Rewriting the Technological Landscape

I've noticed that in Qidian's rebirth novels, the protagonists all seem to be obsessed with Muggle Penny and fawn over Jack Ma. Is it because Qidian was acquired by Muggle Penny, and they're trying to maintain their last shred of dignity?

Well written! I suggest introducing a capable assistant, ideally a 28-year-old business elite whose dream is to build a global corporation. This would allow the protagonist to focus on research and development. A few supporting characters could be developed in more depth. Keep it up! I believe this book will be a huge hit. I'll support it with my monthly tickets after it's released.

The author put a lot of effort into writing this, and many parts are quite good.

The protagonist is really selfish. Can't you tell the country about your rebirth? Isn't it better to tell the country about the future than to make a small fuss here?

All those who reincarnate and still go into gaming, I think they're trash no matter how many times they're reincarnated. Goodbye.

This author must be a civil servant; he speaks in a pretentious and unrealistic way, probably never having left his official position, which is why the plot he writes is incredibly fake.

I want to say that the internet is not the same as high technology.

I don't know how it goes later. I've only read 100 chapters, and I just don't feel like there are any exciting moments. It feels disjointed, with a bunch of main characters' monologues taking up an entire chapter. The overall experience feels a bit chaotic, like the author tried to write about everything but didn't develop anything well. The premise was good, but I didn't get the satisfying parts.

It's clear the author is a thoughtful and idealistic person. However, his writing style seems insufficient to support his ideas. Many parts of the writing are awkward, and the overall word choice and sentence structure are not very good. In short, the writing is too immature, lacking both refinement and interest, as well as grandeur and conciseness.

Sigh, why can't we look at things objectively? Returning to one's roots is a deeply ingrained Chinese cultural practice, but in that era, very few were willing to return to serve their country. It's true that the US blocked them, but you learned your skills from others—isn't that normal? Ten or even fifteen years ago, how many people tried every means to immigrate to Europe and America?