The Black Earl of One Piece

It's beautiful, but the language is poor😥

I read it for three days in one go, and overall the villain BOSS was very well written. It feels like when I first watched Bleach Aizen, I liked it very much. The biggest problem is that the representation of pirates in the book is not strong. Maybe it is because I want to create a three-dimensional sense of the pirate characters, but as a fan, I still need to retain some of the character characteristics of the original work. Ahem, I am a shameless prostitute and hope the author will continue to work hard 🤤😓🥺

Isn't the protagonist from a very powerful world? Why do I feel that he is very strong when I see a Keluo? He has been entangled with me for so long. I also feel that the world of pirates is better than him, and sometimes I despise him. After reading twenty chapters, I don't understand. Is it too slow to get started? Let the boss tell me.

Golden Ten Chapter has no highlights, goodbye.

I'm going to open a new book

The pain of chasing books, why do you need to see these good books so early?

I voted for it, and I think it is a book that suits my taste. It is a very good pirate fanfic, much better than those mindless and cool articles. I hope the author does not want to be a ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ eunuch.

I always feel that it's a bit strange. The protagonist never regards pirates as human beings. He kills pirates without blinking an eye, and he has no crime against civilians. He is a pirate, and his identity is a bit fragmented (it's not that pirates kill civilians, but isn't the image of the protagonist a chaotic evil one? Why is it always highlighted that he doesn't kill civilians very much). Also, I always feel that the protagonist is weak, although there are He has a lot of knowledge reserves and looks very strong, but he still relies on hostages to escape time and time again. If the author wants to highlight the protagonist's strategy, the protagonist often seems to be very brainless, because I always feel that the protagonist has a sense of superiority to the middle and lower class people, but he still insists on fighting with them. The above are some of my personal opinions. I hope the author will write better and better.

Just have a casual chat. Congratulations on the release. As a reader, I have been waiting for a long time. I started with Thor. It was recommended and I saw it. After reading it, I thought it was good, so I kept chasing it, and I have been chasing it until now. Write as you like, and I would also like to give some advice to Dashu. Don't feel pressured. If you owe more, pay it back slowly when you have time. Personally, I prefer to read the results of the author's serious conception, rather than chapters rushed out for extra updates. Also, you must pay attention to your health. After all, you are not a full-time writer. Dashu has his own job, so you must pay more attention. To put it very selfishly, if we are sick, we will not have to read it. Finally, I also wish Pirates: Black Earl gets better and better.

They don't even send a notice when a new book is released. If you don't have a book shortage and look for new books, you won't even know about it.

[Opinion Collection Post]/[Single Chapter Tucao Post]/[] Give me some feedback, please, otherwise my coding hand will keep shaking. Ten days and a half later, I suddenly remembered, yes, I haven't read the comments yet. I used to read them on the webpage, but now I can't read them on the webpage. After reading everyone's comments, I realized that there were indeed some problems with A Way Out. Dashu spent two or three hours deleting, deleting, modifying, and editing before I came up with a somewhat satisfactory case and uploaded it when I got home from get off work. I'm very sorry that I didn't handle it well. I'll try my best to save it, but it's probably very difficult. I've already written it to 66. There are two issues that Dashu feels it is necessary to talk about. 1. Too much planning in the early stage 2. I couldn't help but start to get frustrated These are two problems that Dashu is well aware of. Character development requires plot, and the plot has ups and downs, and then ups and downs... Well... I couldn't help but write a little more planning. After this much... I couldn't help but start to get frustrated. I have deleted the 6 chapters coded in the software from the local to the cloud. I hope this can inspire me to get rid of my bad habits... Right? Well, that's it. I hope everyone can gather their opinions here so that it will be easier for Dashu to examine himself.

This novel is like, I am so awesome that I can break the dimensional wall, but I almost died after trying all kinds of tricks on Crow

How many people are here, are you not watching?

Actually, it's dark when it's dark. . Don't force justice to be more comfortable. It's high-sounding and righteous. Does the protagonist really deserve to die for killing so many people? Isn't there an innocent person among so many navy? Why do you have to create a fig leaf for yourself? They are all the same in the first place. . 😰

Apart from this one, which is the strongest Pirates fanfic?

When I read Chapter 6, you said you killed the doctor to hide your identity, but the doctor didn't report you, and you killed him, and then you left. So what was the point of killing him? ? ?

I've read chapters 3-4. Why do you call me Xiao-sama, Kaido-sama, when you're already one of the four emperors? Why don't you call Xiao-sama, Kaido's dad, better? ? ?

Do you like it or not? Go away if you don't want to watch it, I don't want to watch it anyway.

While talking about how naughty the protagonist was before, he didn't even know that he was being plotted by others. Logically speaking, his scheming shouldn't be any worse than his previous status, right? The power system is also crumbling. I want to make the protagonist's moves very bad and at the same time I can't beat anyone, so I can only grind slowly. If I can't grind the opponent, I will start to talk loudly. If I can't beat the opponent, I will give up. First, I almost killed myself when I beat Crowe. Then I switched from shotgun to cannon, and I still felt that I was being abused. I felt that the increase in strength was of no use at all. Anyway, I feel that the setting is good, but the author suppresses the protagonist's abilities and IQ one by one under the guise of a cool setting. This is really the biggest poisonous point of this book... Of course, if there are corrections after it is released, it will be saved, but for now I can't bear to retreat...

The character design is quite exciting, and his original identity was one of the Ten Saints. Necromancer, eh scholar? Then you have to create various low-cost spells in the new world. Isn't that what it is? It's good to get familiar with it again. The development mentioned above is a waste of character design. Moreover, the Ten Saints, scholars, praised Locke and Mengka in order to flesh out the passerby characters, but ended up being cheated. Ten Saints, what a noble identity, and then go around taking revenge like a villain for trivial things? You have to be decent and be honest, isn't it better to stay calm and regain your strength first? You also jump in front of a mole and try to die, thinking that you can't die, so you can gamble on other people's characters? Where is the brain? It was originally said that the protagonist is a scholar. Killing innocent people indiscriminately? You, the protagonist, might as well be set up as a villain who stole the Code of the Undead and was killed and traveled through time, at least it wouldn't conflict with the character. Obviously, we can just go to sea, but if the navy leaves the East China Sea, we will kill the pirates. We must panic and take revenge. Ten Saints? A lot of them are like gangsters who get the power by hook or by crook. Leave the navy and go around killing pirates. Is it uncomfortable to silence them? I can't understand the idea of ​​killing navy soldiers and being afraid.

In the early stage, I was confused. Pig's Foot boasted of his strategy but ended up jumping into a pit. They said that a random dog in the East China Sea could not catch him. However, wherever there was an ambush, there was Pig's Foot. He was beaten in a miserable state, and his honey juice could not resist Garp. To be honest, when he met Garp in the early stage, he was definitely killed before he could even react. There are so many bells and whistles. Pig's Foot might as well be a random dog in a place to regain its strength before coming out. Also in the early stage, when you meet a minor character casually and say that others are not simple, what do you want to express? The supporting character you wrote has an IQ? But generally speaking, the author uses the masterpiece to follow his own path and express ideas that are different from the author. The author's writing style is witty, the control of the plot is reasonable, and it satisfies the reader's pretense mentality. There are many plots of abuse of food, but it does not seem rigid and repetitive.

After reading it for a long time, I couldn't figure out what the author was writing. I felt like the author was just trying to enjoy himself.

The style of this book is completely different from the previous ones. It is very interesting to see various original characters saying various proverbs. And is it necessary to raise your hand to everyone you meet? And Na Mina, I wasted a long time writing and ink and didn't take it with me, and there wasn't enough time. Don't you have the final say on whether it's enough? What are your plans for the future? Let Nami board the spaceship with the original, and then snatch it back? What's the point?

I feel like this book was written by two people exactly like the previous one, with all kinds of inexplicable and strange magical plots.

Rubbish novel, don't read it. I got addicted to the poison in chapter 50. I relied on talking to escape and lost my wits to survive. It was so funny. If I was seriously injured and escaped, I wouldn't be able to survive. After all, it's only 50 chapters. It's impossible to level up too fast. I rely on talking to escape and lose my wits and was released by the navy. How ridiculous is that? You can travel through time and become a celebrity. Bye, rubbish novel, giant poison.

I can't understand (#-.-), The author's many inexplicable plots are annoying and disgusting

Except for Thor, the authors of other books must integrate other systems. Then if you write about pirate backgrounds, wouldn't it be nice to write fantasy by yourself? The protagonist gives people the impression that city people look down on country people, and there is no fandom at all.

Only sand sculptures can read this, what the hell is it written about?

There is no big problem with the writing of the book, but the protagonist is a headless fly. He does not have a goal to implement, at least not when he becomes the new Yonko. Furthermore, the protagonist is set to be in the evil camp and separated from human identity, so he can only accept humanism. Those who are neutral or kind-hearted should not enter. Secondly, there is a problem with the author's early setting. I said before that the protagonist takes the initiative to cross and says that the right way is right. I don't know what this means. If it is implying that the protagonist is looking for a way home, then such a setting is purely superfluous. The protagonist is an evil camp. A mage who is no longer a human being is no longer a human being. There is no home left, and China on Earth cannot tolerate such an existence as the protagonist. So I don't know if the author will change the route later, but my evaluation of the first one or two hundred chapters is valid. If it is changed later, it will be a bigger failure.

After reading Chapter 23, the protagonist found an excuse to kill all the navy branches. If it was for strength, there is no need to anger the navy like this. After reading Chapter 50, he even used the author's aura to give the protagonist a slap in the face to escape. What if it was for revenge or justice? It seems that the only explanation for the protagonist's double standards is that he feels a bit neurotic and anti-human. There is a big difference between evil law and chaos. Of course, the author's advantages are still very obvious. His writing style is also very good when he is not making embarrassing jokes, and the subject matter is also very attractive!