, but his face is more rosy, and only a shallow layer of dark eye sockets is left. His eyes are clear and peaceful, no longer empty and dead as in the past. His face is not as empty as before. There is still the dead silence or fanaticism before, and the eyes are clear and peaceful. " Read it yourself and find it repetitive and wordy. What is the difference between this sentence in the second paragraph and the end of the previous paragraph? I need to emphasize it again... There is not much dialogue in the article, most of it is the inner activities of the protagonist, and it is the same thing over and over again, which really affects the perception.

So can Lao Zhao learn the Seven Arrows Book of Nail Head? The art of curse killing is really suitable for such a heretical wizard.

So far, it's all branch lines.

It can indeed be seen that he is immature and has enough knowledge, but one problem is the wording, and the other problem is that the knowledge cannot be well transformed into stories and pictures. I don't care if your water is not conspicuous, it is a bit conspicuous. Of course you can write your own story when writing fan fiction, but the relevance of your own story is a bit weak. At least after reading the Taipei copy, I felt that the whole thing was long and disjointed. I didn't continue reading after that.

If you have any folklore you want to see, or if you have any interesting curses, you can tell me. I will do my best to bring you a good experience. Thank you, office workers! /(｡･ω･｡)/ You can write any comments here. Office workers will read them when they have time after get off work!

Tianjin Wei Xiaotaoyuan is not weak. He can fight with the tiger-like brother of the ten elders, and avoid the Wang family's security to trick Wang Bing. He is not an ordinary person. Losing to Liu Yanyan in three or two games is too ridiculous. Can Liu Yanyan beat the little Vulcan? She was not close to her own life, but she developed her own skills in a short period of time. She was able to push the little Vulcan to the ground and slap her mouth. If you want to show that Liu Yanyan has become stronger, you can't just write it without considering her strength. It is too far-fetched to just write her combat power.

The writing is quite messy, but it's quite thoughtful. There is no clear main path, so it's quite abrupt to switch to another after writing one, but it's quite interesting.

It's a very well written one-person fanfic, close to the fairy grass level. The description of the situation is much better than similar ones. The plot is borrowed from other movies and other works, and the writing is also very good.

Author: Tell me honestly, are you a practitioner?

Good guy, book demon, tired of winning, is that you, Lao Zhao, Lao Zhao?

After reading more than 250 chapters, I just want to ask the protagonist when will he go to the gluttonous pit? Why are there so many things going on?

Is it tj? No update for many days